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Holy DEEERP
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You're missing an opening quote before "Hi".
You're missing some ending punctuation, and "paraphrase" probably shouldn't be capitalized.
"Fell appropriate" doesn't make sense. Did you mean "feel appropriate"?
"Guilty Pleasure" should be capitalized, since it's a proper name.
Oh no.
OMG! How can you leve us there!
Nice chapter, but now I'm gonna be on the edge of my seat waiting for the next one
Crook.
THEY visited.
Damn, this is getting good. I'm debating on whether AJ just needs some good lovin...
He'll be drinking soup...... because Applejack kicked his teeth out?
THIS ...is going to get good!
2756086 This had me laughing for a couple of minuets!
I would find this story so much more interesting if is wasn't for the fact that the main character was simply a pony that sold his body and feelings for sex. He could of said something to Twilight, but no... Fake emotions, and a "I am not getting paid so fuck her." mentality is the way he rationalizes it. Typical from a person of his profession. And now his egotistical "Live by your cock, fuck any mare you see" buddy has entered the fray. I often wonder how this story will turn out. Perhaps its the only reason why I am still reading it.
Loved this chapter.
You know normally I don't like reading "*GASP*" in stories, it usually takes me out of the moment. However, there's just something about the way this is writing that it doesn't bother me at all. I'm really enjoying the formatting of this as well. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next... especially since we have Guilty and Applejack and we've already seen how they react around each other but now we also have Derpy and the writer so cleverly introduced her views on making Guilty stay out of the town because of what he does.
I am VERY much looking forward to the next update!!
...oh and I'm also hoping to see some more of Twilight.
please update this soon, thats a hell of an evil cliff hanger!
Still as good as ever though. Derpy and Guilty should totally bang...
...wait... well, you know what i mean
For your first fic, it the feature box HARD
Who the hell is Twilight seeing?!
I have to admit, that is probably the thing I most hope to find out within the next chapter or so. Though I am also looking forward to seeing AJ's reaction to finding out Crook's profession.
Gonna need a big bowl of popcorn for the next chapter. Cause this shit is going to be good.
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INB4 brad , but nah seriously no idea.
oh, fuck. dat ain't gud brah.
I like where this is going.
~N
Another awesome chapter, as always. Love LOVE the story! It is just plain amazing and damn near perfect. the only issues I have with it are all of the competing headcanon type, so not anything I'm going to hold against any story. (I see Ponies on the whole as having Derpy's attitude about sex/what Guily does not the prudish BS that humans deal with.)
Have to say, I had to stop reading for a few minutes when Guilty realized who Twilight was writing to, just so i didn't kill myself laughing. Umm, yeah again an amazing chapter, and so so looking forward to seeing what happens with AJ and Crook.
Oh and BTW found a goof "I asked him once why he bothered, and I just replied that it was more fun. " That second 'I' should be a 'he'.
Hope to see more soon keep u the great work.
2756550 His name was said a few chapters ago, it was some random minor background pony.
2756242 And, that pretty much shows you aren't even trying to understand him. And also are having pretty much the same prudish puritanical hang ups about sex/prostitution we get from AJ and half of the town.
No, he didn't not go to her because he only wants to be paid to fuck her. He does want to help her, and at no point, at all did the thought of fucking her come to into play. That isn't all Guilty does with his clients. he's good at telling just what a pony needs, what to say/do to help them relax, work through their problems. The sex is just part of it, and one he never really seems to mind if it's there or not. The only pony so far we've seen him actively want to fuck client or no, is Zecora.
He didnt go see if he could help because, as he put it, it's what he gets paid for, if he does it for free, he'd starve. I don't quite agree with his decision and do think it would have been the right thing to go talk to her regardless. But I do understand why he made the decision. Simply lumping anything under "Typical for a pony of his profession" is the worst kind of prejudicial, small minded, idiocy. It makes as much sense to say "Typical of a pony of his gender" "Or "a Pony of his race"
Granted I don't really like Crook, but that's cause I really don't like people that act the way he does period. Either RL or fiction.
He we see the social equivalent to throwing TNT, Nitroglycerin, Alcohol, a pinch of potassium chlorate, and Gunpowder into a large box made of C4 in a room that is currently on fire.
Sure, things could work out safely. But do you really expect them to?
Crook and Applejack...
This is going to be priceless hilarious!
Or ending in a brawl...
Or both...
Dear author:
I hate you.
-ShagDragon
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I agree... I CAN'T WAIT TO KNOW!!!
And the cliffhangers continue...
Well, incoming snow fight! :D
2756242 So, you would like this story, about the particular life and exploits of and escort, better; if it wasn't about an escort? Meaning that you would like the story if it was completely and utterly different? Isn't that the same as saying you just don't f****ing like the story?
well shit...thats too bad pinky will be so dissapointed, hope she gets an invite to the funeral
so nice cliffhangeryou got there.....you magnificent bastard
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^This and
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^This, most definitely....
You must needst write moar, my good pony.
This story continues to be awesome. I cheered up a storm at Valiant Defender Derpy, and then nearly fell out of my chair at Crook hitting on AJ. Oh dear, oh dear, oh dear.
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Thanks guys.
You do not have nearly enough followers for how good your stuff is. Seriously.
Especially this. I could read another fifty chapters of the daily life of this guy. Absolutely bravo on a fantastic bit of work. It's great to see a first person OC with so much good character to him.
I'm looking forward to more chapters. :D
Oh crap, this has the potential to end VERY badly.
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2759797 AJ is so damn bull-headed, she has to realize that it wasn't Guilty specifically who 'stole' her mother. Worst coping mechanism ever.
fantastic as always, and damn Guilty's hunger!
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I felt the same way when i finished the chapter... Something is about to be broken.
Oh dear lord Crook and AJ have no clue... dis gonna be baaaad
2775650 Nope, 1st time hearing about it. Might give it a try though. What part of my post gave you the idea of me referring to that btw? :P
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In more ways than one...
So, when can we expect the next chapter of this masterpiece?
Smashing job, btw., love your story to bits.
I officially like the fic and want moar of it.
My guess is that this comes down to not Guilty, but Derpy, who can't understand why being an escort is wrong, getting into a fight with Applejack, who can't see why anypony would think being one is right.
Love this story. If I had a mic, I'd do a fic reading of this story, because I keep reading it aloud and chuckling to myself. I may get a mic specifically so I can do a reading of this.
Gotta say, this is one of the better fics out there. Read this whole thing in one sitting. Definitely enjoy it! I look forward to the next chapter! And hopefully more character development for Guilty as well, you've done good so far, but you can only go so far with the constant sex-capades and stuff. Eventually you'll have to develop his "out of the bedroom" character (which, like I said, you've started and looks like you already have a plan for),
This story is fucking awesome! reading through the whole thing and wow... I was not expecting this. Did a wonderful job on this OC.
I love the way the interactions play out and Derpy is soo sweet. :D
oh one slight mention here... you forgot one of the interesting mare Anatomies... crotch tits... or my fav way of saying them tummy titties. xD
2823105 if u do can i play a character or two ?
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I dunno, it might not work that well as a radio play without changing a couple sentences here and there. Of course, it might work if we go the Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy route with it and make it somewhere in between... Out of curiosity, what gender are you? Because I'm not sure I can do a good female voice, myself...
I demand a vector of this immediately!
Strange how a pornographic story manages to make me wanna keep reading for reasons totally unrelated to porn. Like, I have no interest in porn. All I want is to see how Derpy, Crook, and Applejack play off each other. I hope the next scene isn't just a tense silence followed by a mutual unspoken agreement to leave and ignore each other.