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YAY another one!
Commence reading!
And another great chapter, really loving this story, and Guilty, well it's just amazing how well everything about him comes through. You really feel for him, I'm loving it. And feel free to indulge in OC's if you want, some people need to just relax on that topic.
And as to the sex, yeah I really like the rather mellow, non-graphic way you describe it. it's happening, but it isn't the focus, the focus is on the ponies themselves, not what they are doing, but how they are feeling, and again I really love that type of thig, glad to hear you have plenty of chapter planned out, keep em coming.
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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoy it. Tell your friends, I need more readers. :P
This is a nice read and a good bar above the rest of the stories I have read. I look forward to the next chapters. Reading hasn't been the same recently but this got me back in the swing of things. I thank you for brightening my holiday with your hard work.
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Thanks a bunch
My goodness, I absolutely LOVE this story. Every time a new chapter is posted it just rekindles my thoughts on how great of a read it is. You really deserve a lot more praise for writing this, and I eagerly await the next chapter
There's three fics that I can't wait for new chapters for. "An Escort's Journal" is my number one!
Derpy didn't go how I thought she would, still an enjoyable character though.
And I don't think derpy paid him, or at least you just didn't mention it.
As for Golden Harvest, I didn't really care that she was the 'bad guy'. I actually find it attractive that it was emotionless pounding with her.
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You are correct, it looks like that bit got lost somewhere in editing. I will make an effort to work that in soon.
Maybe you should try an orgy with a bunch of mares at once, just to mix things up. Maybe bring in Lyra, Bon Bon, Colgate, and Berry Punch?
Would also like to see a chapter with Cheerilee. Could get interesting.
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The only reason I haven't got her marked as a character is because She's really only in the one chapter. If I begin marking characters as they visit Guilty, I'm going to run out of marks in a few chapters. You can only mark five characters for any given story. (which is silly)
Derpy is only marked because I plan on having her be a recurring character.
That said I'm very happy that you found my story again.
In the event that I plan on bringing back other characters, I may mark them in the future, but at the moment, I have no plans to bring any characters back in a meaningful way, so I don't particularly want to mark them.
Thank you for reading, and keep an eye out.
You... You just... I love you. Your writing is astounding. You make it seem like he's a person. Don't for the life of you stop.
Oh my, I just.... I'd like to give Guity a hug, and let him just be held by somepony for a few minutes withought needing anything in return.
Oh wow, good chapter!
That description of a sated, half-lidded Derpy made me think of this picture.
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And just like that, Derpy is the ultimate woman.
the most adorable jane ever!
And i have the inclination that guilty needs a hug
Honestly, I really, really want Guilty Pleasure to reveal of who he really is, his past, where he is from to nice mare that he can actually love and call his own. Make that happen man!
Very nice, I didn't love the whole breakdown in the shower, because I think if you're going to do what Guilty does (And I confess I see him less as an escort and more as a sexual therapist It's a real job) you need to have dealt with your demons. The shower scene really makes it feel like he hasn't and he's all emotionally busted up inside. I could just be assuming though ^^;
I feel I might have commented on this before, but it's just such a funny thought I'm gunna quote it again. How many times have you heard someone say "No time for pants" in a serious, justified situation?
derpy needs a "doctor"
With good sex, in my humble opinion, this makes it a nearly perfect day.
I have to say I find this interesting.
I really just gloss over the clop, but the other parts, about the characters, I find fascinating. It's interesting to read how the situations affect them, especially Gullty Pleasure. If I could meet an actual person like him, I would absolutely do a little psychological study on him.
Very nice character and story development, basically.
3221002 I had been thinking all day about a way to describe the way I thought about this story and you just happen to already have written it.
You, dear captain, I like your flow of mind.
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I think this series is screwing with my sexuality. I'm also starting to fear commenting on every single chapter I finish, but this is truly a great story.
But maybe perhaps the bad guy of the stoy could possibly be the protagonist himself!
........wow, a clop story that is pretty well written. impressed, very much so. gotta see how this narrative goes along.
did not sense any out of character moments........ well outside the whole using a male prostitute thing.
Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes. I haven't even finished reading, really only just started and I already love it. SQUEEE!!!!! I actually recently posted a thread asking for Derpy stories, cuz I was having a hard time finding any, and yours was the first to pop up. I am enjoying every second of your writing and hope that you gain the secret of immortality so that you can write till the end of time. Keep it up
Nice chapter. Also, I found a minor thing you may want to edit.
That should be "weather"
Whoa. Really, you pull these colorful and well defined characters from your hat or what?
This really lets me connect with the protagonist. If I didn't know better, I'd say you took a lot of inspiration from the story 'Room 219'. It's as captivating and amazing to me.
I call bullcrap. There's NO way this is your first fic. It's way too good. I mean...yeah it's a pony clopfic yaddayadda...but Guilty Pleasure is a deep character. This is freaking well written. I'm really impressed.
Damn... That a very tough end... Great story. It has its cloudy highs and its ice cold lows...
Brilliant work
Why is the best fanfic I've ever read a MLP smut fic about a male escort?
Seriously, this thing is pure, solid gold.