Trixie and Spitfire fall in love and life is always throwing curve-balls at them around each turn. Join them as they venture through life and all the unexpected turns it has to offer. Now an Arc series.
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It is really weird, I like them and i hate them, and i don´t know what to think about their possible incest thing. It is only in the story and because they have that special relationshipl, it makes them unique?! for the story. Sometimes i really like it if i am a little bit conflicted about the plot or the characters.
Thank you, it was good even if i am still uncertain what to think about them.
She is refering to carving out his ball and searing the wound with a hot iron poker as "a bit harsh" ?
5315131 Just wait till you see what she thinks of when it comes to extremes. .
5314539 That's OK. I'm glad you at least like having them around for story purposes. They'll be central to the plot but as I've mentioned before. I'll be focusing on Trixie and Spitfire a bit more rather than anyone else. I do plan on doing things with Fleetfoot and Star Stripe in the next few chapters so be ready for that.
5315486 I am sure that i have not really something against it, maybe it was a bit weird at first because now all three of them probably have sex with each other at times. Yeah i think now that i had time to think about it, it was probably just a suprise that all of them are somehow together and not. I hope you know what i mean, more or less at least.
I know it seems like i had changed my opinion rather fast, but like i said i didn´t know what to think about it at first, there are some things i don´t like in real, but i don´t mind them as long as they are only fantasy or well yes in a story.
I stop befor it is starting to sound weird.
edit : i wanted to say it is a little bit like you said, they are not my favourite chapters but i want them in this story.
Riiiiiiight. I really, REALLY have grown to dislike this story. Just- It's a chore to read it at this point. A complete and utter chore. If you had kept it to a simple learning to accept and be accepted story it woulda been great! But no. You added a secret murderous, incestuous, overly violet cult that wants to kill all timberwolves. I really wanted to like this story. I did. But after they were introduced as more than just a flashback I grew to dispise it. It was a bittersweet and sweet story about Trixie being accepted for who she is. Now? It doesn't feel like that at all. The original feeling of the story is completely GONE and it's been replaced with...THIS. I loved the chapters up until these three showed up. I did. After they showed up? I just can't stand it. This is my honest, harsh opinion. This story went to crap. Sorry but that's how I see it. It went from a great story that I looked forward to reading the next chapter to something I couldn't care less about.
That is all.
-YBG
5318033 Hey everyone has a preference. I won't hold it against you for thinking so. Sorry you don't like it anymore. Like i said the chapters with the Kindle Trinity aren't necessary to read but if you feel that way that's OK. Sorry you won't be reading anymore.
5318033 I would ask you to give the story one last chance to redeem itself, not that I'd write them off simply, but I won't force anyone to read something they don't like. The Kindle Trinity isn't very important anymore honestly they'll just show up from time to time. They aren't villains to my story if that's what you were thinking, more like a reoccurring antagonist group.
That being said, it's a good thing you're telling me this NOW because I know from experience people won't say anything out of either respect fora persons feelings or they don't want to upset others. I take what you guys say in the comments seriously and try to accommodate them when I can. So even though you won't be reading anymore I'll be considering what you said for the rest of the readers who might not be speaking up from whatever reasons. I can't change if no one tells me what's wrong.
Texus and Corwscrowcrow provide much of the feedback I need to adjust the story to fit my audience which consisted of what I thought four people and the occasional viewer. But I digress, I will be considering what you said from now just so you know I don't blow off what you take the time to say. thanks for your honesty, if a little bit tactless but honest none the less.
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Thank you for a responce. I will continue to give it a chance, but as I said, they took away SO much from the original focus. That's what I was getting at but after having to read another chapter with so little of the main characters and it was so different from the others.
Other Chapters: Foul Language, Yelling, Drama, Some violence.
Kindle parts/chapters: Genital mutilation, incest, sex and indication of sex, Violence
You see what I mean?
Anyway. Good luck with this.
5320191 Well thanks for the info anyway. I just had a few things to do for the story and now I can focus back on what the story was originally about. Trixie and her life. Always tell me when you feel somethings off and I can make improvements. Hopefully i can keep you interested. Just know it won't be the last time I have the Kindle Trinity though, but not for a while.