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Finally back at the village! Thanks for the update!
Well I have to say that that spider got pound into the ground.
puns intended![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
After reading the author's note, I started to wonder about these imprisoned stallion slaves. One's first instinct might be to free them, but after spending their lives being treated as brainless animals, it's likely that's what they've become.
to wHere
matTer
Don't close a quote when continuing with the same speaker in the next paragraph.
Breathe is the verb and breath is the noun.
Close with a period.
Another period.
I shouldn't have to say.
Have Every... You also have 'spear bearer' lower cased in other uses. I'd recommend sticking to that one as the term doesn't seem formal enough to warrant capitalization.
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them. They
was FAR larger
having beEN
lashED
pantED
Okay here's a sample of me and Peers talking on IM the other day.
Peers-I just started it and I'm already enjoying.
I think you'd like it too.
Omg, there's an M&M ship. Lmao
Gentlehoof-rare
unless its mac and brier
Peers-Morning and Mountain
Oh, I didn't mean male/male
I was referencing Morning and Mustard.
Gentlehoof-oh you did that on purpose!
Peers-I didn't, actually. I keep forgetting male/male shipping is a thing.
Gentlehoof-how can you forget what m&m means!!??
Peers-Because Mustard & Morning. I named their ship after the candy.
Gentlehoof-I am so posting this for others to read
Peers-Do it.
Gentlehoof-I will!
Peers-Good!
A kanji based system, oof, that's going to be a pain in the flank later. Much harder to learn than a phoneme-based system.
A bit too comma-loving, aren't you?![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
But it was great to see this update! Even though something happening to the village was predictable (to me at least). I wonder how many casualties have there been in total to the spiders though - that fight wasn't pretty even if the village won.
Also, Starless really enjoyed seeing Ground's prowess, didn't she? Yes, feel the power!![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
... I just imagined Ground flexing and screaming "POWEEEEEEEEEEEER!" in Terry Crews' voice
You know, I've been thinking...
Ground Pound and Starless are very much being hinted at becoming a couple.
Ground is a very strong stallion, who probably possesses very strong earth pony magic.
Starless has some nice magic herself, and I could see her naming a foal she has with 'Star' in their name as a kind of heritage thing.
And STARSWIRL does seem like a nice name for a unicorn foal colt of theirs...
>_> Hmmmmmmmmmm
love how star is swooning over ground xD, i can't help myself being a fan girl over these two pairing together lol. Also binged read this entire fic today and can't help but want moar!! <33 so good
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I'm glad you enjoyed my story and characters so much, I've put a lot of time into it and them. I release new chapter about every two weeks or so and the last chapter release was just last Sunday, so you're going to have to wait for a bit for the next one.🦄
Just a word of advice for when you're having one character speak over multiple paragraphs is to always have opening quotation marks at the beginning of each paragraph, and closing quotation marks when they're done talking.
Like this:
"First paragraph.
"Second paragraph.
"Third paragraph."
A tradition still common in the time of the show.
They arrived home! And they invented armor and better weapons! I love it!
Hopefully they haven't lost too many casualties.
Also, that is probably why Celestia is still afraid of spiders:
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Small question: There was another pegasus with them. The one with the fear of the unicorns. Is she still with them? (Forgot the name. And I didn't found her in the character sheet.)
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The other pegasus was Flutter Fly. She went back to her flock when the group departed for home. Don't worry, they'll be seeing her again.
Looking forward to the next chapter this story is amazing !
holy moly these ponies are bad asses
Grand vista
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Really! Oh man. I thought it was mesa for a long time. Hmm, Vista is better. I'll have to go through every chapter now and find any time I used Mesa. Most of the time I just called her Grand, though sometimes I called her Grande with a e.