Trixie and Spitfire fall in love and life is always throwing curve-balls at them around each turn. Join them as they venture through life and all the unexpected turns it has to offer. Now an Arc series.
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6262700 lol literally saw this as i was reading the next chapter. so your more just breaking up the story into chunks?
don´t do that anymore, i almost got a heartattack, naaaa no Heartattack, but i am happy that there is more later, but for a moment i thought you really wanted to stop it completely.
Nice, such more are like spices for this story.....does that make any sense?
ooohhh i don´t want to be the one that is saying this, but i believe this is that one joke "suprised Buttsex"
Now they learn what it means to have kids, and a Changeling would probably come very often if he thinks he feels "LOVE"
.....did Buttercupt tried to stop the two lovers?, maybe she can hear it all the time, or t was some sort of revenge.
The inferno Suitchase wins every time, and i like that name, that is if i spell it right.
Good chapter, even for a short one.
6262747 Yes, I will do the story in arcs rather than separate stories. Kind of like Heart of Stone by WanderD. I feel it'll be easier than trying to get more stories to add to an already growing list I have to finish. Plus, it makes me feel better, like I'm not leaving other stories unloved!
Make sense?
6262749 Yes, there will be more silly! I won't leave you guys hanging!
You are correct it was surprise buttsex. But it wasn't RAPE! Spitfire and Trixie do this all the time! That's why there was what we call, intervention. Buttercup knew it was going to happen and prepared for it. No one scored that night!
Very much revenge on buttercups part. Nothing can be worse than hearing your parents having loud sex every night. Or walking in on them. But I'm still glad you liked how i spiced things up this chapter! Hope you're ready for the next one, but bring a box of tissues.
6262760 yeah, it also makes the story less daunting for new readers
6262773
Well you have written it pretty good, i would not be able to think of it as Rape, no i think they just really like each other, they really do this all the time
That makes me think at Spitfires Ex-Marefriend, the Rapesisters, and the Slavebrothers (i forget their names everytime.), i expect that they are after one of the kids.
At first i hoped it would be Buttercup, and not Peanut, just because it is always the youngest kid, then again they would probably try to have their fun with Buttercup, but you already said something like that wold not happen without a warning, but i guess i would not prefer it anyway.
Or....maybe something about Fleetfoot, since she still has something to do with it.
I totally forgot that they are maybe still after Trixies pet
I am glad that this didn´t happened to me, but my brother actually saw them once
It was arather akward day afterwards.
6262773 darn i managet to accidently delete my long comment.
Long story short:
bring out tissues : I had to think about Spitfires secret Girlfriend, is this still something that has to happen?
Then i remembered the Rapesisters, and the Slavebrothers (forget their names everytime)
After that i thought they maybe are still after Link, that is the name for the Timberwolf right?
Then i said my brother actually saw my parents once, and it was a rather akward day afterwards.
Only to be sure i never thought it was sex, i actually think you made it pretty clear that they just like to play around with each other.
I can´t it say enough, you develop your storys better than some others, in other storys i would not like it.
I hate the short version, but i don´t like to write the same stuff again.
She yelled in pain? I'd understand surprise, but pain? What did Trixie spray her with? A firehose?
6335615 I goofed it was suppose to be pepper water.