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does this mean big mac might come for a visit?
Woo! More Twilight!
Well, having an OC in was cute. Helped break it up, since so far he's only been screwing the main ponies, and that's what everybody does (even if you do it better) But now I want to find out more about Twi and her jack-ass boyfriend, and Zecora! Pleeeaaassee tell me we're gonna get a Zecora chapter soon!
YEEEEE happy to see this story live :D
You have been teasing at Zecora for so long. You're going to do it, right? After much fanfare and awkward conversations between her and Guilty?
I understand, I do. Writing Zecora faithfully has been the downfall of many a fanfic author. I have confidence in your ability, however.
this story has character development. that is rare. i like that.
This fic has been a pleasant surprise, not at all what I expected.
You see, there is little I hate more than clop for clop's sake.
I don't mind stories insinuating sex, or even outright saying it happens, but when it gets explicit, it gets harder for me to take.
So when I see a story that's just sex because sex, I get annoyed then leave, and that's kind of what I was expecting here.
Usually when you see a story with something like "He has sex with a lot of mares and gets paid to do it." in the description, it's hard to imagine much else.
But, I don't like to judge books by their covers, so I figured I'd give this story a shot.
Boy, am I glad I did.
Everything about this story is well-done. The characters are compelling, even the "bad" guys are shown to have one reason or another. The storytelling is wonderfully executed, with perfect pacing and a genuinely intriguing plot.
But what I think really elevates this story is that you don't focus on the pervy parts. Instead you focus on the emotions and interactions; the other side of the escort's life. That's a rarity just about anywhere, and you pulled it off magnificently.
I am genuinely loving this story, and I can't wait for more.
YES!...*hoof pump*
*reads the chapter*
how do i give you money? i want more of this this amazing story!
you have a VERY well rounded charicter that has just the right set of mind that i love and just the right amount of nonchalant sex. it's not the sex that gets me in it's the thought and how you turn for example taking a shower in the first chapter into Entertainment pure and simple and let me tell you
I am ENTERTAINED bravo good sir!
Woo, good chapta!
I wonder who Twilight's boyfriend is....
Also, isn't Spike only a couple of years younger than Spike? It kind of seemed as though he's younger than he appears in the show.
Anyway, I love this Fic!
a story with some clop mixed in...im in
2384512 "does not compute. MALFUNCTION!" explodes in a ball of fire, sparks and arcs*
you might want to give that sentence a read over, but I presume you mean Twilight
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Lol yeah I meant Twilight
Teehee, this was updated on my birthday! You have great timing~
And thank YOU so much for letting my OC be in your fabulous story <3 Can't wait for more~!
Updates reading...
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Intresting... Hmmmmmm... I wonder how guilty will fix the spike thing.
Great chapter as always
Love the plug too
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Lol. Awesome.
Yet another great chapter. Really the more your write, the more and more I love Guilty and hope things work out. Even without all the details, we know enough to know he's not had a good life before this, I really hope he ends up getting happier time ahead.
Though kind of sad he's that against stallions. Crushes any hope of my OC enjoying his company.
I really love this story so much. I enjoy the way Guilty is learning he's not the faceless escort in the stable on 12th anymore. The way he's stopped gritting his teeth and lying to himself about who he is and what he wants. The way he deals with living in a small town where people know you.
He has a problem with stallions thanks to his father.....
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Interesting observation... I don't think that's quite it though. If that were it, I think he would more than simply dislike it.
Im enjoying all the psychology going on in this.
wow i love this story is so cool
I found a very minor thing you may want to edit.
That should be "off".
Fucking lost my shit!
Totally wasn't prepared for that
This story is one hell of a rollercoaster ride Genius story
Guess as a girl one learn a nice practical thing or two.
Neat