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YES* fist pump*
YAY!
Guilty and Derpy sittin' in a tree
K-I-S-S-I-N-G...
Really? I just finished re-reading the last chapter
uuuuhhh, Carrot Top/Golden Harvest shipping.... i'm calling it!
Oh Guilty,
What have you gotten yourself into....
An excellent addition.
I wonder if Lily put two and two together. She came across as niave, but not stupid. If Golden Harvest is not only seeing an escort, but not wanting to move in with her marefriend... she doesn't really sound very enthusiastic about her bisexuality. Not to mention the whole escort thing. I wouldn't be surprised if Ms. Harvest was single the next time we see her, and blames Guilty for it.
Awesome chapter. Your writing is smooth and warm as always. It is shame that updates is not frequent enough.
Well, if he finally decides to make a move on Derpy, he'll have to get a new job.
Great chapter!
Le Gasp! Is... is this lurid tale of a man-whore turning into a... a LEGITIMATE ROMANCE?!
Mmmmm-mm! All that satisfaction in getting back at Carrot Top is so damn satisfying.
I sense a good resolution in there, though. I know she's a total bitch, but I really hope it's going to happen. Even Carrot Top deserves to be happy, too, right?
Guilty seems to be about to break his golden rule again.
Bugger.
Finally, an update! I freaking love this story and how Guilty finally confessed something. He has so much back story to tell yet we already know it's been hard. What I can't get over though is this Sunny. She's mentioned here and there but we still have no idea who she is. I need more chapters...
Mmm k first ever comment on this site. I absolutely love how this has transitioned from a classic "ship an OC with as many characters as possible" to a romance story. I really hope Guilty pursues his dream of becoming a legit therapist by the end of this ^^ Once this is wrapped up I hope there's a sequel showing his life with Derpy and him helping the citizens of ponyville (imagine AJ coming to see him...oh god the drama)
3083304 Probably not, Derpy doesn't seem too bothered about his job.....
Y'know, I'll admit that after the last chapter ended I was expecting girls night out to turn into an orgy.
I'm pleasantly let down by this chapter though. It may not have been what I was expecting, but it was super sweet.
YES! I love this story and it just got better!!!
Dawwwww...
Yes...just yes.
Lyra and I have a lot in common. I too like cake and sex.
Okay, we've got to see Guilty trying to sort Carrot Top out at some point. He's a brilliant therapist, so maybe he can fix Carrot Top up, I can't imagine she's cheating just because that's what she's like. I'm guessing that there must be some underlying problem for her. (to be fair, I'm guessing also that Lily can't provide satisfaction, she's to naive. Maybe she's a "not before the big night" pony)
I'm still wondering whats gonna happen to Crook once AJ finds out he's an escort as well. As for Guilty being in love with Derpy, already saw that several chapters ago.
Exactly how I expected it to turn out and I'm loving every sentence of it. I absolutely adore this story... can't thank you enough for sharing this with the world.
This could be a difficult thing.. Still loving the story, keep it up!
I have to admit, I saw this coming... Still a bucking good story. KEEP! IT!! UP!!!
Yeah, I was pretty certain as soon as Derpy was introduced that this is where it would go, and that's cool. I'm just kind of disappointed that nothing came of Zecora. I was looking forward to that.
Another good chapter and the ending... pure awesome.
We all knew Guilty couldn't hide from his feelings forever~
Now he's just got to ask her out on a date.
No, Sour Dough, you're a cynic.
Jeff Bridges
Now! Your story has officially qualified for a song! It always has, this is just the first time I've been around for an update, so here goes:
Heaven, I'm in heaven
And my heart pounds fast whenever she is near
And I seem to share her happiness and cheer
When I'm around her, grinning ear to ear
Heaven, I'm in heaven
And the angst that I draw baseless but for my career
Makes the details, like she gambles, so unclear
When I'm around her, grinning ear to ear
Oh I love it when I mount her
And her cute little rear
But that doesn't scare me half as much
As grinning ear to ear
Oh I love to go out hiking
Explore the vast frontier
But when I get her to tag along
We're grinning ear to ear
Come on, my muffin buddy-
What will I do about you?
That charm about you
Will carry me through
Heaven, I'm in heaven
And my heart pounds fast whenever she is near
And I seem to share her happiness and cheer
When I'm around her, whenever I'm around her, grinning ear to ear
Heaven, I'm in heaven
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I'd argue something quite perpendicular to that: She might be halfhearted about her bisexuality, but she obviously love the mare herself, if not her gender, which is something she does take out on Guilty at the moment anyway. If she resents the fact that she loves Lily, but continues doing so in spite of that fact, she's obviously trying to make the relationship work in her own way. It's just rather unfortunate Lily is being caught up in Harvest's shit.
Perhaps some angry sex with Goldie and her comfort pony? I see that, frankly, as a possibility. Moreso the idea of Guilty turning her away, much like he tried to do with Vinyl, and for very similar reasons. It would make a lot of earlier chapter quotes have a nice ring of prophetic foreshadowing to them, like "You're not using the full extent of my services".
Superb. Marvelous. Wonderful.
Shine on, you crazy diamond.
Would you kill me if I wrote something like this except from a Female escort's perspective?
(And seriously, look at the quality of commenter you're attracting here. You're amazing.)
New chapter... SWEET!!!
D'awww Derpy being adorable.
And Carrot Tops expression was priceless, can' wait for her to have to eat crow about how she treats poor Guilty. Glad he's getting in a few good blows. And yeah that mare has issues.
Yes Lily you are.. though I'm sure he'd be more then happy to let you get to know him as good as the other mare's already do.
And leave it to Derpy to be the one to not keep his job a secret. It is rather nice that she simply doesn't see why it should be though, Pretty much how I see most ponies actually acting. Even Lyra and Bon-Bon are cool with it though, that is great. Poor Carrot Top, stuck being the only stuck up prude in the room. well maybe, still need to see how lily takes it....
Derpy... language.. but, she taking it well enough... though I do agree with the sentiment, fuck this version of AJ.
And Guilty has a rather trollish streak in him, glad he keeps it contained though.
Of course Lyra wants the the story. So would love to be able to see Carrot Top's face through all this.
Wow it's it's just so AMAZING seeing him relax, simply enjoying being around ponies who aren't paying for it, just, having friends....
A pony with his talent for reading people... in a poker match... yeah they are going down.
Now I'm just trying to figure out, 1. How ponied even developed cards given the whole hooves thing, 2. How the hell they are holding them, while sitting the close together, and not able to clearly see everyone else hoof.
Lyra....
Okay.. Derpy winning, by not knowing how good her hoof was... THAT is freaking amazing!
She thought.. it was the....
Also, yay official confirmation of his talent, as if it wasn't clear by now. Also, YES! To him feeling close enough to her to tell her.
That ending.. sweet Celestia that ending....
can't wait to see where this goes... but those two BETTER have a happy ending.... you don't want to make Fluttershy cry now, do you?
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Seems to me more Carrot Top has issues with accepting being with a mare as natural or even okay. She cares for lily, but part of her just can't accept being with a mare. Hence the needing Guilty to prove to herself she's still straight, the never calling Lily her girl/marefriend, refusing to let the two of them live together...
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I know! What sort of depraved fiends does he take us for?
Unfortunately, I find myself wondering if AJ might be unconsciously behind GH's troubles too....
YESSS! You are brilliant. There are no words.
I've loved everything until now, but this chapter, right around that moment when they're outside in the night and the whole world is just the two of 'em.. Damn, but that was incredible. J'adore!
We all saw this coming I guess. It was only a matter of time for Guilty to realize how much Derpy means to him. I'm interested to find out what he's gonna do about it.
Awww... Such a sweet chapter.
3085737 fair point
Another great chapter. I really liked how he handled Lily and Carrot, and just how he checked himself for Lily's sake the whole night. I can only imagine how the rest of the story about Crook went, and Lyra and Bonbon were hilarious, and very in with how you put their characters. Keep it up, man!
And so and so and so, and the month begins again.
considering this story is still incomplete and with the way you ended this chapter I would just like to say one thing: CAN"T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! this is getting better and better with each chapter.
3084829 Tell me about it. FiMfiction is totally lacking some hot zebra action. Zecora's always been one of my favorite characters, but she almost always seems to be so untapped as a character. Maybe it's because it can be hard to write her dialogue.
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I can't tell you how many times I've wanted to write stories about her, but her dialogue is so damn hard because I suck at rhythm and rhyming.
3123083 Hey!! Anybody out there who is good at rhythm and rhyming? Help Mr. Storm out here.
3123713 For the tomes you seek the keep will make you freak. How was that?
That defines me to a T.
I kinda want to hear that story... like a lot...
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“This is Applejack we’re talking about, right? Country accent… blonde… always wearing a hat?” Lily was trying as hard as she could to find any explanation.
“I knocked that hat right off her head!” Derpy declared.
So I read the first line and I'm like, "Yeah..."
Then I read the second line and I'm like, "YEAH!"
I read the last line.
And I'm like,
Then I'm like,
And then I say OUT LOUD, "About time!"