Trixie and Spitfire fall in love and life is always throwing curve-balls at them around each turn. Join them as they venture through life and all the unexpected turns it has to offer. Now an Arc series.
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It's good to see what's happening with trixie. I'm a little cautious about the amnesia thing though
I really like that, but this could be just to make a huge scene later, no i think it is really interessting, i still wish Solaflare, maybe get rid of her unusually relationship with her brother, but that i actually only important for me, if she is gong to stay Trixies friend, or maybe some sort of friendly rival later, if she would end up as a rival, then i would not mind it if she can´t stop being obsessed with her brother, but then again maybe her new memories from her second life, it could make her different, if she remembers everything.
little mistake?
the translater said it is "tots"
i am curious why , Trixie just likes the attention i suppose.
not sure why, but this nearly seems a bit to much, or to accurate for something to remember in her state, at least it sounds like it happened to soon.
Ooooohhhhh come on, not sure which place Maud was in your favourite Pony list, but now i am nearly ready to want another little herd story, well without Vector, i could not believe it, if they would just forgive her the moment they know everything.
Somehow i have the feeling we get more chapters about Vector and Spitfire, than from Trixie and Solaflare in the next time.
You can believe me, sometimes i really like it if there is something i can get angry about, or see with a very critical eye, because it makes the whole thing somehow even better sometimes.
Not sure why i suddenly start to like Solaflare, probably i am really only a bit picky about what i read, like that they all loved their brother, but i start to like her more now.
It feels like she was supposed to be hated at first, and with every little information we should get used to them, but this time it feels like we are now supposed to like her, and i start to like her. However, maybe it is just me.
While i really like Maud, not everyone manage to write about her as good as you, i guess she is a difficult character in a way.
Again nothing bad in the chapter, even the stuff with Vector is not bad, just something i feel conflicted about, since i know what she did, but that is okay, it makes the whole plot even more interessting.
One was crimson red with a jet black mane and eyes of fire wearing full body armor her cutie mark was a depiction of the sun with a fiery ring around it. When they found her she was with another mare of azure blue and a mane as white as snow. Her eyes were a light magenta color, her cutie mark was a wand with a star tip and a magical swirl around it.
ok im going to go out on a limb here the first one you are describing is trixie the second is solar?
also beautiful descriptions
6368171 I bet all you say was flanks and in your head you were saying "I read it for the plot." And you're correct on who I was describing. Trixie and Solar. Glad you liked it!
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6368191 maybe
6366959 Don't worry I thought this one out. I'm not going gung-ho like last time. I hope the swap between aren't too much for you guys to handle. I plan to swap between the groups frequently but I 'll try to keep them down to once every few chapters.
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DANG YOU'RE RIGHT! WHAT AM I GOING TO DO!? GASP* will i have to do the unthinkable and... GASP! FIX IT!?!?!??
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HAH! I've created conflict in the reader! My life is complete. Well, to be honest Maud is probably my.... third favorite pony? Trixie is obviously my first. That much should be clear from what I write.
Second would be Spitfire hands down.
Maud I'm not sure. Third seems good i guess?
But no, no herd this time. Sorry Tex. But hey I already gave you Trixie, Maud, Mayor Mare, and an OC. :rainbowlaugh
And if you hated Vector before, just wait til later....
6368218 as long as you have a plan. Amnesia can either go really well, or horribly.
6368191 also your story is almost addicting as guitar hero
6368323 Guitar hero huh? Wow such praise. Thanks! That like totes made my day!
6368337 you are welcome! but guitar hero addiction is very hard to overcome
6368218 aaawwww that was an actually nice Octavia gif, now i can have a peacfull night rest.
yes that much is clear, and not sure if it is your storys fault, but Trixie managed to get very high on my own list, i actually have a problem to really place her anywhere below the first place, maybe she is sharing the first place with another pony, but i can´t think about it right now.
Well i somehow knew that, so no hard feelings.
Ooohhhh i know i will hate her more after that, but for now it only makes me more excited about the future chapters.
Is it strange that i like it if i can hate a certain character, or if i am able to discuss about them? Sometimes i get the feeling, if i don´t hate something, the story isn´t half as good as it could be. I don´t have other words for it again.
6356712 I have to agree with you, what i describe is more that i hated what she did in some way, but Vector herself, is actually pretty interessting, i mean if she would not be obsessed with Spitfire that much, she would probably be very smart, and well she is pretty dangerous if she wants to be i believe. I only forget to say something like that too, but my first reactions is usually about what the characters are doing.
edit: and i make the mistake to write my comments, in times i am not the best thinker, that means after i woke up, or in the late night.
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Well Trixie is best pony after all.
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Honestly Vector was suppose to be that way. she's the tragic figure who wants to be loved noting more. But the question is does the ends justify the means? That's what Vector is all about. Is love really worth killing over? It was suppose to make it hard to like her but you can't help but admire her tenacity.
You totes got this tex.
If this is what happens when you force yourself to not use a dream sequence, then whoever this wise, handsome person is, was right.
I can only imagine how awkward that must be when Trixie tries to speak in 3rd person out of habbit.
"The great and powerful... uhhh... someone... doesn't have to listen to this!"
Good thing they recovered some of their memory after a while.
Aww. I love Maud.
I wonder how heartbroken Maud would be when Solar and Trixie pack up and leave due to recovering their memories. Lets see where this goes.