Trixie and Spitfire fall in love and life is always throwing curve-balls at them around each turn. Join them as they venture through life and all the unexpected turns it has to offer. Now an Arc series.
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someone did something like that with me, as i was young, so i understand her a bit
to be honest, this was maybe not the usual sex scene, but it was somehow funny, and interessting to read their interaction with each other.
Maybe i was a bit wary last time, and i just have that quirk you could say, because i assume the worst sometimes, but this was a good chapter that could lift my mood.
I wasn´t really sure if it still made sense to spank Buttercup, but it seems to fit, that she is that type of Filly that learns that way, and i guess Spitfire got spanked as a filly too.
best chapter tonight, and again i want to say, some people manage to make the same scene, or action much worse than i could image, and you make it really good, i guess i should really try that other story. If it should be not one of the things that covers my interest, then i can still stop.
As amusing as it is delivered, this isn't the same kind of situation as the 'infernal suitcase'.
I suppose I don't really understand why Buttercup was given a physical punishment when they'd clearly already resolved the issue and she learned her lesson. It's not as though Buttercup knew it was wrong and did it anyway. She sincerely felt she was in the right for defending her mom. As demonstrated by how she has absolutely no problem with saying exactly what she did. It is only after talking with Trixie that she learns Trixie doesn't want her to react like that.
It is different between Trixie and Spitfire. It's funny because it is a game for them, not anything serious.
Part of it is also Peanut's reaction. Precisely because of his ability to emphasize. Any illusions of levity are firmly torpedoed by how upset he is with what is happening, clearly indicating that it is not in anyway a fun activity. To the point that he has to be hidden away and comforted while Spitfire goes at Buttercup.
Funny sex scene. Though part of me can't stop thinking about the notion that Spitfire can't have foals anymore. Which makes this line a lot stranger than it should be.
6208453 Yeah, nothing like walking in on your parents doing the dirty dance or someone planting the image in your head!
I'm glad everyone thought the sex scene was funny so far, because it WAS suppose to be.
6211501 Heyo!
So now the analysis time. Well, not really I'm a horrible annalist. I'm happy the sex scene was funny cause I was trying to do that. I won't get into the spanking thing cause I already had a heated debate vis PM with someone who hated the story for the one reason. While I can understand why people would say that this person was unreasonable.
But other than that the inferno suitcase will be making a return! That inadvertently became a running gag in this story.
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i think i remember that one and this is actually something i am happy to hear about.
Hhhmmmm i think i would lie if i would say i can´t see both sides about that spanking stuff, however no one in this story seems to be really mad about it, only Peanut was a bit scared, because he is very emotional......did i made a pun including Changelings?, or is this Changeling the pun itself? I somehow love Peanut, and that makes me think about Peanuts.....first about those with chocolate, but then about others because i doesn´t like chocolate that much..........watermelon!?.
Don´t think i hated that spanking stuff in this chapter, it is like the one with Applebloom and Applejack in your other story, i like it in that situation, but i still have always some stuff to say about it.
.....and because of the watermelon i forgot what else i wanted to say, but since it is again the time at the day i am not the smartest, i am going to sleep
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Running away from the gag, in Spitfire's case.
Well that was inevitable.
I purposely steered well clear of any "Spanking is wrong" in my post to avoid sparking up that debate. I figured just questioning the need for punishment at all, and looking at why it doesn't work with the comical tone was sufficient, but perhaps I was wrong to avoid the issue. After all, if only zealots speak up as opposed to anyone with an ounce of nuance then no amount of progress will ever be made either way.
Something for me to think about in the future I suppose.
6215369 Truer words could not have been said. Then again, you're one step away from becoming and equalist... but not Starlight. I like her though, Starlight. I don't agree with her methods but I do like her character. Can't wait for her to show up again at the end of the season.
I get what they are saying, but the honest truth of it is bullying does not stop because you ignore it. In fact ignoring it can often make it worse.
I am speaking from experience.
I ignored a bully for one entire school year...the next year he just ended up giving me more grief with his new friends that transfered in...even going so far as to brag about how he messed with me all last year with me not fighting back once.
Telling teachers did not help because they are literally not allowed to do anything.
Telling my parents did not help because all they can do is complain to teachers, or even worse complain to the bully's parents...which just upsets the bully more...
The bullying stopped when I finally stood up for myself...which resulted in a couple fights of course because the bully did not want to lose his favorite punching bag.
We both got in trouble, but the bullying stopped.
Telling your kids to ignore a bully is like telling them they are worthless...not worth protecting...not worth standing up for...just worthless...
6407594 Well, speaking from experience I have to agree. Honestly until you mentioned it I never really thought about how much I projected my life into this story. Weird right?