A young man named Dave, while writing a personal journal about his perceptions of liking the show "My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic", is unexpectedly whisked away into the land of Equestria, where his memories about the world even being part of a show are erased, leaving him lost in an unfamiliar land. Luckily, help comes to him in the form of a pony named Pinkie Pie, who immediately dubs him her new friend, and introduces him to life in Equestria...
Cover art done by Redback Spino
Editing: Firebirdbtops
Chapters (137)
Yes, yes, I realize this is another Human in Equestria story, but it's just my own take on it. There's nothing wrong with experimentation.
more please.
One of the better HiE's I have seen. You have earned yourself a follower.
“Well, ponies with wings, but yesiree! Unicorns, too!” "
I'm not sure I understand this line... the 'Unicorns, too' I mean. I didn't understand why it was said. At that point they were talking about the protagonist being silly because only pegasi could walk on clouds. And then 'Unicorns, too' is thrown in leaving me awfully confused as to WHY that was there. The story is an interesting idea though.
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I suppose I did make that sound a little strange, looking over it again. I had meant it to mean that pegasi and unicorns both existed in their world. I'll try to fix it. Thank you very much for pointing that out.
This is my most recent chapter, so it may not be too soon that I have the next one ready, but don't worry, it'll come when it comes. :)
I'm honestly surprised there aren't that many comments on this story. I'd thought there'd be a lot more.
Anywho, this story is awesome and for some reason makes me feel like I can picture it in a first person point of view in a vision type way, know what I mean? And I mean easily able to vision it and stuff
Your story is awesome and you should feel awesome.
and watching story.......its good!
hmmm what is she hiding. and for some reason i think ists somthing to do with cupcake...darn that cupcake story....
It's a trademarked Pinkie Pie party. Calling it right now, and as Celestia is my witness, I shall eat a bowl of ice cream if it is not, lest I feel the wrath of a broken Pinkie Promise. Cross my heart and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye. Btw, eating a bowl of ice cream is not a treat to me, as I'm lactose intolerant.
I half expected Pinkie to come across with "It's-a me Mare-io".
I can't wait for this! My power was out for a week so I couldn't see if you posted another chapter! It made wanna go to a power dude or whatever and drag him ti my street with the transformer. I was prepared ti hold him at gunpoint until he fixed it.
>>DashieForLife Then maybe you should've done like a cone or something. Oh well, to late now. And if you break it.
With this chapter, I want to say that I was largely inspired to make this whole story by PWaaMLPfim's awesome MLP/Ace Attorney crossover, Turnabout Storm. If you can spot a reference from it, let me know in the comments. =) You guys have been awesome with all your support thus far.
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Wow that is so wierd, I just watched Turnabout Storm. Only finished the first 2 parts though, so idk if I'd be able to recognize the reference. Also, called it; Pinkie Party.
If you have it that Pinkie will get feelings for Dave I will do this;
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Relax, this isn't meant to be shipping. I'm just trying to label it as Pinkie being Pinkie.
877505 Good because I already have a story with that happening, except it being Twilight, Fluttershy, Applejack and Rarity.
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Sorry. I'm just always worried about faithful character portrayal when I do this kind of stuff.
877534 It's ok, and atleast you have people reading your fic, can't even get one to read mine.
It's like I wasted an entire weeke-
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For those who have read the current chapter, I apologize if some of you confuse it as being part of a shipping, especially at the end. I don't intend for there to be any shipping within this story. I just thought it would be a cute interaction between Dave and Pinkie, and I was trying to keep it within 'Pinkie being Pinkie', so I don't blame you if you take it incorrectly, but I just wanted to clarify. Savvy? =)
The ending is cute. It actually makes me wonder if its like hugging a teddy bear or a fluffy pillow.
Eh , oh well.
You haven't by-chance read Burlap have you?
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Nope. Why?
883216 Pinkie's burp reminded me of it. It's a fic I found on EQD waaaaaay back. Basically, the mane six get into a belching contest. though, Pinkie got disqualified when her attempt sorta backfired. Literally. The giant belch just made me think of it. Here's a link BURLAP. Enjoy!
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Pfft! Just finished. It was the perfect amount of cute, hilarious, and gross.
883306 I know, right? I dare someone to read it and not smile.
883331 Challenge Accepted.
883331 Challenge Failed, most epicly.
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I should add a couple things here:
Please don't mind if I update chapters now and then. It's just to fix small errors. I'm rather picky about them, even if they do miss my notice at first.
With that in mind, if you're reading and see any spelling or grammar errors, don't be shy to point them out.
With this chapter, I hope you guys don't mind if I incorporate some popular fan-isms, in this case, Derpy and Dinky being mother and daughter. I always found it a cute concept, so again, I hope you guys don't mind.
love is in the air
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Not sure what you're talking about. This isn't a shipping story.
Lol, when Pinkie was saying rapid fire hellos, sometime near the end I thought she said Goldenrape, I was like WHAAAAA, but then I looked back and it was Goldengrape.
To quote a robot chicken episode:
"Oooooh, he said grape ape."
"Ah, I didn't hear the 'g', did you?"
940253 It also made me think of that one SpongeBob episode where he greets the whole marching band. Instead of getting knocked over by a stink-ball, they get bowled over with happy!
Stage fright eh?
Good job Twi, you broke Dave.
Nice now would be a good time for Dave to tell Twilight that he isn't very good infront of large crowds.
And this will be the last thing he sees when he meets Lyra static.fimfiction.net/images/story_images/25249.png?1336535358
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That is actually what I was thinking of when I made that bit. XD
AN UPDATE!! YEAH!!!!!!!
Well, well, lucky you! Two chapters in one day! Unfortunately, this is as far as my brainstorming has gotten, so it might be a bit before the next chapter.
Things to note: as I keep on saying, this is not meant to be a shipping fic in the slightest. I just thought it would be cute/enjoyable for Dave to be able to experience these tender moments with the ponies, bond with them a bit better.
Also, the song and dance scene was added in to not only create a random, spontaneous moment, but I thought it'd be heartwarming to see his interactions with Rarity, who's always had a passion for the dramatic.
The song is Dreams to Dream, written by James Horner and sung by Cathy Cavadini in An American Tail: Fievel Goes West, one of my favorite movies as a kid. =)
oh no wardrobe malfunction.
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Again, not quite sure what you mean.
He is talking about the robe undoing itself.
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Funny, I wasn't aware it had. Did I miss something when I was writing it?
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Sorry, I'm not sure if that was supposed to be a joke or not. I'm just trying to keep this story within its "Everyone" rating, while still trying to keep some of the humor.