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During the wedding Twilight Sparkle was sent to another world for 20 years. After 20 years she has children, when a evil force try to take over equestria it up to Twilight's eldest daughter and the other eldest of Twilight friends to save Equestria.

Inspired from the story Daughter of Magic

Chapters (70)
Comments ( 35 )

In my opinion, it is an great story but it's rushed

I half expect twilight's kids to tell discord they remind them of they dad who was a huge clown and jokester

they end up in ponyville I bet some how or back in castle.

THE TREE'S INFLUENCE IS WITH US ALL!!!

That first chapter is almost word for word daughter of magic. I hope the rest is more original

This is pretty neat. 😄 In my MLP story, the only time my interpretation of a possible daughter for Twilight, appears, is at the very end of the 10th and final part of the story. Of course, I'll probably get a lot of ridicule, but I went the Harry Potter route with her daughter's name, and called her " Twilight Celestia Starlight Sparkle " XD Horrible name, I know, but it's a thing now lol

But your story actually captures the idea of possible children for Twilight completely better than I could ever do, honestly. 😄😊

seems very rushed but otherwise alright, could use a little explaining on what the ships are with the Mane 6 besides Sparity

With Naga defeated, that is what I called a beautiful ending.

What about Chrysalis and Sombra?.

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I just found this today and I agree with you with future chapters being more original.

Looks like you're missing some content in this chapter.

Not bad. Still needs some spit and polish (You've spent the entire fic speaking as if stuff was happening now. What you should have done was use past tense when narrating (like using words such as "was" instead of "is.")) All in all, I enjoyed it and I am glad you became more original as the story progressed.

I think you forgot to write a story on this chopper

This chapter really brings back memories of “the beginning”
AKA S1, E1

Changeling
I’m totally guessing changeling

I thought that it was a changeling

Applejack married Caramel. They also have 2 kids as well. Their oldest son name is Baked Apple. They also have a baby boy name Caramel Apple, around the same age as Tsubasa.

Carajack won’t work. Caramel and AJ are cousins.

"Well little one will you like to meet the Wonderbots" Fancy Pants asks.

:rainbowlaugh:

Their search took them all over Canterlot, they look in many different stores and cafes in the city just as they were going to give up Sorain sees Twilight and the other in Doughnut Joe's doughnut shop.

"Hey Twilight!" Sorain screams.

"Sorain what are you doing here?" Twilight ask.

"Well every pony is looking for you and the others will be relieved that all of you are okay." Sorain answers.

SoRAIN? Its actually S-O-A-R-I-N! :facehoof:

The stallion is a sky blue pegasus. He has black hair with blue streaks in his mane and tail. He is wearing goggles over his eyes. His cutie mark is a sparrow almost like it's going on supersonic speed.

That would be a good definition for my oc, except for the cutie mark, and gender!

"Yeah I still can't seem to beat my mom thought," Ace answers with respect for his mother.

Yes! I’ll never be beat! Muahahahahaha!
We’ll see abt that RD! *smirk*

"Now let's not be too hasty Soarin. Sakura is still new to this we don't want to pressure her," Rarity explains.

When did he get here?

Visual of Sakura Hinata in my next story!


Nice! <p>AWESOME</p>

"Oh, this is my daughter Gia and she is going to represent Griffonstone in the race," Gilda says introducing them to their daughter. Gia is a griffon with silver feathers and the same color fur as her mother. She also has bright red eyes, and she is wearing a light green scarf on her neck.

That’s my classmate’s name! (And, my name is right before hers in the attendance) And by any means DO NOT open the spoiler.

my name starts with a G

Just then Ace starts to write about what happen about his time for the race, about what his friends did for him and then he starts to write in about what he learned about this experience, "Practicing for the biggest race is hard and I'm glad that I have friends and family to support it. I learned that a friend is more important than winning a race. If there are times I have to choose between winning and friendship, I'll definitely going to pick my friends. And being there for a friend is what really makes you feeling like a winner."

Rarity investigates + Rainbow Falls!!! *fangirl squeal* (literally bc I am a fangirl)

Talk about deja vu
If you know what I mean

I think I'm going to get my Springfield carbine out and shoot fast swift in the head then he'd fall down dead

Bloody hell
It's a bloody changeling
For the one's that don't know me I'm mostly British
I may not look like it but...
I've got a little bit of African in me
At least 6%

Fast swift huh the whole blackmail plot reminds me of a MLP x phoenix wright crossover.

Honestly Discord actually helped a little bit because of his prank the real checkered flag got a unbiased view of ponyville without anyone trying to sucker up to her so in actuality he inadvertently created a good idea for the committee to see if a place can host the FG.

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