Trixie and Spitfire fall in love and life is always throwing curve-balls at them around each turn. Join them as they venture through life and all the unexpected turns it has to offer. Now an Arc series.
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celestia
also THE FEELS ARE STRONG WITH DIS ONE
and wow spitfire recovered fast from the death of her son and mate
Very nice way to end this story and setup for a sequel :)
6289456 Thanks I worked really hard on this one. But as I said it'll be an arc series so the 'sequel' will be part of this one.
6289849 Yay
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Yes, Celestia. And I wouldn't say it was quick for Spitfire to recover. After all she did spend and entire week searching Canterlot. I think that's quite a while myself. Still glad you guys liked it!
6289858 so are you making a sequel?
Poor peanut. A week does seem a little fast though.
And calling out crow, lol. I don't mind longer stuff, I'm used to stuff like the lunar rebellion that had chapters that hit 10k.
6291100 Yes dear friend. There will be a "sequel" but it'll just be added on to the already existing story Wonderbolt my Heart. I put it as complete to show that I'll be taking a break from it and then I'll be adding a new arc to it later. Keep an eye out for a blog saying when it'll start up again.
Or if you want I can PM you when I start again.
BTW nice avatar. I think it'd be more awesome to have Pinkie as a sniper. 4th wall can't save you now!![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
6291333 You think a weeks too soon? I though tit might have been too long honestly. Well, I guess it depends on the person. I actually called Crow out cause he, way early on in the story, made remark about long chapters being, tedious or something. So I thought it'd be funny to bring it up again.
And I know he saw it.
How'd you like the last chapter?
6292130 ty and please pm me
Not sure if Peanut seems a bit to strong here, but then again somehow the changelings are supposed to be the best with Love, howeve he was still young, and maybe he could do a bit to much, but i don´t mind.
As long as they don´t have a future in the sequel, i don´t try to remember more than i already do about our Villains here, but till now the last chapter looks nice, i almost forgot that i still had to read it.
I stopped there for the time being, but i was a bit suprised that no one asked Luna not to slay their child. Like i said, i only read up to this point at the moment.
6292136 well if i understand you guys correctly, then i don´t mind long chapters, they are actually more satisfying, and nothing was really tedious. I read all the time, so i can read pretty much i guess.
a reflex?
you haven´t really killed him have you? Not only because i liked this character, but more so i am sad that this probably means that every other kid they maybe adopt, will look like a bad replacement. Not that i am exactly mad, but of course it had to be my favourite.
Do the siblings somehow work with the guards? Not sure if i understood that part, still a bit upset about Trixie, and Peanut.
both of them are really sick, but i think the one that died, was the worst right?, it was the one that cut of the testicles of that Ruby guy right?
which one died here? the professor? It was Vector that was hit right?
it feels like Vector is only interessted in Spitfire, and everything else doesn´t matter even if she said it, and that makes me angry at her.
... I really don´t know what to think about it, i know she liked Vector, but i really don´t like it, that she does it that soon, after Trixie just died, or at least that is what they think.
.......sigh, well okay but i really don´t like it that it happens so fast after she just lost her, i know she never really got over it, but i guess that it looks like Vector helped killing Trixie doesn´t help.
now i get the feeling you were talking about Spifire starting a new romance, and it really seems to soon, way to soon, but at least she seems to wait the normal time, you probably know what i mean, and i accept it, since we never saw that Spitfire really got over Vector, she probably still loved her, so i can at least understand the kiss.
Not sure if i am mad at Spitfire, or if i hate it that Vector probably helped with everything what happend, and tries to make out with Spitfire.
Now after i said everything i wanted to say, good job with making me feel those emotions, it seems i really liked the characters in this fanfiction, and i was actually kind of sad, i suppose as sad as i could be that Trixie looked that at first, even if i didn´t believed it, and i am sad about Peanut.
I would really like it if Trixie would befriend with her former enemie "i only remember Rubis name", and that they would work together, maybe that one sister could even be healed, i mean that she isn´t into incest anymore. I say that because i suddenly want her to be part of Trixies revenge team? Or Trixie to be part of (red Mare) revenge team,....okay i just like the we were enemies, and now we are friends thing.
The Maud Pie ending was a nice ending, and even if Vector made me angry, right now, exactly right now i am pretty excited about what happens next, and i am suddenly happy about it, about what you can do with it in the next story arc.
really a good job
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6297270 Wow. This was quite the response you gave me.
Now to clarify, Vector was using Blaze blasting her in the chest as a diversion. So that way if anyone saw her she wold have whats called plausible deniability. And with a serious wound like that they'd never question the legitimacy of her statement that she was attacked. Spitfire knowing the trinity, well not anymore but I don't have a new name for them yet.
I wasn't expecting quite the strong response you gave me, but the chapter was suppose to get people to react emotionally. Guess you're the one who just had the most to say.
Not that it's a bad thing. I get why you said why you did, in fact its what I was expecting.
Vector is the type of character who as long as she gets what she wants the end always justify the means of getting there. Meaning it doesn't matter what she has to do to get there as long as she gets what she wants in the end. I admit that I could have had her as part of this sooner instead I kept referring her as 'the professor' by the trinity, the brother and two sisters. Also, sorry to burst your bubble but they will be even more important in the next arc. Sorry but they are needed for the story to go on.
Remember a section about the 'soul charm' with Daring Do? Well, that and the story Trixie knows from her childhood is important to the Trinity so yeah they'll be back. Don't worry, the mean sister isn't dead she was with Trixie in the desert, but there won't be any, as crow would put it, no "rapey time."
But as I said in the PPM there will be lots of playful banter.
Ill finish this later work calls.
6292136 I know crow typically does shorter chapters.
I'd say a week is a little short, especially if your daughter is crying herself to sleep over what happened.
To be honest, I'm not a huge fan of the stuff with Solar flare, Ruby, and Blaze. I'm more of a slice of life fan. I'm still enjoying the story though.
6298135 Well, the next arc will be more adventurous to say the least. Sorry but you know its for plot and to adavnce the story. Admitedly when I wrote the story on paper I had this arc intended as a new story all together but now I wish I had done so differently. I admit, I shouldn't have been so gung ho about the Kindle Trinity, but I did it and I aint ashamed of it.
Well, maybe a little.
I know most of you don't like them. But even George Lucas had to make episodes 2 and 3. So yeah. Glad to see you're still into it though. Just for my fans I WILL try to make it more slice of life like but it will be adventurous a lot. I promise that.
Also yeah maybe a week is too soon. I just compare it to when my friend died. Sorry I know you probably didn't want to see that but it took me a week to get over it so I thought it was normal. Sorry.![:ajsleepy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsleepy.png)
6297465 you know those teen shows on tv? those which have all the problems, and do even more stuff, that makes you hate them even more? I don´t watch that, because i always get angry, or at least a little bit if i see them doing something like that.
Okay that sounds good, well as usually i have more to say in the NIght, because well i just react, and can´t think as good as i want to, so i want to ask, do you mean with (bursting your bubble), the idea i had with Trixie, and the sister working together?
Even if someone can only hate her, Vector makes the story pretty good, i just think it was weird that no one heard of her beside those two times.
Don´t ask me why, but i really like it that the older sister? of trinity had to suffer that much, and still survived, i like it because i suppose to know how much hate she should have right now, if she remembers everything. The near-death experience probably change her pretty much, and i somehow expect her to get really badass.![:scootangel:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/scootangel.png)
Now i remember what you could have meant, you probably meant, that both sisters still like their little brother right? However only to be sure, i just meant that the one that nearly died, could have that little change, but i suppose it isn´t needed, just kill both of the others in the end and the problems solved itself
I get the feeling you can do pretty much with those characters, and the feelings they should have at the moment.
Could it be that Trixie is starting a new romance too?, because she doesn´t remember Spitfire and Buttercup?
In one way i like it, but then i suppose this would end in a heartbreak for either the new, or the old partner.
6299022 Maybe he means to, that someone said, that the partners should usually wait a month at least, at least nothing that looks like they would already forget about their old love, i admit it seems strange for me, to replace that sad feeling that fast, but i don´t really want to complain much about it in this story.
Again, i somehow start to like the older sister from Trinity, just because i can´t stop thinking about the stuff you probably do with her.
6299022 sorry about your friend. no offense, but i think the death of a significant other would take slightly longer to get over than just a friend. if nothing else, Spitfire isn't being very considerate to Buttercup by dating when she is obviously still torn up.
6302952 Thanks for the sentiment. And I guess I get what you mean. But hey, if Spitfire was considerate then where would all that potential drama between her and Spitfire come from?![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
I know that sounds mean but I actually wanted that to be an issue in the next arc.
6335597 Hey hey now no metagameing! That's cheating! And we all know Apples hate cheaters. And MOG you are alive and you missed a lot indeed.
6335734 To be fair how was he able to force out only changelings and not anyone else when Chrysalis was the one who controlled him? Honestly that whole thing was a bit screwy in my mind. So, my excuse, h was in pony form therefore he adopted pony like features and everything else while still retaining his ability to shapeshift and yes that's my cannon.
Fine, I suppose a long chapter is better than a loooooooooonnnnng chapter.![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
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I appreciate the effort.
I like this bit a lot.![:trixieshiftleft:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trixieshiftleft.png)
Did I mention Spitfire is scary?![:rainbowderp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowderp.png)
See, this is why you don't change just one small detail to distinguish yourself from the soldiers. It takes a close inspection to notice it. Bet they would've paused if those six changelings were entirely white with red crosses on their flanks.![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
It just occurred to me you are showing where the heck Luna was during the episode. I like it.
...Oh sweet, Celestia, I'm not even half way through this chapter yet!![:raritycry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritycry.png)
Did I forget about this? Or is this the first we've ever heard of this?![:twilightoops:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightoops.png)
So... these changelings feed different than previously known changelings? Because I remember it was mentioned a few chapters ago that changelings just needed love for magic, not to live.
Poor Trixie, Buttercup, and Spitfire.![:fluttercry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttercry.png)
The doctor was Vector? Well, that's interesting.
Wait... Spitfire is supposed to forgive Vector? For what? It's not like she has even the faintest idea what Vector's involvement in all this was. This whole scene strikes me as weird unless Spitfire is perfectly aware that Vector is evil prior to this, and just isn't entirely sure how much of this is her fault, but pretty sure some of it must be.![:rainbowhuh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowhuh.png)
Always nice to see Maud.
Sweet baby Luna, I've made it! It's over! Maud, gimme some of that water or I'm gonna die!![:raritydespair:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritydespair.png)
So we end on Vector executing the final stage of her plan to get into a relationship with Spitfire. You know, part of this greatly amuses me because either Vector has no idea how abusive Spitfire is in her relationships if you don't have the strength of character to stand up to her, which would mean poor Vector has no idea what she's gotten herself into, or Vector knows precisely that Spitfire get's like that, and she likes it.
Interesting that both Trixie and... uhm, Blaze(?) both survived the experience and appear to be working together, although Trixie doesn't remember anything... I wonder if Blaze(?) does remember?
6292136![:trixieshiftleft:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trixieshiftleft.png)
6298135
Oi, don't make it sound like I was ragging on the story, you evil people.
On Chapter "A deal" this was in the author's note:
To which I responded with:
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See? I was being supportive!
...All of that said, yeah, I totally hate long chapters.![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
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I was enjoying a nice long vacation. Gotta love working with schools, you get to hold to their vacations.![:yay:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/yay.png)
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![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
You'd think I'd have more time to read during a vacation, but nope I do everything except that.
Yes, yes this does mean I read during work hours. Shhh!
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But, but, Trixie was being really mean to Spitfire.![:fluttershysad:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttershysad.png)
You sequel-baiting son-of-a-mare.![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
Also, I am a terrible person, probably, because I really like Vector now.![:yay:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/yay.png)
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(Also, I am sexist, because I still didn't care about our resident colt.
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Great now I have a lot of response. Jerk.
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Sure I don't like long chapters, but hey long responses are OK!
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Now, to be fair your Trixie isn't any better. And my Trixie is trying to help Spitfire.
Besides they always have lots of playful banter, especially in bed.
Funny you should mention that....
Vector did some bad things then but who's to say it wasn't from when they were together?
Guess you'll have to wait.
Who's to say it didn't?![:duck:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/duck.png)
Speaking of long chapters....
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6339510 we're conspiring against you. In all truth, I prefer longer chapters, but i'd rather have a short chapter than no chapter at all. There's one fic that i like that has nice, long, chapters, but literally hasn't updated since i joined the site.
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Well, honestly, when I say 'short chapters' I mean like the length of the text before it hits the comment section of the page, I don't mind a long chapter being cut into parts 1,2,3 that put together are the exact same long chapter.
I'm not entirely sure why I find that more comfortable though.![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
Maybe because it is easier to comment on a 'short' piece of text without worrying I'll get half way through the chapter and then discover it's time to go home without any easy way to save the half done comment. But, really, that's probably post hoc rationalization.![:trixieshiftright:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trixieshiftright.png)
6342816 I'm telling on you! *Walks to your boss* Hey that guy isn't doing his job! Instead he's reading fanfiction! LOL!
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