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Ha! First to post!
Story is getting boring as all fuck. It started off fine and now it feels like a story written by the people who bitch about movies not including the life stories of every single side-character. Also feel sorry for all the stallions that are stuck being subservient to the mares. Every choice you make shouldn't be based on emotions and feelings. Don't withhold tribute cause you'll hurt some ponies? Life isn't fair, nobody has the RIGHT to a happy ending. Giving into the Unicorns demands for tribute just gives them more power over you and tells them that you'll bow to any other demands they give.
First to post? You in a race with someone? And, if so, who? I need more fic to read. Really liking this story by the way. Slice of Life plus Adventure and Action and Mystery. Avarice and Radiant's part was definitely my favorite. I'm already envisioning all the ways that's going to go spectacularly wrong and it is glorious!
So, I'm trying to figure out who avarice is in the pantheon. Is she a draconequus? Yay mustard!
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Yes. She is Discords mother. She was imprisoned within a large crystal in the heart of a volcano by Bountiful Wellspring for stealing the sun and moon and wrecking the natural cycle that moved them across heavens.
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Well there's a neat little thing you can do that will solve any further problems.
Stop reading it. Really it's THAT simple! You don't like a thing. STOP LOOKING AT THE THING. Easy!
You're also the one who constantly whines about Mustard and Morning being genderswapped. You clearly aren't having fun anymore. So just go. The rest of us are enjoying the story and will stay.
It's late, wasn't really looking for errors, but I noticed one anyway:
as 'he' ran.
Kinda curious about which element Radiant has
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Don't worry about him. He and others can have their own opinions, it doesn't really bother me. I appreciate the defense though, so thank you.
Answer to the next post about what Element Radiant has. It's Ash's element that was taken by the spider. She found it next to its body and kept it.
I'll fix that little typo tomorrow. Its really late and I just had a really good write on the next ch.
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It's not really "Oh no! I must defend this story!" It's simply that I'm sick of people who seemingly hate something, yet continue to watch/read/play/etc the thing and then go to where people talk about said thing and do nothing but bitch about it.
It was happening with pony a lot. I'd go to a message board, or chat about the latest season, and one would keep coming in, do nothing but rant about how terrible the show was. Yet they KEPT WATCHING IT.
I'm sorry but if you hate something that much. DON'T WATCH IT. It's fine to have an opinion. It's fine to not enjoy something, but then why in god's name would you continue to subject yourself to something you aren't enjoying? It makes no damn sense.
Instead of consuming something that only makes you upset, go consume something that doesn't.
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I like how you're addressing the fundamental flaws in unicorn society and how they're cramping plans to attack them.
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All things considered, that birth out in the middle of nowhere all alone was pretty uneventful.
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shiNing
got closer
Period
as HE ran
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as he raced across the ground with Clover Wink, Dandelion Fluff, and his mother just behind him - Clover Dance?
the new foal hits the ground (that is horse slang if you don't know) and we find out more about the Unicorns.
a vary good chapter i love it.
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Oh, I agree. If they don't like it, don't read/watch/listen, to it. Those who complain about something, but keep using it are a strange form of hypocrites. Its a harsh word, but it fits. Some people just can't help it I guess. They have to touch the hot-wire fence, and when they get zapped, they complain and touch it again.
I still remember the last time you had that epic row with him and I was afraid the message board would be turned into a war zone again. But all's good.
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And now there is just one more foal to go. Rarity's bloodline.
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Nice catch.
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Hmmm, could that be Starless's foal? We shall see...
Whew, that took some time! I had forgotten parts of the story and had to go back a chapter to figure out what starless did to get dark mad. So many intertwining stories, it's hard to keep track but I do love a deep, living narrative. So few authors explore the side stories with such depth and scale. In this, I'm relying on you for that fix and you make the good stuff, let me tell ya.
I hope everything is going well in your part of the world. Exhaustion can really kill motivation if you don't have time to recover. Don't forget to try and get some good old nothing done sometimes when you have time to indulge. Just sitting back and maybe calling someone you haven't talked to in a while to catch up or even just drifting in and out of a few naps in the sun can have some strong therapeutic effects.
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You know. I kind of have trouble remembering things in HL myself and have to go back to look things up, mostly names thou. Side characters are always the most overlooked, I think. Some of my favorite MLP episods, is when they focus on a side character and we learn something about them. If I was just to focus on Celestia and Luna in this story, it would have been over a long time ago.
I don't know if you read the blog I posted about the delay, but it explains what was happening. Mostly it was work that was getting in the way, and I was only getting about an hour or less of writing per night. My scheduled should be returning back to normal, soon.
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Awesome to hear things are going to get less hectic for you. A story like this one tends to do well when you can at least get a full side arc segment out in a session. Though now since I know all the side characters well, the odds of some game of thrones style fan fav deaths taking out one or two I particularly like is getting unnervingly high. Not that loss isn't a powerful way to contrast their presence and make them all the more loved but this impending war with possibly inbred magical psychopaths that have been using eugenics to amplify their powers for generations... has got me fearing for their safety.
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He did not like it; he was even furious.
Luckily he saw reason in the end.
That's not good! Not good at all!
At least it went well.
(But how far was she away from the village? Or how fast was the storm?)
I would expect Astral's list of sins would be pretty long...
Mustard got a mustard flower...
Not sure if brilliant or simply lazy.
Good chapter!
I enjoyed reading it.
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Mustard got a mustard flower...
Not sure if brilliant or simply lazy.
You have no idea...
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Care to enlighten me?
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I struggled with Mustard's talent and Cutie mark for over a year. I sought out advice from others and stumped them too. In the end, I reolized that Mustard's greated talent she has shown so far is her tenacity. To take what comes and continue on, growing stronger with each challenge. Her talent really is stubbornness. The mustard plant is incredibly hardy, just like her. It fit really well.
Also. I just gave up and slapped a cutie mark on her and said "Done".
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Well, it worked.
Sometimes the simplest solutions are the best.
Just wondering how close you are to finishing this epically amazing tale?
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There's still a bit to go.
I wonder... If Avarice wants to go home?
I mean sure she cause a huge mess on this planet but it seems like she needs a friend like with Discord.