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Soon... and First
Then again you're the kind of guy that would make us wait multiple chapters for Fluttershy to visit... There is precedent with Zecora
P.S. If you make it a non-sexy Fluttershy visit I will love you... If you make it a sexy Fluttershy visit I will be highly intrigued .
More of the best OC on fimfiction?
HUZZAH!
Also, great chapter. Applejack is going to be surrounded on all sides by her friends who want her to stop being a biatch. I'd feel sorry for her, but that would mean accepting her logic, which I can't.
Whatever.
Love this story.
Wish I could write like you. *sigh*
These updates are well worth the wait
This is truly a birthday gift i enjoy <33 thank you author, you do care about us :D
hell yes yellowquiet apointment incoming and happy birthday.
............oh god yes
Awww yissss more purple smart
Can I just say mantle rays are the coolest fuckin thing ever?
Because they're the coolest fucking thing ever.
Another beautiful chapter, check!
Congrats on getting featured!
Ah yeah! I kinda figured Fluttershy would get thrown in at some point. Totally looking forward to it! .
Now to see if Applejack will come around towards the end. Although, I would imagine this signalling the end of the story. Which I kind of don't want any time soon.
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Oh, I can feel sorry for her.
It's just that I feel sorry for her in the way I do for anybody who desperately, DESPERATELY needs a therapist, that's all.
yeah, next appointment fluttershy
That's...vaguely ominous...
Also, I love how weirdly awkward the mere concept of Guilty's relationship with Derpy is. Normally, the intimacy of sex is something reserved for the deepening of a relationship and is often a signifier of serious commitment. However, Guilty earns his living trafficking in that intimacy, much like it were a commodity, which adds a whole new awkward dimension to his relationship with Derpy. Here's hoping it doesn't all fall apart on him.
Also, Applejack appears to be losing ground as Guilty has essentially been winning over all her friends one by one. It also sounds like he'll be getting Fluttershy as a potential client in the near future, which means that all five of Applejack's friends will have been Guilty's customers...I wonder how she'll react to that.
Those mantle rays may be leading into some big happening that calls the 6 away from ponyville for a while... That's what my writer-sense is telling me anyway...
That having been said, even if they don't they're still cool as all gecko, and I hope that after Flutters say's the little guy's good to go he winds up becoming something like a pet of Guilty's. That'd be awesome. And even if that doesn't happen, I still expect you to do a borderline feels-inducing thing when he leaves town. Because #mantlefeels. I have them now.
Anywhoodle, while some might call this more of a filler-chapter or a fluffy chapter because it didn't get anything important done, I'd have to disagree. If that's the definition we go by then I suppose most of your chapters could be considered fluffy. I call this a building chapter. Guilty's growing as a character, and like a real town should be, Ponyville's in a constant state of flux. And we get to see both of these points because of this "fluff" some may complain about. I like fluff.
Good chapter, will probably read again. Because #mantlefeels.
*Applejack Bursts into the room* "You Rotten, Manipulative, Bastard!" *Bucks guilty through a window*
Guilty: "Twilight, you lied to me!"
Manta Rays are back and on an exodus to boot! I'm going all in here: Something big will go down by the climax, and it will probably involve a Volcano. Damn, if I'm right this fanfic is going to take a turn waaaay off of Slice of Life Boulevard straight onto Adventure Highway.
aw yeah next chapter fluttershy
Wait, seriously? You think Twilight is best pony but your only story has very little Twilight? Very little Twilove for a Twilighter.
more more more more!
.. pretty please
with sugar on top.
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Definitely one of the better fan-created species in Equestria.
Speaking of mantle rays, I'm wondering if that bit about the weirdness with them was foreshadowing or just a bit of background noise to remind us that the Mane 6 go on adventures and shit like five times a year. I'm half expecting that while they're off fighting Grogar and his legion of mind-slaved mantle rays, we'll be focused on Guilty proposing to Derpy. I also like to imagine that Applejack will be on such a victory high that she hires Guilty, because after saving the world she deserves to get laid, damn it.
Ok, this is my first time, I think, commenting on that story and I got to say that it's great. I've watched Guilty's rendezvous with his clients and I got to like them due to both their erotic content and Guilty's characterization. Guilty is the most complex clop OC I've seen on the site due to his complex past as a stud, his comraderie with Crook, his conflict with Applejack, and his increasing socialization with Ponyville, along with growing doubts regarding his profession, due to his interactions with the Mane 6 and growing feelings for Derpy. Overall, this is a great chapter as Guilty is finally confident in going into Ponyville, he managed to earn the friendship and possibly a request for future service, if their blush upon being alone with Guilty is an indication, of Twilight and Fluttershy, and he might get himself a kickass pet with that ray. Two questions though. Is that rumour of Silverspeed and RD true or just fake gossip? Also, is this the filler chapter you were talking about in your blog or is the next one, or two if I'm mistaken, with the OC the filler? Anyway, I cant wait for the next chapter.
Perhaps Guilty gets the mantle ray as a pet?
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Twilighter. Twilight-themed cigarette lighter? Does it have purple flames?
Featured again. Looks like people like Mantle Rays, dead forests, and awkward conversation.
Fluttershy next, and I thought Twilight was adorably embarrassed.
Reintroducing the Mantle Rays. Feel like I've heard something similar before.
Derpy's steadily developing the relationship, or whatever it is at the moment. Only thing that is unknown is Applejack. I would be nice to eventually see some sort of reconciliation with my favourite pony, I think Carrot Top makes a better antagonist, she certainly seems quite hostile to the idea of Guilty's relationship with Derpy.
Anyway good chapter, I look forward to the next.
4029669 Twilighter-> One who Twilights. Twilight-er.
Awww hell yeah!
Still probably one of the best fanfics on ponies I've read. Twilight is so cute here x3. Not sure what to expect with a Flutters session.
Yay for Fluttershy being intrested in what Pinkie said. Wonder if after a couple times, she will pick up enough to carefully ask about Guilties Big freind.
Twilight needs another couple appointments also. Her batteries or magic gem might need replaceing by now.
Another great chapter here. Lots of set-up, so it'll be interesting to see which little bits pan out to something.
The mantle ray is awesome and I'm hoping we get some more cute scenes with him & Guilty as he gets a bit closer with Fluttershy--the inevitable showdown of AJ against all her friends looms ever closer. There's a part of me that wishes that the mantle ray becomes a pet even though he's obviously way too big for that, but I'm expecting a nice heartwarming farewell at the very least.
More Twilight is always appreciated, especially since now she doesn't have a boyfriend to worry about, I think she may need an appointment to blow off some steam.
Next chapter will be Derpy again so yay!
Some people have been talking about it in the comments here so I figured I might as well weigh in; the weird mantle ray behaviour is obviously setting up an adventure plot. I think it'd be neat to have the mane 6 go running off for it, but please don't involve Guilty in it. I figure that's probably your plan, to show that a larger life goes on around Guilty even if he's not a part of it, and I think that's awesome. I just fear that this story might try to morph into adventure, like I've seen so many other great SoL stories do, and it doesn't tend to pan out well.
Anyways, can't wait to get my hands on the next chapter.
4029608 As cool as that would be, I don't think it would be very practical, he isn't in a good situation to have a pet, particularly one that appears to need a good heating every now and then and also grows to be massive.
However, this is one of the times I wouldn't mind being wrong, it's the first original pet idea I've seen in a fanfic in ages.
Also nervous Twilight is adorable.
I look forward to the confrontation where everypony likes Guilty except Applejack, not because I want to see Applejack completely slammed, although I hope there is some of that, I look forward to the interactions that you seem to write so well.
Lol fluttershy really?!
4030009 Where's the fun in being practical?
I honestly saw this on my favorites YESTERDAY and thought to myself, 'Looks like it probably won't be updated for a while'
I am soo happy to have been proven wrong1
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uv29l-TH9Po
4030115 Not so much that being practical all the time is fun, as much as being impractical too much can really take away from an otherwise good story.
very nice
Fluttershy chapter?
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Good work on another fine chapter.
This is a prime example of why I like stories like this, plot development (and no I didn't mean that as a double entedre). In this chapter alone, you have character development where Guilty starts looking out for the little guy and puts more serious thought into an actual relationship. You increased his friendship progress between Mrs. Cake and Twilight. You introduced him to Fluttershy in a way that puts him in a good light and possibly prompts a session with him in the future (which would make 5 out of 6 elements). But what I really like is that it isn't all sunshine and rainbows (and I'm not talking about the snow). There is still conflict between him and Applejack and Carrot Top (which is interesting considering their supposed rivalry between each other) as well as the continued uneasiness many in town have around him in public. Finally, I love how stories tease you with some unusual or suspicious happenings that portray a mysterious event being arranged in the background, i.e. the behavior of the mantle rays. I can just tell this story is going to get even better. Keep up the good work.
Ahhh...I like this one
Oh my gosh, I love this story so much! I read all the chapters in one day and I'm so excited it updated! Keep up the good work!
I see what you did there. Well played.
As for the chapter itself, I like it a lot. Guilty is being awesome again, we finally got the entrance of Fluttershy, and I was just thinking to myself after the last chapter that I wanted to know what had happened with Twilight. As much as I like the way you write the various conflicts in this story, the way you do these simple slice of life chapters is every bit as fantastic. I've only just finished the new chapter and I already can't wait for the next one.
"Oh, well hello there." Charming smile. "I've been expecting you. You know, that's awfully teasing of you to keep a stallion waiting. Please, come in. My name is Guilty Pleasure, and I'll be your escort for this evening. I assure you, I'll take care of your every ne—"
"What? Oh...that? That's just my...my mantle ray. He's completely harmless, really. I promise, you won't even know he's here." Calmly pour the tea. Ooze self-confidence. There's the music track I started, right on time. "Now, please, Miss. Tell me abou—"
*Seductive Blurble*
"Oh, no you don't, that's my job. Get out of here!" Stifle sigh, straighten collar. "Anyway, where was I—"
*Sensual Fin Caress*
"No, stop that! Miss, wait plea—"
*Slam!*
Sigh.
*Derisive Chitter*
"I swear, if that was you blaming me for this I'll turn you into living room decor, you floating rug."
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Yep, that decides it. I've put off sleep long enough. I'm now obsessed with the escapades of an escort and his overeager mantle ray, and delirious. Great chapter, amigo.
4029608 PLEASE GOD YES!!! I seriously would die of happiness if Guilty got Ray as a pet. It would be so hilarious to have a new client visit, only to have a warm creature wrap itself around her and freak her out!
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Somepony's pumped.
A very beautiful new edition to what instantly became my most favorite story on the web from the moment you first mentioned Derpy! Keep up the amazing work, but do try to consistently release new chapters.... death by anticipation is easier than many are lead to believe.
Urgh, it ended so soon...