An encounter with Queen Chrysalis caused her to be sent to a magical land called 'The Land of Oz'. Now she must travel to see the powerful wizard in order to get back home. Along with way she will encounter familiar faces and will faced a powerful and evil witch. Will Twilight be able to get back home?
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Ah, another 'Chrysalis sends Twilight to X world' story. Haven't read it yet, but if well done, I'll Favorite it, meaning I want to read more.
You misspelled 'Pinkie' once. Also, try adding more dialogue to Pinkie, she wants as many of her friends to smile as she can; have her say something silly, like asking if Twilight is dreaming of her or the Ponyville foals. Remember that the characters have their own personalities, and try to follow them (well, unless you are having them intentionally OOC. Or a changeling in disguise).
On a different track, I can easily see Fluttershy as the Cowardly Lion. Rainbow Dash, Pinkie, or Applejack could be the scarecrow (Applejack for irony), and Rarity or Applejack as the Tin Man. Pinkie, Luna, Trixie, or Rainbow Dash could be the Wizard.
One last thing to consider: are you following the book or the movie? The book has more, and thus, more characters, but the movie is well-known compared to the book.
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Hostestly I never knew there a picture of Fluttershy as a lion or mantacore in this case.
I haven't read this yet but I HAVE read all 14 of Baum's Oz books & 14 of Thompson's Oz books + some of the others. At this point in time, Oz is just a fake (he later learns magic). There are several magic things out there, both good and evil, that haven't been discovered yet. (or, at least not widely known).
In particular, Ozma is still Tip, the Woozie is still trapped (I'm remembering how he thought his roar was so fearsome & Fluttershy's cheer in Sonic Rainboom) & there are several other magic users out there who are mostly keeping a low profile for fear of the Wicked Witch. There is also The Gnome King & the land of Ev
Big question How much the Judy Garland movie (which was fairly faithful to the book -but not entirely) & how much Wicked?
Almost forgot. One of the most powerful magic items in Oz is a magic book that automatically records the most important things happening in all the kingdom -but NOT why they are important. IIRC, at this time Glinda has it. Sorry, ICR which book mentions it.
Well this story took place in an episode I hated: A Canterlot Wedding, but at least you’ve altered the story.
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And also, I know that’s a crossover of the Wizard of Oz, and I have seen it, and I know the plots. In the movie, Dorthy, the main character, was transported to Oz while getting knocked out inside a house during a tornado storm, and the her house is lifted up without a scratch... which is scientifically inaccurate, but who cares? It’s just Hollywood. In the story, Twilight, who plays as Dorthy, was transported to Oz after she gets knocked out by a villain I hate, Queen Chrysalis, during the fight.
You know here’s a difference between the movie and the story. In the movie, the wicked witch of the east was actually killed when Dorthy’s house crushed her after a tornado, but in the story, the wicked witch of the east (which is Queen Cocoon, the Oz version of Chrysalis) was knocked out by Twilight herself when she’s unconscious too; here’s a famous quote between the movie and the story that Dorthy said “I don’t think we’re in Kansas anymore, Toto” while Twilight said “Wow! I don’t think I’m in Canterlot anymore”; in the movie, Dorthy only wears her red ruby slippers from the eastern witch’s corpse in order to make sure that the evil will go away, but in the story, Twilight only has a choker that does the same thing to the slippers from the movie; and the story said that Twilight has to “follow the yellow dirt road” instead of “the yellow brick road”.
Here are the characters that are similar to the movie:
Twilight Sparkle--Dorthy
Princess Celestia/Celeste--Glinda/Good Witch of the North (which is not from the movie)
CMC/The Fillykin Crusaders and other Fillykins--The Munchkins
Queen Chrysalis/Queen Cacoon--The Wicked Witch of the West (movie)/Wicked Witch of the East (movie/story)
Eh! Too bad the Toto-like character isn’t here even Twilight haven’t brought Owelishus with her.
I wonder what happened next after Cadance escaped with her unconscious foul sister? Did she blasted Chrysalis out of the city after Celestia starts to get defeated by the queen’s powerful magic?
There’s another character who is similar to the Scarecrow from the movie, but in the story, the Scarecrow was Applejack who her name is Apple Crow when in Oz, and like in the movie and story, they all need a brain (okay seriously, if a scarecrow thinks he doesn’t have a brain, how can he move? I mean you cannot move without brains, except for sponges, starfishes and sea urchins).
Also the Changeling workers and soldiers were similar to the Flying Monkeys and the witch’s soldiers.
Oh I forgot to tell you that the kiss from Celeste or the Good Witch of the North didn’t happened in the movie.
This story's great ever since I watched the movie when I was younger and I love it.
I have a pradiction about my version:
Applejack as Dorthey
Rainbow Dash as scarecrow
Pinkie pie as Tin mare
Fluttershy as cowlery mare
Luna as Glinda
Twilight sparkle as the wizard of oz
Nightmare Moon as the wicked witch of the west
The ruby slippers are replaced by the ruby Apple.