Damn, vector escaped. And yes, fallout 4 is awesome. Haven't got to put a bunch of time in, but it's an excellent game.

6648514 I´m suprised that I love her for her sudden escape, at the moment I only like her, but I you all my opinion about her again after I got some times to think about it.
I somehow knew there would be a chapter, that made me well....that would make everything okay. It could be that I just don´t care about it that much right now, or this chapter actually caused me to like Vector completely for being a nice little Villain.

I really hope to see how Trixie is healing from time to time, and I forgot how long she was gone again. Why did the description of Buttercup suddenly made me think of her as a goth? Well I like them, and for once I want a POV from Spitfire, and the two children.

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Somehow I was expecting everyone to call bS on me for that escape. Glad you liked it. This won't be the last we see of our one winged friend.

6651224 really man ;~; what about crime and punishment y u no fatality her ass

6654276 Cause every great villain has a plan B.

To escape, that and the tally said so. If you want I can make a slaughter chapter for you.

6654281 ;~; extra bloody? like albert fish?

I have read all the chapters!treasure.diylol.com/uploads/post/image/305273/resized_all-the-things-meme-generator-this-summer-we-shall-read-all-the-books-7bf640.jpg

6654284 Not sure what that is, but sure!

6654293 :D He was a serial killing pedophile who murdered and ate young people
(leave out pedophile part thats bad)
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Albert_Fish

6654288 Books be sexy yo.

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Cause we get hard on Extreme Surf Reading.v

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I can say, with little doubt I might add, that I have beholden that very look on my face more times than the average person would like to admit. But I can also say that your story has without a doubt been the cause of grief in my cal professor.

6659101 Why is my story a cause of grief?

Is my grammar that poor? I thought it was at least decent.

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It is such a monumental cause of grief because it has kept one of my cal instructors top students from completing assignments i.e. me. As for mistakes I think your editor does a better job than most.

6668451 Don't feel bad for getting your daily dose of Trixie fics. Trixie is best pony after all.

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I'm sorry to confess that I am a huge fan of sombra, but trixie is not to far down on my list.

6669063 GASSSSSP!

How dare you not love and adore the great and powerful overlord Trixie!

Also thanks for stalking er... following me.

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Be careful I'm silent like a shadow and unseen like the wind. But seriously love the story, love the lesbians, and love the twists. I do hope it all turns out alright, but regardless I will still love it.
P.S. Sorry for the late responce

6685592 It happens. Glad you love the story!

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Thanks for responding it's always nice to make friends on the internet.

6713988 Puns away! In know it's like the 'what's the opposite of Christopher Walkins?' "Christopher Reeves.'

6713988 Just so you know, the incest chapters are coming up so ye be warned if you don't want to edit them tell me now.

6750643 I'm glad someone told me they got the reference.

Good guess. You get a Trixie Cookie.

So this is the end? There's no sequel or some such?

Did I skip a chapter? I know Spitfire was two seconds away from explaining to Peanut what her real history with Vector was, but I don't remember reading it. O.o

I'm sad we didn't get to see Vector and Spitfire meet again. I was looking forward to that 'conversation'.

6802485 There will be more but it will be later on after I finish a few of my other fics. I think you missed a lot of chapters. I opened several since the last time you read on this.

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Darn, guess I'll be patient. ^^

Unless fimfiction is messing with me, I've read all the chapters. I didn't comment on the previous ones since speculating doesn't do much good if the final chapter is already up. It's much more efficient to just keep reading and find out how it actually ends. xD

6803326 saw this listed as completed did you end it or start a sequel

7431417 The fic is done, but I have a sequel made. I just won't publish until I finish some of my others. At the very least I want to finish Student of Friendship and Adventures Across Space before I even consider doing it. Cause I have lots to do until then.

Before I read the story, what is the Dark tag for ?

7862717 It for a chapter call family bonding time. It's not necessary for the plot of the story so if you want you can skip it. Its basically a mutilaion chapter on a stallion nothing more. Other dark themes like attempted murder are in the story. Attempted being the prominent word without spoiling too much. Got any more questions friend?

8062066 Don't worry, I like the story, it's just that it sometimes hurts my head trying to comprehend it. While I probably won't go on another grammar tangent like I did in my second comment, I will continue to point out what I see as glaring issues like I did in my 1st, 4th, and 5th comments. But like I said I am enjoying the story and want to see Trixie's and Spitfire's relationship blossom

8064986 Well, its a little different in my story, but you got the right idea.

So...I was in the hospital for a while, and I came across a story called Last Dance. While reading it, I realized something. This story+that story would be amazing! The emotional build-up+the emotional pay off when Trixie dies, I think? could be cool. You'd just have to replace the Trinity with the Changelings and focus on how Trixie is actually a hero, because a villain would've forced the foals in front of the Ursa Minor, and a coward would've run away from the Ursa Minor without making sure that the children safe.

8167799 Well, I'm glad you liked it. I thought about that long ago when I made this, but obviously went a different direction.

8547629 I have quite a few fimfic characters in my tales who would destroy them.

After reading this, I read https://www.fimfiction.net/story/73029/1/last-dance/chapter-1
I feel that the aforementioned story should have been integrated into this story somehow.

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Wow, I never knew that story existed! I can see where you're coming from on that one.

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Oh I am. I am just annoyed by incompetence and sentient antics

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It was one of my first stories so its pretty bad at times I admit. XD

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I actually like the story as a whole though