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Blazewing


Just a regular guy who loves writing wholesome stuff. =)

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After receiving a gift of sweets for her birthday, Fluttershy begins to put on a few pounds. How will her friends react to her new size?

Written as a harmless fluff-fic, just for the heck of it. Not much plot to it. I like chubby ponies, and I like the idea of a chubby Fluttershy. :pinkiehappy:

Cover art by: Mellowhen
Colored by: Lyracorn

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Comments ( 20 )

Lol, this was so cute and funny! :rainbowlaugh: Too bad we didn't get to see Discord's reaction, though.
Good job! Keep up the great work! :twilightsmile:
~Melly~

6345671 Thanks, Melody! I did kinda forget about Discord. I'll see if I can include him into the end. :pinkiehappy:

6345671 And there we are. Added a nice little scene with Discord. :twilightsmile:

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Thanks!
Ha, Discord's so funny and clueless. First it's denial, then shock, and then it's fluffy fuzzy feels. I knew he'd probably pinch her cheeks, though. :rainbowlaugh:

~Melly~

6346953 Glad you liked it. To be perfectly honest, Discord's not the easiest to write for, at least for me. I didn't wanna reuse jokes and gags he's already done, and he couldn't be too serious and ordinary, either. Know what I mean?

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Yeah, I can get that. It can be really frustrating. The whole cotton candy cloud thing is overused to the extreme. Good job!
~Melly~

This was a great story every thing was great you really did a wonderful job I like it.

XD funny! You should put that this is a comedy on the story's front page! There is a person on YouTube who is getting voice actors to voice your story...including me - Rarity! :D

7533060 Really? I'm kinda flattered. I didn't think this story was really that huge. I just wrote it as harmless fluff, without really knowing where to go with it. :twilightsheepish:

7533082 True but your story is cool! :D

Is it weird that this story makes me want to make canon Fluttershy have a little weight?

8044932 Oh, I don't think so. I know I typically write Fluttershy as being slender, but I'm kinda torn between that headcanon and another: that not being as active as ponies like Rainbow Dash, she's a little plumper than her normally, lol

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I think Fluttershy being chubby would just make her ten times cute!

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Chubby Fluttershy all the way!

Really fun story. Had a few heartwarming moments and even some pull at your heartstrings moments.

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I love this story it sounds like it could've made a very creative episode in the fifth season since it takes after Starlight' s defeat, it has a really good moral. The thought of Fluttershy putting on a little weight sounds adorable and interesting I love the interactions between her and her friends especially with Rarity, Discord, Pinkie Pie, and Angel Bunny. Discord was both sweet and hilarious in here the Santa Claus part was funny and Iove how you made Angel firm but more likable and supportive to Fluttershy better.

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Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. =)

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Much obliged 😊😉

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I guess everypony has had their chubby moment I like how you had each of Fluttershy's friends describe their moments of being chubby, well except Pinkie Pie, she's always eating sweets, but she loves her pudgy belly. I wonder if Discord's had his tubby moment with all the food and sweets he loves to create, that would be so funny with him trying to deny it than admiting it to the girls and Spike.😋😁

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