During the wedding Twilight Sparkle was sent to another world for 20 years. After 20 years she has children, when a evil force try to take over equestria it up to Twilight's eldest daughter and the other eldest of Twilight friends to save Equestria.
Inspired from the story Daughter of Magic
In my opinion, it is an great story but it's rushed
I half expect twilight's kids to tell discord they remind them of they dad who was a huge clown and jokester
they end up in ponyville I bet some how or back in castle.
THE TREE'S INFLUENCE IS WITH US ALL!!!
That first chapter is almost word for word daughter of magic. I hope the rest is more original
This is pretty neat. 😄 In my MLP story, the only time my interpretation of a possible daughter for Twilight, appears, is at the very end of the 10th and final part of the story. Of course, I'll probably get a lot of ridicule, but I went the Harry Potter route with her daughter's name, and called her " Twilight Celestia Starlight Sparkle " XD Horrible name, I know, but it's a thing now lol
But your story actually captures the idea of possible children for Twilight completely better than I could ever do, honestly. 😄😊
seems very rushed but otherwise alright, could use a little explaining on what the ships are with the Mane 6 besides Sparity
I NEED A SQUAL!!!!
With Naga defeated, that is what I called a beautiful ending.
What about Chrysalis and Sombra?.
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I just found this today and I agree with you with future chapters being more original.
Looks like you're missing some content in this chapter.
Not bad. Still needs some spit and polish (You've spent the entire fic speaking as if stuff was happening now. What you should have done was use past tense when narrating (like using words such as "was" instead of "is.")) All in all, I enjoyed it and I am glad you became more original as the story progressed.
I think you forgot to write a story on this chopper
This chapter really brings back memories of “the beginning”
AKA S1, E1
Changeling
I’m totally guessing changeling
I thought that it was a changeling
Nice Story! Twily in Japan!
Carajack won’t work. Caramel and AJ are cousins.
SoRAIN? Its actually S-O-A-R-I-N!
That would be a good definition for my oc, except for the cutie mark, and gender!
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Yep! Lot of deja vu!
Yes! I’ll never be beat! Muahahahahaha!
We’ll see abt that RD! *smirk*
When did he get here?
Reminds me so much of the S1E1
Visual of Sakura Hinata in my next story!
Nice!
<p>AWESOME</p>
That’s my classmate’s name! (And, my name is right before hers in the attendance) And by any means DO NOT open the spoiler.
my name starts with a G
Rarity investigates + Rainbow Falls!!! *fangirl squeal* (literally bc I am a fangirl)
Talk about deja vu
If you know what I mean
I think I'm going to get my Springfield carbine out and shoot fast swift in the head then he'd fall down dead
The medal is a key to the chest
Bloody hell
It's a bloody changeling
For the one's that don't know me I'm mostly British
I may not look like it but...
I've got a little bit of African in me
At least 6%
Discord you sly dog
Fast swift huh the whole blackmail plot reminds me of a MLP x phoenix wright crossover.
Honestly Discord actually helped a little bit because of his prank the real checkered flag got a unbiased view of ponyville without anyone trying to sucker up to her so in actuality he inadvertently created a good idea for the committee to see if a place can host the FG.