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Nice chapter!
Swearing derpy is funny derby :3
Has anyone told you recently that you write the journal style really well?
This is fun, interesting and compelling stuff you got here son. You deserve all the exposure - and way more followers.
You have extremely good characterization, I like how you use Applejack as your antagonist without actually making her completely unlikable. (Although I'll admit, I wanted to give AJ a smack for the derpy comment.)
A mustache for you.
I should do an in-depth review of this someday.
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If you do, make sure to throw me a PM! :D
Oh, and thank you. ^//^
As usual....this is awesome. :)
Another brilliant chapter!
Im glad you finally updated this! I really missed this story
Dude, this is becoming one of my favorite stories ever!
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^///^ I'm glad you think so.
Good to see Guilty finally getting some support.
So comments sustain you! Well eat on this one!
"She" got typo'd to "he"
DAMN YOUR CLIFFHANGERS! I WANT MOOOORE!
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Thanks for the catch
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Lol, I have a degree is physics. I've never had any formal training in writing outside of a "Writing for the Natural Sciences" class.
A wonderful chapter, as always.
And it already ended...
Though, they´re over 8000 words long, they always seem too short.
Because one doesn´t just absorb the words, you vacuum them up.
The best line in anything ever.
Great news! Added to my ever-expanding of favorite/good fanfics on my userpage :D /)
Half way through AJ's little tirade I saw it coming. When she said her bushel analogy I stopped reading I wanted to punch her so hard. No one even seemed to notice, until the words sink in. I really liked the emotion of this scene. However Crook whatever your planing for Applejack stop. Call it off stand her up, because if mess her up it will only end badly for you and Guilty.
So I guess with those last few lines he said he is definitely going to mess this up
Awesome chapter as always. Can't wait to see what happens at the "Girl's night", Especially if "someone" lets something "slip" during conversation.
This story is the _only_ story I have set to receive notifications for through E-Mail. It remains my favorite reason to visit this site. Looking forward to the next installment. Keep up the good work!
The edge of my seat is getting worn out by you and your story T.T
I cannot express how much I love this series. It's so wonderful and you keep everyone in character yet add depth. I LOVE it
Your writing style is amazing and I am super jealous I didn't think of this before
But still... Write moar!
Please?
Aw man, why'd you have to put that authors note there? I was half way through planning my unnecessarily angry white russian rant!
Anyway, cool chapter as always. I wonder if it occurred to Guilty he was going to a get together populated almost entirely by ponies he's slept with. Could be slightly awkward.
I'm getting some bad vibes off Crooks possible plans for Applejerk. I can imagine him getting all cozy with her and then suddenly "by the way I'm a whore HUE HUE HUE".
YES, YES, All of my YES!
I've been looking forward for this to update.
But now that I've read it, I feel kind of sad, knowing I'll have to wait a long time for the next chapter, Its agonizing!
I found an error!
But I forgot where it was.
Oh well.
Uh...no comment. Just gunna spotlight that one.
yes very good very well done!
Something has been bugging me for a while and I finally figured out what it was... I can't look at showers the same way. Whenever I take a shower I always think of this story and Derpy making it a cold shower.
Ah well, anyways... I've really been enjoying this story and I look forward to more. There are a couple of things that I normally hate to see in a story, but due to your style/format having *sigh* in your quotation marks doesn't seem to bother me.
I also really love the development with Applejack, though I do wish someone could sit her down and talk sense to her... though I guess the way she's got her mind set the sense would likely bounce off her thick skull.
Ga! Really looking forward to the next update!!
I say applejack you need to stop being a bitch and take a page from your friends books and practice love and tolerance and get over your issues and stop all the drama, and look you even got derpy involved and....you called her stupid......she called derpy stupid...SHE CALLED DERPY STUPID!!
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love this story keep it up:3
I can't wait until the shit hits the fan in a big way. I know it will thanks to all the buildups going on.
I just wonder how it's gonna happen. Applejack getting put down in a big way maybe?
This chapter was awesome! Finally got to see Applejack put in her place and by Derpy no less even though I honestly wanted her to keep going and really explain to Applejack why she was in the wrong. Still an amazing scene though so I can't complain. I wonder if Derpy will figure out the issue between Carrot Top and guilty? Can't wait to see what happens next in this story. Keep up the great work.
i cannot provide you with more upvotes or likes to sustain you, please accept my hearts.
your not stupid derpy
we love you!!!
(great job mr author... may or may not be working on stuff for this.)
Man, I really can't wait until we bust into his room :P
Good chapter. Take my thumb, its up.
Well that party is going to be awkward. Everypony but Lily has been Guilty's client... Although I swear he mentions Lily as a client the first time he's in town.
If Derpy hasn't said anything this is going to be VERY awkward... VERY
I've been with this since chapter one and I must say, I'm loving it! :D
Finally! I have just been waiting for someone to smack the snot of out Applejack. Kind of glad it was Derpy and not Crook, though Crook would have been funny too.
Awesome chapter as always.
Can't say I really like the way you portray AJ though, it, just really does not seem IC for her, at all. Granted I headcanon that Equestria doesn't have the same idiotic taboos and hang ups about sex humans do, so seeing so many ponies take issue is a bit jarring to me. But she goes way to far with it. Worse because It's a canon character, that simply doesn't feel like herself.
That said, everything else is amazing! Really REALLY enjoying seeing Guilty open up, his interactions with Derpy, simply, coming out of his shell. Things better work out for him in the end, without TO much bullshit getting tossed at him. This story is in my top three for best OC's, alongside Fallout Equestria, and Crisis: Equestria.
Hope the wait for the next part isn't as long, especially given what we have in store.
I normally never favorite until a story is done, in case it goes on hiatus, or the author messes it up, but I don't see much of a chance for the latter, at least. This is definitely becoming one of my favorite fanfictions of all time. I love Guilty so much, and I always love seeing his take on things. He's such a real, albeit introspective, character.
So, enjoy the first fave I've ever given to an unfinished story. You've absolutely earned it!
Loving it!
It will be hilarious to see what you do with the next chapter, I can tell that it's gonna be good! I'm not sure if Lily has ever been a client or not, but it would be funny with either scenario (although there is a certain type of awkwardness when your in the same room with multiple females that you've had sex with...).
This fic is golden man! Only thing that would make it better is faster updates.
Also I think there's gonna be two out comes for "girls night." Either it's gonna go horribly wrong or horribly good...
2 AM, 3 Monsters, and a ton of catchup to do on this site. Life is good.
AWWWWWWWWWW!!!
Please post the next chapter soon.
More, please.
Yay, new chapter!, and it's... damnit cliffhangers
Nice chapter, you do this journal style very well. There were a couple of places where it seemed to drag a bit, but most of it was very engaging, and I was inordinately happy when Derpy really came through for Guilty, and found out she's his best friend in Ponyville. She's such a sweet character, I love her to death, and all the sappy little parts inside my soul want them to have a happy ending together.
That cliffhanger though... I'm interested to see how you do with it. You said awhile ago that you wanted to make your clop scenes more detailed and engaging, so I'm really looking forward to seeing how poker night with the girls turns into poke her night with the girls. a 6 way will certainly give you plenty of chances to let your artistic muse go wild.
To be honest, few stories had ever gotten me to laugh, or chuckle, or feel a little bit of pity.
Every single chapter made me laugh, or chuckle, or whatever. It was amazing man, I liked it. I barely bothered to check it out the first time I seen the title and picture, admittedly. But then I took a leap and I love this story. I didn't expect Applejack to be so horrible to him, and it was such a unexpected twist that is one of the reasons I love this story. The relationships seems like something special, and I feel like I'm reading a book unfolding(Technically I am, this is a escorts journal for one).
Overall, excellent story. You've earned a Watch, a Like, and a favorite.
greatly enjoy this fic of yours, write on!
its currently 5:01AM; I believe I started reading chapter 1 around 10:30PM maybe?
I know i'm reading something good when I forgo sleep to read it. bravo, a like and fav from me