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This was so freakin' adorable...
Adorable :D
I simply had to do this comment. Your story is one that's truly remarkable. I'll be honest, I completely skip past the clop stuff because I just love following Guilty's story so much. I pity him so much, yet in many ways I admire him. He knows what he does isn't the best job, but it's all he can do and he tries his damndest to make it worthwhile and rewarding.
Also, I was applauding him at the end of this chapter. For finally asking Derpy, for finally trying to have something for himself, I say bravo, Guilty Pleasure! Bravo and good luck to you!
Oh... and fuck Applejack. Keep up the good work.
Noice.
Wow, guilty decided to something for himself for once, of course i'm happy for him though, he and derpy went all kawaii at the door, that was funny as hell xD
Two posts in a week; you're going to spoil us MagusMeister.
Never been more happier about reading a chapter evah. Good job
Hope Guilty x Derpy works out.
Omg yes!! More please :) keep the awesome chapters coming
I... You...
Bah!
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Bad snogging! Explosions! Soup! This chapter had it all!
I never cared much for girls (or guys)
Or that mare I know named Fluttershy
But now that I see your mismatched eyes
I'm beginning to feel alright
I never went in for afterglow
What your muffins did, I'll never know
But now that I'm hear, I've walked you home
I'm beginning to feel alright
Got a hobby when you made your mark
Guilty Pleasure's in the dark
But Sour Dough has felt the spark
So the situations dire now
I've got the sudden urge to make a shrine
covered in candles and the finest wines
'Cause now that your lips are burning mine
I'm beginning to feel alright!
Wow. To be honest I was expecting Dinky's dad to be a dick who ran out on them as soon as the baby's presence was known. But no, total accident that left her alone. Well done
Also, love the scene at Derpy's door. Very good character action on both sides. Have all my praise
Is it too much that I was wishing for an orange foam finger with "Guilty #1" on it and a soda hat with little Derpy stickers so I'd look the part while I cheered my ass off?
WE FINALLY GOT GUILTY/DINKY INTERACTION!
...
And it was every bit as awkward as I could have ever hoped! I loved it.
YOU DA MAN, GUILTY!
YAY! I knew you could do it Guilty!
I loved all the myriad of completely logical questions he had that all boiled down to "Nothing, I Guess."
lol. guilty, you are a bit of a shame to earth ponies. you can't take a few jabs from a Pegasus pony. you better hope that Crook's little prank did not unhinge applejack in any way that would cause her to chase you down. you might shatter upon contact.
oh lord, I know this is gonna end sourly in some way.
yay
This.....is too adorable to handle..hnng. You really wrote this well! That part with Derpy punching Guilty was so cute.
is right!
YEAH! GO GUILTY! Tool you fucking long enough. But what about his job? That will be interesting to figure out......
An escort in a relationship........
That was adorable. I'm fully expecting some sort of doomsday turd to hit an industrial-strength fan in the next chapter, but for now . . . that was adorable.
Another chapter already?! Stop it, I'm getting too excited
HUZZAH! All is right with the world!
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I'm not sure I hath.
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Oh? I seemed to think it was a reference to the cover identity of everyone's favorite time traveling stallion, being used ironically on a pretend date with who most of the fandom sees as his faithful companion.
If that wasn't the intent well then......awkward
let us hope this story does not become a Greek tragedy
sweet
BUCK YEAH GUILTY!!!
Wait there was a lot of other awesomeness in this chapter? I, yeah maybe, but who cares, Derpy and Guilty are together. FINALLY! I actually cheered a bit out loud when that happened.
But yeah the rest of the chapter, just as great. Those two on a date were so adorable together, so perfect for each other. And just how bad even Derpy's memory of being sad hit Guilty... yeah those can NOT go without a Happy Ending. Just, the shear chemistry you put between them, just how perfectly they fit together, work off each other. It's perfect.
Now to see how this ends up coming back to bite them in the plot or create issues but, those two will get through it.
Oh and Guilty, no, you most definitely do NOT keep charging her for sex.
Yay. A proper male. No matter how good at his perfect job, As soon as he tries to apply it to the messy real world, he screws up.
Fortunately for Guilty, Derpy Loves it when he screws her up.
yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes YES!!! one of the best ponies and OC's finally get together in more than just a physical way...AWESOME...I LOVE IT
YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES
Yes, Guilty, that's definitely how to patch up problems in your life. I could say that, but I haven't really tried it, so...
If he had a dream earlier within a dream... hypothetically speaking that would mean... *insert Inception bwah here*
Well, that's whatcha get for not getting any practice over the years, Guilty! However, can't say he didn't warn her...
I have to say, most in-depth story I have read. You may be asking: "DarkPony4444, how is it in-depth?"
Then I say to you: "Well it is partially a little tiny bit about..." You can figure out the rest of that, can't you?
Great job on the story! Bravo! And I think I speak for most of the readers when I say ENCORE!
I love this story so much! I wish I had an OC, honestly if it was up to me I'd have Trixie visit Guilty.
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Ahh, but that's where things start to get murky....... If she visits him in his capacity as an escort, he pretty much has to. As he pointed out in an earlier chapter, he can't make exceptions on that just because of personal feelings. A job is a job. But when is she actually there as a client, and when is she there as a date? Where do they draw the line that separates the two? Should she still visit as a client at all?
On a different note, I can't wait to see what happens with AJ in the coming chapters. It's not gonna be long before she finds out about their date, and Derpy isn't the type to keep that sort of stuff secret, so it'll spread even faster. I forsee difficulty with Dinky. AJ won't want Apple Bloom hanging around with a filly who spends time around Guilty, and I'm sure she'd be able to convince other parents to feel the same. Rarity would probably end up agreeing with her just to keep her secret.
Which, of course, means that Dinky will be mad at him and the CMC will promptly ignore their sisters and intentionally go looking for him. And now that this is in my head, I demand to see it happen. I wanna know what Guilty'll do when he meets the CMC. Obviously it wouldn't be a clop chapter or anything (this isn't that kind of story, after all), but there's so much potential there for incredibly awkward shenanigans. And hell, they can drag Dinky along just to make it even worse.
Really hope it works out between Guilty and Derpy.
That was adorable, in the most awkward way possible.
GOD DAMN FINALLY HOLY SHIT THAT TOOK WAY TOO LONG JESUS CHRIST
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Nope. Things are looking up. That means something bad is going to happen to screw it all up.
Last two chapters were absolute, pure gold. I literally danced around my computer desk making happy noises, ehehe.
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And yet, fewer views.
Thanks, though. I'm glad you like it.
I almost cheered out loud there.
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Ethics here is pretty simple actually. By the book, he should tell her he wants to pursue a relationship with her, so he can not longer see her as a client. He should really have a cooling-off period of a few months too, where they don't see each other at all, then they start dating.
Alright everybody, raise anchors and prepare to leave port. This ship is ready to sail.
Still, adorable stuff. Gotta feel bad for them though, the way everyone assumes that Derpy is literally paying someone to date her. Either way, nice to see some progress on the actual romance.
Me hopes the next chapter is them ironing out the details...And, maybe if we're all lucky, Guilty actually confides his real name to Derpy? Then again, that seems like it would be a huge milestone, so maybe that would be better off for the future? IDK, seems like something Derpy might bring up. Either way, I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Guilty x Derpy forever
Ahhhh yussssss....
I kinda wanted him to reveal his true name to her, but I suppose that will come later in the relationship.
Really this whole story has been fucking awesome keep up the good work!
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Now if only either one of them were logical enough to think of that. Derpy will most likely not even think of it, since she strikes me as the type to not dwell on a detail like that. They were friends before they started dating, so she probably wouldn't see any reason not to see him both professionally and privately.
And Guilty is in the middle of having his brain explode with happiness and "what if"s. I'm sure it'll click in his head eventually, but whether or not that'll happen before she shows up at his door on Sunday......
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Great chapter.
Nice to see Doughboy get some happy in his life.
But why do i get the feeling that there's a drop on the way...
Go easy on him.