FIRST!

Entertaining. I shall wait for more patiently. MOAR. SOON.

AND I SHALL TRACK AND THUMBS THIS UP.

I really enjoy your pics in deviantart and I'm really liking the story as well! Hope to see an update soon!

....

I already love it.

Tracking.

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It's only a model.

>>276117276117

YES!!!! YOU ARE FIRST!!! YOU WILL NOW READ AND EDIT YOUR COMMENT AFTERWARDS!!

>>276159276159 You noticed, eh?

my name was used in this story, I will read this later.

>>276201276201 Yeah, buddy!

>>276207276207 yes, it is nice to meet you.

I laughed so hard at Canada thing

Keep at it plz

>>276222276222 Haha of all the countries, I had to poke fun at Canada :rainbow laugh:

I'm glad

I sighed and rolled my eyes when I read the description but as I read I realised it was actually good. Well done sir, keep it up

I'm loving this already!

pretty good first chapter, you've got some good characterization going on! Looking forward to the next chapter; tracking!

On a secondary note, I really hope you are planning on using Joshua and the other humans later in the story. To me at least, they added some good depth.

Dick Small!

Anyways I can't wait to see more chapters!

ahhhh I died again!

I'm Canadian and I find this hilarious!

my swim team captain's name is Connor, so I'm reading all of Connor's lines in his voice.  So far, it's working pretty well.  They're both pretty chill guys.   I look forward to seeing where you go with this.  I like the idea of Connor and Spike being bros.

That awkward moment when you find out a creature you never knew existed can talk.

Awkwardness level: OVER 9000!!!

Dick small probably has a... You know... Just sayin'. :D

Hey, I'm Canadian... Soooo....

CANADACANADACANADACANADACANADACANADACANADACANADACANADA!!!

Best country on earth, baby.

Anyone who hates sparkly vampires is OK in my book.

umm did u have another story just like this, yesterday. soo im gonna untrack that one

interesting, interesting, oh and

CANADADDAADDADAADDADADNADDANDANANANANADADADADDADDAA!!!

AWSOME! SO tracking this.

and... VISUAL VERTION?!?!?

MOAR

NOW

Love it! Can't wait to see where this goes.

>>276497276497 Brohoof!

>>276517276517 Yes, the first one was just a preview. This is the real deal.

>>276704276704 Still trying to finish it. I can't get one stinking image on here. It will have to be on Google Documents.

this pleases me.  

>>276362276362 We'll see

Very good please make more this story has such potential,

>>276159276159 Im sorry. But i will never be able to forgive Canada, however fun to say their name is, for what they did. Not until Bieber is a corpse lying in a ditch.

I like it so far. Conner's reactions are pretty choice, the pacing seems just right, and the dialogue flows nicely.

Also, props to you, Ceehoff. This is the first HiE story I've come across where Spike was the human's first contact. Most authors take either the Twilight or the Fluttershy route. Spike never seems to get enough love.

I'm certainly tracking this one.

>>276728276728 Heeeeeeeeeell yeah.

CANADA FOR THE BACON. Cause' nobody makes it better.

Just uh... Don't ask what's in Pinkie's cupcakes, got it Connor?

Let's see: A unique way to get into Equestria, original names, in-depth characters, AND humor!?!?

There are no words to describe how I fell for this story except for:

Image: http://gifninja.com/animatedgifs/409763/fuckin-genius.gif

>>276863276863

I've seen at least two other stories where the human reaches Equestria via lightning.

Original names? Huh?

Also the picture at the top is broken from here. I will watch and see where this goes.

>>276851276851 Hahaha

Can it be? An HiE story of good quality? Good lord these things are rare! Props for having the guts to do this. I can't wait to see more.

>>276880276880 And for THE LOVE OF GOD!!! DO NOT read the books under Twilight Sparkle's bed.

She takes her first name waaaay to seriously. Oh, one more thing...

Do not go in Fluttershy's shed. EVER. Unless you have a set of medeival armor, a solar-powered mega death ray and a platoon of cyborg attack squirrels. And THEN, you should really give Chuckles a call before the fit hits the shan. THE FIT WILL HIT THE SHAN, CONNOR. SHAN FIT EVERYWHERE.

>>276875276875

What I mean by original transport, is that it hasn't been done to death and this is the only HiE fic with lightning as a transport.

The names are pretty original compared to other stories, most of them having a name like Jim or something to that extent, but the bullies do have cool names.

>>276801276801Well, either THAT, or until he's bludgeoned to death by a shark being wielded by a gorrila like a Keyblade.

I have to agree with most of the above. thats is all

>>276900276900 Siggghhhh.... yet they are total douchbags

Oh ma gawd. Oh ma gawd. OH MA GAWD! TRACKING And Hoof Up.

*reads the beginning*

This story is

*glasses*

Electrifying

Not bad. Moving kind of quickly though. This has great potential! Keep up the good work.

>>276962276962 Mustn't ramble on, though

Well...I'm always a bit dubious about HiE stories, but this one was quite enjoyable. Bravo my good author. I will agree with Master Specter that the story seems a bit fast, but it does not deteriorate from the quality overall.

OOOOOH, i love it, very good definitely following this, i wanna see where it goes

Very well done. I usually avoid this, but once again you've proven that a lot of the writers in this fandom are fantastic. You write well and certain have a good sense of humor. Little things could be worked on, but nothing in serious need of mention.

>>276980276980

Compared to some of the fics I've read this moves at a good speed god I've had ones approach warp speed

>>276740276740

You can do what I did for posting images. Submit them to DA then copy the image's url then use the picture button... It should look like a photo and if done right should end up like...

Image: http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m062ixi7f31r1ecjs.jpg

As a Canadian I found he Canada bits to be The. Best. Possible. THING! Canadacanadacanadacanada!

Moooooooaaaaaar. OWO

>>276159276159 Awww yeah! Manly Men Doing Manly things! The manliest thing to do is to watch MLP:FIM and wear MLP apparel.

Nice job.  You nailed Spike's character, btw.

... no... this is impossible... NO! A HiE fic? That's good? And doesn't have a ton of grammatical errors!

I have read more then 20 HiE fics, including some of the best, and this is the only good one I've ever seen, ever!!!!!

im definately tracking this cant wait to see the mane6 reaction to a human i bet flutershy will treat him like an exotic animal lol

Senior, my only regret is that i found this fic now instead of in 2 months so i have to wait in stead of reading it all in one shot. 5 mustaches for the gentleman.

First off: Why do people like you keep publishing such good stories!

Second off: Why do people like you who publish such good stories only have like 1 chapter out D:

For now I will be patiently waiting for the next chapter... *checks watch*... *Grabs chainsaw*... no pressure, continue.

A true work of art! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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that was a fun read!

i really like the humor used, quite comical.

>>277317277317 You're getting there

When his spaghetti fell all over him and got everywhere, did Connor burst into treats?

Now excuse me while I put on my reviewer attitude:

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Let's take this from the top shall we? We meet the main character, we get his name, a look into his personality as well as an explanation of his everyday life. His preferences and and dislikes are also shown. All in all, a very good introduction to our hero.

Now; the trip to Equestria! To Equestria via lightning? While not completely original, I for once didn't find it so. I actually like the way he was forced out into the hail and completely vanished. Not only did you send him away, but you actually show the ones responsible being sorry for what they've done (or at least made them freak out) which is something that most people doesn't do. Most just sends them off, and then never mention the human world again.

His meeting with Spike caught me completely off guard! It is so rare that writers use Spike as the first being they meet in Equestria. It made me insanely happy to see that you didn't choose the all too cliche "meeting Fluttershy/Twilight"-scenario, but also used his personality in the meeting. Spike is a kid, in it's deepest meaning. He's afraid at times and yet he can be extremely wise. His levelheadedness is what normally saves the days when Spike is involved, and to see him use that here, in the confrontation with a species he has never seen before, was a very nice touch.

Your use of comedy was also welcome. A good dry humor (and I simply love you poking fun at Canada) is always preferred in my books.

For all of this I can only honor you with one thing:

Image: http://images.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/rsz/mlfw2991_large.jpg

Tally-ho!

-Glassed

>>277802277802 Wow! Thank you kindly

Awesome. And the main character's name, and personality, is almost identical to my own.

I'm going to continue reading and pretend it's about me.

A good read definitely, SO tracking this.

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This is way better then my story ^^ Keep it up, and I can learn a lot from you.

Good show, chap.

Tracking it, of course.

Wish I could write like that.

This is some good stuff right here! You have SO just been tracked and followed!

Ceehoff, seriously, the part after he woke up in Equestria sounds just like me.  Man, I gotta write a story, but it sounds hard.  Maybe we could work together sometime?  Put me and you together for a second story, maybe after you get home in this one, like a sequel maybe?  It would be AWESOME!!!!  Sheesh, I really should get to typing.

This is great! carry on writing please!

Tracked!

Good story, not cliche, tracking

Ooooh I hope u update daily dood~ This is great!

Sweet!! Love it!!

>>Ceehoff

SWEET *brohoof*

Interesting story, I'm looking forward for next part!

Some constructive criticism: Spike doesn't seem surprised enough and neither does Connor. It would be nice if you wrote more about emotions and focused less on dialog.

So that's how you get to Equestria?

...

*goes outside in middle of lightning storm* COME ON NATURE! SHOW ME WHAT YA GOT!

Yukito was never found again... unless u count a smoldering pile of ashes =)

This in itself is hilarious. Classic comedy. Onward!

Canadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanada

Human in Equestria is done to death. So much so that Sturgeon's Law can apply without much sampling error. Ninety percent of everything is crap, yes.

But that remaining ten percent...!

(In case it wasn't clear, this is GREAT)

I wonder... why "Lightning is being the source of "Teleportation".... but.... I DONT GIVE THAT CRAPPY THING! 15/10 BABY!!!

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Yay an HIE fic!

>>277802277802 Cute pic too

Showed to a friend, both hooked. Keep up good work

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no...just no >>.

>>279841279841

Image: http://i.imgur.com/br6Nt.png

Problem?

MOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOAR plweeeese

Canadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanadacanada

Never noticed how easy that is to spell... Canadacanadacanadacanada...

Oh well, happily awaiting more.

>>279841279841 well, if you don't like it... then you don't like it. I'm not you.

I, too, am reading this solely because my name as Connor. And it's even spelled right for once! Yay!

Can we get an ETA on the next update??

WHY DO ALL THE GOOD STORYS STOP WHEN THERE JUST GETTING GOOD!

Dat moment when your name is Connor and you are obligated to read this when you get out of school tomorrow afternoon .

Note to all readers. I'm just about halfway done with the second part of EFH. The Visual aid? It will just have to wait. I noticed on how eager you guys were for the next part, and just for you guys, I'm intending to speed it up. The visual aid versions will come up, but not as fast as the non-visual versions. It takes a while to draw, you know So anyway, I'm halfway done with the second part. It needs to be completed and revised. I will let you know on how it is going.

Thank you for your positive comments and support!

Ceehoff out.

Wait... so is Connor a brony? Does he understand who Spike is? Or is he a random human that has no knowledge of what happened at all??? *insert desperate for more learnings face*

MAKE MOAR!

THE DARK GODS DEMAND IT!