Trixie and Spitfire fall in love and life is always throwing curve-balls at them around each turn. Join them as they venture through life and all the unexpected turns it has to offer. Now an Arc series.
Page generated in 0.029 seconds
Total duration
606 users online
1,079,439 hits today, 2,126,319 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
The way Trixie keeps calling Spitfire brute Remind me of Miss Righetti calling Max Goldman ox on grumpier old man
6060058 Oh my god! Someone actually watched grumpy old men besides me?!
You sir are awesome.
media0.giphy.com/media/eEtxYul1kBS80/giphy.gif
good one
I nearly forgot that this wasn´t canon at one point in the story, but i really liked that familly chapter, also a nice solution for Peanut liking Trixie more, i mean he doesn´t even understand her fame.
You can probably already guess it, i love the whole family, but i enjoy Peanut and Trixie the most.
Hmmmm i think i could use a bonus chapter with an certain event for the whole family, maybe movie night or something?
I would like more time with Peanut/Trixie, and Spitfire/Buttercup, maybe the chapter could even be with the childrens point of view.
Is the grumpy old man funny?
6061603 Oh good lord that movie is the finniest thing ever. Two classic comedians who are also actors and they're great. If you should ever have the time and means to watch Grumpy Old Men, you should. It's funny. There was a second one called Grumpier Old Men.
And you bet there will be more chapters for the family! Just remember that means there will be family time with the Starfalls as well, or as Crowscrowcrow put, the bitchy brother with the two rapey older sisters.
6061542 Dude walter Matthau and Jack Lemmon, rank up with the Best Comedy duo's of all time
Fibber mcgee and molly
George Burns and Gracie allen
Bud Abbott and Lou Costello
Dean Martin Jerry Lewis
Don Amache and Frances Langford
6061639 I know seriously they are! To be honest they're my favorite comedian duo. I loved Out to Sea and My Fellow Americans, epecially the helicopter scene.
6061630
while i can´t change what i like, i meant it as i said that i got used to them, and every chapter with them makes it only better, if you should give them what they deserve in the end.
I don´t know how to say this, but even if that nasty family aren´t my favourites, i don´t want the story without them.
Honestly i hope there ins´t a foalnapping, and that they do weird things with the children, i had read a story with something similar happened last year. It is just that i somehow already expect a foalnapping to happen.
edit : Now i know what i mean here, i like our Villains in this story, but some things, which i think i remember that they did them, where really nasty.
6061726 That family, the Starfalls are suppose to be HIGHLY DYSFUNCTIONAL. But don't worry I know you'll like what they do later. I hope. And Like I said if something bad happens I'll let you guys know. Chapters like that would be skippable if the readers really didn't want to read them.
So you're saying that for example in your story the wonderbolt academy might happen before rainbow falls if it suits the plot? But there won't be severe changes to the content of the episode? Sounds reasonable. We know the episodes are kinda out of order anyway. (winter ep before fall ep, heh.)
1. anti*
2. This paragraph makes it look like they found her already with 'to their surprise' in front of explaining where Trixie is.
3. wow Trixie knows some impressive spells.
1. everywhere*
2. comma before 'searching'
3. Nobody ever looks up.
1. .*
2. It's cute, but damn Buttercup opened up about her insecurities fast. Guess that means she feels very comfortable around Trixie.
1. infernal*
2. Evil Trixie for assaulting a cripple.
3. I love the shock on Buttercup, she had no idea this is normal.
1. "you featherbrained idiot" is still an address, so it needs a comma like it were a name.
1. Perfect example of why we need comma's to indicate when someone is being addressed.
1. Again.
Wait so we never find out why Spitfire is hurt?
6077859
Well, I figured if Twilight can learn it, (Crystal mpire Eposides with Sombra), then I figured Trixie would be able too as well. After all she did go to a prestigious school in my head cannon. I think that 's the right word.
And that's why sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, many players, characters, and movies actors die!!! They never look up. I learned that from the Alien franchise. Always look up. Now, I look everywhere. Alien Isolation is a bitch to play. Fuck that game's fun but soo damn hard!
Well, to be fair in story they have known about on e another for sometime now. That's why Buttercup is so willing to open up to her.
She'll learn to become part of it in time. That fear will turn into unbridled fun and shenanigans. And no, Trixie never knew the extent to which Spitfire was injured. But remember this, cause it will have an affect on their relationship.
As, always thanks for commenting and finding all the flaws, or as many as you could stomach!