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good chapter so some went back to tell the tale. this could either get ugly or funny as more and more scouting and foraging parties are absorbed into the enchantress herd. Yeah! for Woona the brave.
Oo! Can I be I the audio drama?! I have a great narrative voice...
I'm onto reading the chapter now!
...
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I'm not the one doing it, but I can get you into contact with those who are if you really want.
Hints at things that really gets you interested in what's going on.
Pretty sure the entire thing with Luna was a test.
Now for the slip ups I noticed:
No need for this 'it'
Yeah this entire section is all wonky. Needs a do over.
legS
HE chopped
sudden look
lookED
Hmm. I'll be honest. The time between posts coupled with the sheer number of characters makes it a bit tricky to track who is who a lot of the time. But don't think this'll excuse your earlier transgression with the fake out.
back oF her
whinNy
seed aS it
Pretty sure its 'clopped'
when he WAS flashing
alongside THE pair
the wall THAT she'D
I figured the abundance of crows was a marker for a test.
hoof TO HER chest
Cut the second 'think you'
Specify that it's the unicorns currently living with the earth ponies.
Specify whether or not she sees anything.
As much as I would love to help with checking over the story to make spotting where exactly the lewd/adult parts are easier, I'm sadly quite busy. I hope it's not too monotonous for you and that you're getting enough personal time to prevent burnout and stress! We're here if you need us!
On to a more chapter relevant note...
Lots of story arc progression in this chapter, though with how spread out among the various ones it is, the whole chapter felt a little short. Also you left multiple cliffhangers... MULTIPLE! I can already feel the withdrawals from not knowing what's next! So cruel! Please don't leave us hanging long. I'm not sure I can handle the suspense!
I like were this is going .
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No clue, I was surprise when it said that.
For a moment I’ve thought this was a different story since Flurry Heart isn’t born yet.
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The icon I am using is called a Fleur des lee. I wonder why it doesn't say that four times
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Might be just an error not saying it 4 times. Mostly I hear only 3 as well
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Are you still interested in being in the audio drama? I can send you the link to those who are organizing it.
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sure, I'd appreciate that. :)
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Auditions are still open. Here's the link. https://discord.gg/qjNFJv5
Can't agree more!
Cute ponies doing lewd things!
*cheering in the distance*
Some colts are gentlecolts. And then there is Wild Bolt.
Sounds like a plan.
For now. I'm sure one day or another the final confrontation will happen.
The only question is who will participate.
Good chapter!
I'm curious what will happen next; especially how Dark will react to Starless' plan.
(He will either like it or be woried, since it'll attract the attention of Astral herself...)
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it was a fun chapter to write.
please sir, more ?https://gph.is/153utTv
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You want more? Hmm. Well, here's a little more.
Teaser for Chapter 47.
"I thought you had changed! I thought you could be trusted!" Dark exclaimed. "I was wrong about you!"
"No!" Tears filled Starless' eyes.
"No?" Dark's eyes narrowed, "then why did you go behind my back to undermine my work? You knew I didn't want a confrontation with the Unicorns. You knew and yet you still do this!?" He threw his hoof to the side to indicate the ponies training outside.
Current word count on Chapter 47 is 3025
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Good news. Ch47 is done. Now, it just needs to be edited this coming Sunday.
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aw some looking forward