When he becomes of age, Spike sets out on a mission given to him by the princesses: to get married. But, as usual, he gets more than he bargained: so much more. Tons of worldbuilding abounds in this story, along with clop and other fun stuff.
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DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWW!!!! Cute and sexy,weird mix.
Nicely done!! I'm really enjoying this story so far!
HERE! Quick! Have a dancing slender man!
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Right on Spike! One bride down many more to go! Keep up the good work!
Problem....
Spike?” Maria whispered, hiding in the shadows. He turned around, his own features cast in shadow as the moonlight behind him made him seem dark and mysterious. “Are you ready?”
“Yes,” he said, his voice barely louder than hers. “Come to me, Maria.”
Soft hoof-falls on the floor let his ears dictate where his eyes should look. Still, when she stepped into the moonlight, he couldn’t help but inhale sharply."
You stated he had night vision when he was on the ship...he would have been able to see Maria.
Good chapter. Does Maria know she's gonna have to share Spike with least 3 other females?
2046684 He didn't have the glaring light of the moon shining behind him on the ship, casting things normally in shadow into greater darkness. Night-vision doesn't work if you're surrounded by light.
Thanks for pointing it out, though.
2046734 Wrong person. Think your reply was meant for the comment below mine
2046748 Whoops, so I did. They'll understand, anyway.
Another good chapter. Looks like gentledrake player got played into marriege. I wonder how she will interact with other wives and the mane 6 if she ever does meet them.
Alright seems i will have to be the one to say it... Haha, dragon balls
2054764 I was hoping someone would catch that. Bravo! Have some mustache.
2054764 Crap you beat me to it. If only I read this couple days earlier. Awesome chapter man. Can't wait for the next one.
And theres goes the first wife. A lot more likable now I must say. Though I did enjoy the clop, you may want to consider not make such enfasis on the orgasms if every time Spike (or his partner) has sex his going to have "The greatest orgasm of his life". But maybe that's just me. Aside from that I really don't undestand why or how did Chrysalis decide she has to "Wait" so much to seduce Spike.
And here is something I noticed.
He now has wings too? He has wings now too?
And I'm sorry if I sound like a dick.
damn spike you go dude
2122315 It is actually mentioned in earlier chapters that he has wings.
2054764 damn u beat me to the punch
lol the second i saw the words ballroom blitz i put on the song ballroom blitz from waynes world xD
eh clop i've seen better
2122315 As pointed out, it was already mentioned spike had wings from the beginning chapter (or the second?) As such I believe he meant "HIs wings too." Hope I didn't sound too much like a pompous jerk.
Damn Sexy. Wish other clop writers would steal from your book. This is one clop fic I feel no shame in reading. Can't for Chrysalis too step in. I'm going to assume she turns good in a latter chapter. Spikes is an irresistible sex machine. I envy him, and wish him the best of luck.
*reads the title*
*this music starts playing*
I really like how throughout the story you keep inserting these multi-cultural references! It makes the story go all the more smoothly and get us readers in all sorts of exotic atmospheres!
(like the Zoro refference; also laughed at the
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The suspense, it's killing me!
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Well it's official. His first wife, and a fine pick too.
2799176 I don't doubt it, but could you give some examples?
Wonder if she made a wish...
that Comment was so bad but so funny at the same time metroid_freak
And the man in the back said 'EVERYONE ATTACK' and it turned into a Ballroom Blitz!
😂
Zorro maybe