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Always good to see a bit more of a relationship forming between Derpy and Guilty.
I feel for Guilty, dropping the L bomb like that. It fucked up my relationship.
This is the most conflicted I've been in a while, a sad boner... wow this is weird.
I missed ths story so much!
Sooo.. to be honest, I kind of cheated and started reading with the later chapters, but.. wow I love this. The tone of voice is perfect. The characters have that genuine vibe about them, and the interactions are priceless.
And... as a doc of physics, I gotta show some same-field props where they're due.
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Shit, son.
6192367 Grab your Lagrangians because the interactions are flawless up in here. :rofl:
6192372 that sentence mad my head hurt
Ah yes those words. Those three powerful words that can make or break any relationship.
6192378 I'm sure I could create far worse, but that would be rude to this great story. :P
Gosh...that ending is just crazy. Whoops.
Oh my gooood, amazing chapter. Really happy to read another chapter!
This premise would have been so simple to take the easy way out with, but damn it if you don't exceed every standard at every turn.
Well, they've some issues to deal with, certainly, but I'm glad to see that their relationship still seems to be going, all things considered, pretty well.
Im so happy, my inner fangirl is flailing with squee
Its so fluffy i could die!
God this story. I think I've finally really narrowed down what I like so much about this. The way you write characters. You give them such depth, they actually have layers. It's so hard to find that. I especially love how you do things with Derpy. The silliness is still there, the clumsy, good natured mare is still there. But she still gets pissed, she still has thoughts, she still gets emotional. This entire story is so well written when I see that it's updated it doesn't matter what is happening (I mean I'm at my job right now) I stop what I am doing and I read the chapter. This is one of those stories where I wish I found it when it was done. Because the wait, the anticipation, it's agonizing. But at the same time I'm glad I get to experience it right as it goes. Makes want to finally try my own hand at writing but that's a whole can of worms.
Each time you resolve one thing something else appears, or even the problem we thought was good has a new layer to it. It fills me with anticipation, excitement, hell even fear for what can happen. I know there are land mines that are gonna get triggered. You leave little hints every now and again. Ah well...Till next time. You take all the time you need. I'm going back to my corner to start making tally marks till the next update.
You know, of all the things I was expecting to go wrong on this trip, that was not one of them. Well played.
Not gonna lie, though, I feel bad for Guilty now. I need to go read something happy...
New chapter new chapter new chapter! Silly Guilty and post-coital awkwardness.
She didn't say it back... She DIDN'T SAY IT BACK.
Oh god, poor Sour Dough, that's got to hurt.
Wow, this chapter was amazing. Derpy's date with Guilty was very adorable.
Fantastic as always
I just hope Guilty grabbed the actual porion, and not the minibars minibottles.
Either way, Derpys happiness is the most important, and she certainly seems to be happy.
It's always a pleasure to read this story, for you to keep subverting my expectations.
I know it might be seen as a shitty thing for Derpy not to say it back... but I think... I think it would be way worse if she said it back just because she felt pressured.
And I think she knows that.
Grrr how can you write characters that are so frustrating but so good at the same time?
Oh, Crook is so going to rag him over that one. Because you KNOW, he's going to hear about it.
The wait just made this better. It felt like everything I liked about the story was amplified. Hopefully next chapter will be a bit quicker, I don't think u can wait that long again especially after that ending.
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Haven't used Lagrange multipliers in a while, that'll change soon though.
I need moar!!!!
....please?
God damn I missed that feeling after you read a good chapter. Thank you for making such an enjoyable story.
When Crook and I were kids we’d blow of school. I think "off" works here.
Naggled?
Twas a very enjoyable chapter.
Polished sheen, indeed.
Thanks for another excellent chapter.
Why do I keep reading this story...because everyone has at least 1 guilty pleasure
I would like to point out that the last time the Clubs won the pennant, the Otter Empire still existed.
More Guilty!?
So much YES!!!
.... Guilty going back to Manehatten? Well, this is going to be very, very interesting.
You know, he seems a lot more okay with the idea then you'd think he'd be...
Ah, well now.... The question is, did she plan this? get him all nice and sated before springing her trap? Guilty rubbing off on her a bit?
Little self-referential admittance? Yeah the story has become more and more about Guilty's relationship and less about fun sexy times with Ponyville number 1 male escort. But I actually rather like it. Yeah the sessions are still interesting, and still enjoy when they crop up, but seeing there is more to Guilty's life is great. Especially given that until now, there apparently wasn't. Seeing him grow, the story doing so with him, being about more then just random sex. And the story does a great job with it. Guilty is such a well done character, even without the sessions, it would still be an enjoyable story. (Though would prefer to keep getting a few now and then) Plus him and Derpy are just so damn adorable together.
Not to mention how great it is seeing things from this angle. A pony whose never had any sort of long term stable relationship. Just one night stands from ponies who simply want something from him then move on. Trying to adjust to this new way of thinking... so damn good.
Don't most places take your drink order as soon as you sit down, then come back for the food after you've had time to review the menu?
Before I forget?
Called it. Now then.. time for him to panic as he realizes what he agreed to without knowing it.
I am totally on Guilty's side in this one. You can NOT get decent Pizza outside of the New York area. Going there and not getting some, is like going to Philly and not getting a cheesesteak. Or going to Thailand and not getting some new STD.
And even now, after knowing her so well, he still just automatically slips into analytical mode. Working out what is wrong, what isn't being said, noticing the context, spotting exactly what is really being meant..... for a guy, that's like the ultimate super power. I'd expect to be able to fly through a brick wall without a scratch before being able to do that.
Though wonder if she ever calls him out on it, or realizes he's doing it. Being cold, calculating, telling her what she wants to here on instinct.
.... Huh.. so she does. Nice.
Yes, there is a difference between pity, and simple compassion and empathy/understanding.
Yes you are. Though that is a really interesting dilemma and issue for him to deal with. Clearly it does annoy Derpy at times. Yet at the same time, can't see her being TO upset. She cares for him enough to understand why he does it. So interesting hurdle for them to come to an understanding over. I like it. As cute, and perfect as they are for each other, can't have things go TOO perfectly. And this feels like a natural issue to come up between them, rather then something forced into the story simply for the sake of drama, which is one of the main reasons I tend to hate most 'romance' stories, because far to many rely on artificial sources of tension and drama.. or simply one the characters being idiots.
(Also, damn you story.. now I really want some Pizza.)
That's not ominous at all... nooooo. Also, Derpy at Guilty's old Stable? This can go either very hilarious, or very bad....
Or air-chariot, Hot air balloon, or just plain flying in....
Speaking of flying.. why can't she just fly above them?
Let us now partake in the sacred slices of the great deity P'zza. Prepared in a manner that is not the stale cardboard top with ketchup you will find in places not graced by his glory.
I really really freaking miss good pizza... thanks for reminding me of that story.
If they work retail... they don't give a shit about you. Some are either to new to know better, or better at hiding it.
<insert Homer Simpson drooling sound>
I feel your pain Guilty. I feel your pain.
So.. Derpy has a bit of an adventurous, possible exhibitionist streak?
On the plus side, ponies are better shaped for something like this to be done easily. On the down side.... he didn't bring any of his little anti-knocking-up-a-mare potions, did he?
Given the ever growing list of mare's that have engaged your services, and just how many others are coming to accept his job.... maybe be able to change that policy soon?
Ah he did remember. Well, good thing for him, though kind of would have loved to see the results had he not as well. Either way works.
That was a rather unexpected swerve at the end... though it works. Did kind of trail off oddly without any real resolution, and her reaction wasn't quite what I expected. Well, maybe he'll luck out and they'll have been to drunk to remember this.
No matter, yet another really fun chapter. As always. Now for the long long wait till Derpy sees Guilty's old job.
6192271 damn it you made me spit coke everywhere!
6206831 Muahahaha! Sorry. Lol
Sshhh, ooh.
You know what you need Guilty? A slice of pizza. Or maybe a whole pie in this case.
Pizza is the key to happiness. Never forget that.
Also, word of advice to anyone who'll listen, never say anything after sex. 'Cause it'll inevitably be something exceedingly stupid or outright cringe worthy.
I may or may not be speaking from experience.
P.S. Thankys for the glorious new chappy Disco Man!! You wouldn't believe how glad I was to see that the adventures of the entertaining equine escort would still continue. Hope things with him turn up okay by the way.
After all, when you fall, stand right back up an' get back on the ball. 'Cause if you give in, then the pavement will win, and I'll be damned if I'm gonna let a thing I walk all over trip me up like a drunk hobo on crack.
Or something.
Rhyming...
Very good chapter.
Although...I'm confused by the "I love you" taboo. Is that an actual thing? Do people not say "I love you" anymore?
I...don't know why, but that makes me sad.
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It's not that the phrase is taboo in and of itself, people still say "I love you" all the time. The common perception is that it's very easy to say it "too soon" in a relationship.
My only regret is that I cannot like it again.
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Just make a new account, it's fine.
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i did not know that... thank you.
This story and to talk to one friend is pretty much the only reason I get on anymore.
I thoroughly enjoyed this work, and am eagerly hoping for new chapters!
Please sir, I want some more...
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Finals are next week. After that i'm going to try and finish up the chapter i've got started. Hopefully I can get two chapters out before i go back to school in late January.
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Please. I love this story far too much now.
YOU'VE STOLEN MY HEART ;_;
So, hey:
If Guilty is the stud, and Derpy is the muffin(mare)...
Is HE the stud-muffin, or is SHE?
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Stud-Muffin is their Brangelina, clearly.
This is damn near canon.
Oh hey, you're back in the Featured Box somehow.
Hmm. My library said there was another chapter titled 'Family', but when I actually open the story it's gone. Did you post it then take it down for some reason?
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It kinda vanished. MY HOPES. ARGH