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well, that was a quick edit.
Well, starting the reread. It'll probably take me a bit, I'm going to be rely busy with school.
Thanks a lot for this chapter. It was really a roller coaster from Guilty being scared about his confession, Derpy being afraid to reciprocate due to the loss of her husband, Guilty's shock about being replaced, and the way he parted from Smiles. I got to say that I liked the escorts as Spectacle was entertaining (want him to meet Twilight), New Guilty is funny with how he wants to emulate him, Cherry Smiles makes me want to learn more about her, and Hurricane looks like a riot. It was also sweet to see Crook again and have a nice time with Guilty and Deroy. Thank you so much for the chapter, as it was worth the wait. Hope to see the next chapter soon.
"up but bringing"
"by"?
"Depry"
"Derpy"
" I stopped"
There appears to be an extra space at the beginning there.
I will admit, not what I thought was going to happen, but I like what happened better then what I thought would happen. Confused? i am.
Yay! Great to see more of Guilty's story.
Now we wait for the update in 6 months :D
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JUST ABOUT :D
Weird, this was an invisible update. It didn't show up as unread in my library, but was still unread.
Awesome story, my only complaint is that I can't read more. :D
I keep having to re-read it because I forget everything inbetween updates hehe.
Noooooo I finished, too good!Now I'm going have to wait.....Maybe if I put myself in a coma it would speed the process?
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At least you didn't leave us on a cliffhanger this time.
Loved it.
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YAY!
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Same here. I've had invisible updates pop up on me. I think there's a glitch with FimFic.
It's always so exciting to see this update! I can't wait for the next one, whenever that'll be
Does anyone else think of Cherry Jubilee when Guilty mentions Mama "Cherry Smiles* It's hard to get that they don't look the same.
So....Plume is Coco, right?
Awesome as always. Half-asleep Crook is at least as amusing as awake Crook.
6815341 Happens sometimes. Gotta keep an eye on the feed, since that's not affected.
Ah my dose of Guilty and Pals has been lightly sated. Until next time Champ
Oooh, that was an interesting resolution to the cliffhanger. But it raises its own problems, considering what we know about Golden and Dusty. Derpy's going to want to talk to her best friend about this at some point and things are going to get awkward...
Way to come back strong. Wish there was a fav button for chapters, 'cause this one deserves it.
Yet another strong chapter in one of my most favorite fics ever! Please keep it up.
OMG OMG OMG OMG I haven't read the chapter yet, just really happy to have an update. Going to read later tonight. :D
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Plume is an OC a friend let me borrow. She's an author. She appears in Chapter 8 as well.
Fantastic chapter. Was laughing and hanging on the edge of my seat the whole way through. Especially after the cliffhanger of the last chapter!
Ohhh maannnn...
You have no idea how long I've been waiting for Guilty's character to be unraveled, even if just bit by bit.
I'm eating this up as much as Spectacle, believe me
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Hello! Plume is my OC I made way back when the show started. It's just a weird coincidence that the creators made another mare with a blue bobcut several years later. However, Plume is a unicorn that has brown/tan fur as opposed to Coco's off-whiteish fur.
All the waiting! All the dreaming and hoping! It's here! I READ IT! EEEEEEEEE
So many good chuckles were had. But, but, BUT! Things are going too well. Guilty gonna get rekt soon
The chapter was great, story is great, I'm not bashing because it's all great.
But... I don't know, for a story so emotionally charged, that is sooo good at keeping the audience invested, and with such a massive build up, meeting Ms Smile was... Unsatisfying. Rushed, which seemed to be the intention I noticed, but even if in story she was supposed to feel like a rushed encounter... I don't know. Just didn't resonate right I guess, although I'm probably the only one bothered by this tiny, random problem.
Funniest line right there. And I really, really love the swearing and the love between Guilty and Crook. You've truly got a memorable cast of characters. Thanks!
Oh my gosh, thank you! Every serving of Guiltys awkward romantic adventures is a fraking awesome treat.
This chapter made me even more curious, about what went on between Guilty and his momma.
Always leaves me wanting more...
Worth the wait, though!
Don't you worry about the delay. Quality cannot be rushed, especially if one hits a dry spell.
Damn this has been a fun read so far. I've only just discovered this story, I can't believe I've never noticed it in the years its been running.
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That's because a lot was left unsaid and that's exactly what was meant to be brought across. No one was happy or satisfied,nothing was resolved because of their issues
6819569 I see that was the intent, and I'm not saying it was done wrong. It just didn't feel as satisfying, rewarding, or intense as the character has been built up to be
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Hmm, fair enough...I'm a little sad about that though, I was amused by the thought of Coco needing to unwind after having to deal with Suri all day, but being far too shy to let anyone know she would do such a thing, saw the feather in her cutie mark and chose plume as her non de plume ...lol, ah well....still an amazing story
More guilty! YEEEESSS!!
Stupid update thingie not telling me about it for some reason? BOOOOO!!!!
Okay time for way way more typing and commenting then is ever really needed.
Well, if he DID grab the wrong bottle last night, it's still way to early for morning sickness to set in. Still, the hangovers are your own damn faults for getting drunk so, no sympathy for either of you. Down some aspirin, drink some water and deal with it.
Dang, so no luck with not being able to remember it, though maybe she doesn't.
Sure you could, it would just be rally really cramped.
Wow he is paranoid, not that I don't understand why, but still. Stop freaking out and think for a few minutes, Derpy cares about you WAY to much to do anything over something like that.
And while I do get why, this is starting to get a bit heavy hoofed about it. It's kind of cute, and kind of annoying at the same time. Mostly I just want to reach through the screen and slap some sense into him. You just talked to her and she didn't seem at all different... beyond the mixture of being hungover and possibly still buzzed.
Oh good, so there is still a part of you being rationale.
Damnit story, get out of my head!
That... is one very very oddly worded sentence.
No complimentary breakfast? That is either a really cheap hotel, or one the is WAY to expensive.
Which part? Dealing with the memories, dealing with meeting the ponies you used to know, or talking Derpy out of getting a few sessions there?
Eh pretty much the best thing when you are dealing with a hangover.
<insert overplayed but still required 'weak point' and 'for massive damage' memes here.>
Secondarily, where's Rarity when you need her?
You are not getting out of things that easily Guilty. Besides they have beds there I'm sure.
1. damn that was melodramatic. (and a few places not to clear who was speaking, was able to parse it out, but still took a bit)
2. wait... "last time'? So.... he has more reason then just paranoia to be afraid and so melodramatic? We knew he had that failed relationship before coming to Ponyville but, was that what killed it? Or at least what caused her to push him away or whatever happened? He, actually has more to this then it seemed? Okay story.. that was really well played.
....... ouch..... and then right in the feels...
Wow that is one odd name.
You mean marefreind Derpy, you must still be a bit buzzed.
I fully support this idea. Doubly so if you give some of your clients a few lessons on it. As bizarre as the idea of pony strippers is given the whole, not normally wearing clothes anyway thing. Still a nice exotic dance should work just fine.
For those math/science nerds that find a good brainstorming session just as fun as a more physical one. Or like to have both. Still, I really like that idea.
This.. this needs to happen. ASAP.
And then introduce him to Pinkie Pie. Let Twilight get him to blow one of his heads, Pinkie will make the other one go.
Derpy, you are just to damn awesome.
Well this is going to go downhill fast, have fun Guilty.
Not a bad sentiment and fully understandable. As is why that wasn't the case sadly.
Well, unless he specializes in stallions. Still, good business sense there Guilty.
Oh snap... well then... this is about to get interesting.
Yeah, I get he has issues about servicing other stallions, but just how severe some of his reactions have been is, rather extreme. Then again he is kind of on edge right now. But still, wondering if there isn't something even bigger going on with that.
Oh very much so, doubly being able to see it from Guilty's POV. The 'real' one.
Most often the simplest way is the best. And the one you most often miss.
okay that line was amazing.
And given the way his day has been going so far, I'm guessing there won't end up actually being a battle, and the utter lack of it will just leave him so damn confused and off balanced.
Yeah, sometimes conditioning can be a real bitch to get rid of or ignore.
Geee wonder where this little revelation is going Or more likely they both just that they both have special talents for reading ponies?
Called it.
And the best way to get him to stand up to her and stop being so worried about it, just find something to make him angry. Really loving this whole conversation in any case.
And she's going to try and give them to Guilty of course.
Huh so that's the story with the bed, and at the same time, saw her giving him the bits, did not see that being the reason, was expecting something a little sappier or more sentimental. Secondly, how much of his money was he sending her to pay that thing off?
Or, was she being sentimental and letting him off early?
What in Equestria did you get slipped to use that phrasing Derpy?
Hmmm, was it simply being here and reopening old wounds, or the way you acted, being so distant, secretive, acting like you didn't like her or still had harsh feelings, all due to trying thinking SHE still had harsh feelings and just.. a giant mess of nopony actually saying what they meant, or believing the other was either?
I thought those parts were on the upper floor, not the back? So what is upstairs then?
Yeah, might need to work up to that bit.
I'm banking on 'didn't' and that she really wanted was happy to see you and hurt you didn't seem to be happy to see her.
Yeah pretty much that. You way the hell over thought things there Guilty.
Again ti's nice seeing them have their issues, have their disagreements and rough patches, without it always being some big huge, end of the relationship drama. It's just, so refreshing. More so because it makes sense and both sides reasoning is sound, it's not some stupid conflict ball or anything, just a natural issue that they will work through.
Awesomeness incoming.
Of course.
1. Fair's fair Crook. 2. damnit story, I really want some good pizza.
Derpy continues being awesome
Nice little parallel there.
Yes it does, it's been a constant, something firm, and also a tie to her and your old life, now that is gone and.. it's just one more thing that is lost from your old life.
YAY! And thanks for getting back to it, really missed Guilty. Another fun chapter, nothing major but decent all around.
excellent chapter as usual, well worth the wait. It's good to see that Guilty's mess up last chapter didn't screw up his and Derpy's relationship to much. It was good to see Crook again, hopefully we get to see more of him at some point. Hopefully the next chapter is a bit quicker lol.
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I just want to point out. The show uses girlfriend too. Listen to the hearts and hooves day song.
That was a nice chapter, enjoyed it quite a lot.
Nice to see you back in the proverbial saddle and writing this awesome story once again Sir Disco. This chapter was a welcome start to the new year, as well as the relief that things weren't as bad as they seemed with Guilty and Derpy last chapter.
The stable visit was nice to see too. Got a lot of interesting characters there (even though Specks sounds like a bit of a douche), and we get to learn more about the stallion formerly known as Sour's past. Also, admittedly I did think the gopher was an actual gopher when he was mentioned.
The wannabe Guilty (Wilty?) had me almost but my gut, and the introduction to Ms. Smile was a nice touch as well, and hopefully we'll get to see more of her and her semi-obvious concern for Guilty soon. Plume was nice too, and Derpy was right, he does need more friends like her.
Anyway, guess that that's all I have to say in this moderately long review. As always, hope things are groovy with you and everybody's doin' okay and that they have a great 2016. 'Am out home skillets!
P.S. Okay I lied a bit I do in fact have one more thing on my mind. Lately I've been wondering what would happen if Guilty's former flame decided to pay him a visit again, or if Applejack turned out to actually be somewhat attracted to Guilty and in severe denial due to her history with his, ahem, job description. As well as how Derpy would react if any one of them did try to make a move on him and if she'd suddenly go all YanDerpy on their asses. I'm not really asking you to put that into the story mind you but just... Curious, I guess, on your opinion of that certain thought.
Good to see one of my favorite stories is still alive
Lots of good old fashioned schadenfreude here.
AHHHHHHHHHHH I NEED MORE NOW
Wait, shit. I'm caught up? Aww, son of a dick. Good story mate. It got its claws into me and I've slowly made my way through Guilty's life. I'm happy to be up to date though. Definitely getting a follow and a fav.
6871831 I guess the stuff I'm used to is just very potent
He must be skilled.
Love the story man, too engaging to fap. So Tea and a blanket does nicely.
More ! !!!!!!