Trixie and Spitfire fall in love and life is always throwing curve-balls at them around each turn. Join them as they venture through life and all the unexpected turns it has to offer. Now an Arc series.
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Hhhhmmmm very difficult, in rare Moment´s, where she isn´t to crazy/insane, Vector is actually something like a good mother.
The thing is that we know what she did, which circumstances count, and what kind of Person she can be.
This chapter helped me to like her more, however i still have to try not to think of it in an ill way, if i see Peanut liking her so much, because he doesn´t knows what she did. It is like someone had raped/killed your sister, or something like that, and you don´t know this, but you are really close with that person.
I don´t think that Spitfire has that bad problems, i think the circumstances cause her to fall back into her old behavior, or something like that. (i hope that makes sense in english)
Trixie is Trixie, so i can´t say much about her that you would not know about, i mean we agree that she is a really awesome Pony right
Maud is Maud, even if i like the version more where she isn´t a Pony that would even have sex with her sister/family, and could not see the problem with it. Not in your story i know, but i had a story like that, Pinkie had probems the Night after they did it with four Ponys, but Maud could understand it.
Solaflare, well of course i don´t like that both of them liked her brother, and i still hope that one of them can change that, since she has the change for a new life, or at least she has some new experience befor she remembers everything, and that could make the slight change.
However the brother sister thing is still something i would never really support in real, or in a story, but that doesn´t stop me from liking them, i honestly like them more than Vector i think, even if Vector makes the better Villain. I really think Vector could be one of my fvourite Villain, since i prefer Villain, who ar not OP, but try to win with tricks i guess, or tactics.
Spitfire....i like her but at the moment i give her time to ge better.
Buttercup, i like that she doesn´t give in so easily, and i like it that it looks like she will never really like her, but makes a deal with her.
Peanut : He was,...he is my favourite foal i think, Vector just makes it a bit difficult for me to like him together with her.
Well at least i could give you a small feedback already.
Nice story, i still hope there is a time where hey meet the mains six, only to solve that problem between them, and Trixie. You could say it was her fault, but i believe they challenged her, in her show, and she only acted like a Showmare, even if she went overboard. (I think i have to learn how much i really have to write like "this", and not like "This". I really got used to write everything small)
However i would like it, if they would notice that everyone was wrong.
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I guess I do tend to follow that trend a lot don't i? I make the hated characters that you can't help but like to some degree.
That sounds like a good basis for a story! Nah, I wont go that far. Though I do like stories like that, not the rape murder a persons sister, but the fact it's a close friend that did it. Stories like that are why I write the way I do. That and all the fics that made Trixie out to be a villain.
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As far as Vector being a villian, I too like ones that aren't OP and use tricks and deception over brute strength. Although I still like it when they do have some fight in them. But not so much that they wreck the good guys shit you know? Like how I did Trixie in Trixie Secretary Extraordinaire! I still can't spell extraordinaire right after all this time. I had to spell check.
see ms. spitfire what you did was wrong say sorry,
vector, nothing to say here,
peanut stay awesome
buttercup waterboard the shit outta vector make her talk
6419303 I like how you react to my characters.
Spitfire, quit being dumb, Butter and Peanut are cool and then anger micrage face at Vector. And really? Waterboarding? That's the best you could come up with? How about Chinese water torture? It's far more effective. I would know.
6419313 naw that would be suspicious
Spitfire: "hey buttercup what are you doing with vector?"
buttercup: "Playing negotiate the terrorist!"
Spitfire: "So playing a game?"
buttercup: "yep!"
6420331 And then Trixie comes in. "Dears please don't get blood on the floor."
6420524 ye polygamy is what I see between flare maud spitfire and trixie