Trixie and Spitfire fall in love and life is always throwing curve-balls at them around each turn. Join them as they venture through life and all the unexpected turns it has to offer. Now an Arc series.
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In the end i remembered that Trio a bit better, i had forgotten which one was which sister, and which one was the stallion, but i think i remember it now.
I don´t know if i should hate Fletfoot for now or not, but i guess she is one of those characters, which doesn´t think that much about the things they do, and in the end she would regret that she worked for those ponys.
I probably said it already in this story, but even if i hate and love these three ponys at the same time, they have to be in this story for me.
Good job
5601967 You don't like her? Is it because she knows the Starfalls?
Ruby was the stallion Blaze Solarflare were the mares.
5603062 it is a bit more complicated, i think it is beause i am not sure which part she plays in the story, but till now i am convinced, that she doesn´t want to cause any pain or chaos. to be honest i like her for now, and even if i was suprised by her foward Girlfriend, it was somehow funny that she got a that special spell from Trixie.
I guess it is really only personal taste, for a while i thought it was something that only i don´t like. ( I talk not about your story right now, but about some certain sex things in fanfictions), but then i found out, that there are authors that could write the same stuff pretty good.
Now about the story again, it was really funny that Trixie and (.....waiter), made a certain plan for the Night.
Wait, what? Wasn't Ruby the cowardly weakling that his rapey sister kept around as an accessory? When did he evolve into a suave bad ass with a history of adventure? I suppose his sister is wondering the same thing. Maybe he's only squeamish when it comes to killing things.
Also, I'm pretty sure you picked the most obscure name for a color you could find to describe dark gold as a fur color. You bastard!
This story takes place before magic duel, right? So perhaps we're being shown how Trixie came into contact with the amulet. This should be fun.
Notes:
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I like how you made up a word to describe him. If you remember their family has a long history, dealing in ancient stuff, mentioned off hand-hoof. He still a trophy husband/brother thing he just has his mind set on something currently. Don't worry he'll bitch out eventually. As for the killing, well you'll have to decide that for yourself.
Daring is not amused.
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If ponly the others would agree with that. Every chapter I get at least one thumb down. Of well, can't please them all. Alicorn Amulet? Clearly Trixie will be living nothing but rainbows and sunshine! No evil artifacts here.....
5601967 I'm curious to hear your thoughts. What do you think?
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I'd like to take credit, but that is an actual, though informal, word these days.
I'm pretty sure that has nothing to do with the content of the chapter you are adding, but the first chapter. The increased exposure due to bumping the story up to the main page with the update brings new people to check the story out.
Suddenly, it occurs to me that it is possible that Trixie wanted the amulet to deal with the Trio, not Twilight at all. It's only after she got the amulet, and murdered the trio, that her corrupted mind stumbled upon the idea of taking care of Twilight while she was at it. Though, that doesn't line up with the rock farm flashback unless its fabricated, or still about to happen. Or it could just be different.
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Curse you urban dictionary!
You're on the right track. But still off. I'll give you and all my viewers a hint, Trixie's behavior later. Pay close attention to how she acts and think about what's happened to Spitfire in the show.
5613085 Oh believe me I know. I have played the game for years. Now I bring it to Fimfiction to show how much I care for all of you!
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5614703 OMG I love it!
That face Lyra makes.
Not bad, has some grammer and wording issues. It also has some pacing issues, but a decent fic.
5647188 Glad you think so. I try to correct things along the way sometimes I miss things. Nobodies perfect right?
5644012 I do. It's awesome
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Okay let's see. In the timespan there are four episodes with relevant facts:
Sonic Rainboom: Rarity knocks out Spitfire (+2 wonderbolts), nearly causing her death. Rainbow Dash saves them all. Rainbow Dash spends a day with Spitfire (+wonderbolts). The Best Night Ever: Spitfire attends a very dull gala. Manesix wreak havoc. Sweet and Elite: Spitfire flies in the wonderbolt derby, comes in second to Fleetfoot. Hurricane Fluttershy: Spitfire oversees the tornado being made, but does not fly herself.
Also worth noting that the wonderbolts were not at the wedding, and that almost immediately after Magic Duel we have: Wonderbolt Acedemy: Spitfire is in charge of a training camp. Lighting Dust and Rainbow Dash have their scuffle, presumably both are ponies Spitfire likes.
In Magic Duel, Trixie is angry, evil, arrogant, oppressive, and clearly in absolutely no hurry to go anywhere. In fact, since she domes off the entire town, effectively closing herself off from the rest of the world. She takes time out of her day to mess specifically with the manesix, and snips&snails. She is apologetic later when the amulet is removed, but doesn't leave until much later that evening.
Thus far the facts. Now how to combine them with the premise of the story...
I can think of about fifty different ways. Well darn.
Hypothesis1: Spitfire was so impressed with Rainbow Dash, that she ended up having an affair. Trixie found out, all hell breaks lose.
Hypothesis2: Spitfire's carrier took a nose dive. She was the captain of the wonderbolts, but she's lost face during the Sonic Rainboom event. She is shown as doing increasingly minor things after that, like attending the notoriously boring gala. Racing in a small time derby with Fleetfoot and losing. Overseeing a water tornado (Which was pointless since even when it was going wrong she did nothing.) And finally getting dropped to the level of a drill instructor. (Those who can't do, teach.)
Hypothesis3: The Changeling purging blast during the wedding also hit the orphan Changeling foals that had been adopted. Revenge!
Hypothesis4: Spitfire was nearly killed during the Rainboom incident. Trixie wants vengeance.
Hypothesis5: All of this is misdirection!
That'll do.
I guess I'll have to wait till it's narrowed down a little.
5692904 Well you hit all of the fact s I was going to use so now you have to wait and see what I do to tie it all together. Don't worry it's not completely misdirection just some.