When he becomes of age, Spike sets out on a mission given to him by the princesses: to get married. But, as usual, he gets more than he bargained: so much more. Tons of worldbuilding abounds in this story, along with clop and other fun stuff.
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I just know that Myrianna is the going to be the 5th wife of spike
My thoughts exactly.
when i read the title "it hits the fan" i thought this chapter would include the mane six and the princesses finding out about meia being chrysalis
YES! I needed a pick me up after my futile study attempts!
I still can't wait for Twilight to find out about Chryssy.
not offend you but this ch just seemed to lack your unique flare maybe take a break for a while your are running 3 stories a ch what a week for each maybe you should rest since the your passion just seemed not here today or this was just one of your off days
Ps the ch was over epic as ever but it just seems to lack something or another
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also dude nich choice for wife 5;Myrianna she seems like perfict fit to the hearm a more big sister chater like Chrissy
so here a question i know Myrianna is going Spike wife #5 but are any other of future wives going to canon characters or are the rest of going to be Oc
3311034 Well...
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This is nice, but getting slightly repetitive. Spike and co. travel to new location, something happens to cause trouble for them, Spike saves the day, possibly gaining new family member, and moves on. Kind of like a Disney movie. But I guess it's the middle that counts, even if we know how it ends.
3311089 A fair point, and one that I won't technically disagree with. However, such a line of thought will become, as people say... obsolete.
Things are definitely changing in this story-line as a whole that a lot of people might not expect.
*a crazy grin appers on face*im like a goo battle of witsanother great chapter
3310909 I'm calling it.
okay whoever thinks that Myrianna will be Spike's 5th Wife thumbs up my comment
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Technically, not really. If that happened to every location they went through, Spike would have a boat load of wives.
I see your point, but it's kinda part of the story. How else is he going to meet his wives unless he goes to new places?
3311336 I did say probably.
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yeah, but it's the appeal of the storyline that keeps us here. Sure, it might get a bit repetitive, but who really cares? We're here for the plot (sex and story plots)
3311591 That's why I said it was like a Disney movie. Sure it's repetitive but for some reason I always come to see the next one.
3311207 I'm in full agreement!
Myrianna... Yep! Definitely Spike's fifth wife!
Myrianna... Yep! Definitely Spike's fifth wife!
anti-dragon smoke? seriously? no...just...just no.
Nice! This was great. A little sad that I got mad in the middle though. Still Spike can't always save the day. What is it with greedy corrupt types? Like seriously you have a good thing going on, your people are happy, you kingdom is flourishing, isn't that enough? Can you not say "Hey there's no bullshit happening let's try to keep it that way!" Advance your sciences dude! Improve your culture, nurture the ailing countries! There is no need to be all like hey I have a bigger dick than you let me slap you across the face with it! Wow just how mad did this chapter get me? I think I'm too mad right now... I'm... I'm like gonna go sleep or something.
Rivers of blood I fully expect, just not the ones they think. I will say, the idea of a corrupt royal being slaughtered pleases me.
Well, that escalated quickly.
Im getting an assassin's creed revelations vibe from this
3312618 Well, let's see: there's a city with a long hatred/severe distrust of dragons. They've tried to develop ways to counter the power of dragons over the centuries, as a means to protect themselves, and perhaps they've finally found a manner in which to successfully neutralize a dragon's powers for a period of time. However, said "smoke" does not kill or truly incapacitate a dragon, but instead makes them weak enough to handle properly.
I can't have Spike just bust out of a prison ten seconds after being thrown in one again, now can I? Where'd be the fun or the plot build-up in that.?
Fuck this chapter and the bastards that caused it to happening like this!
I hope Myrianna is the 5th wife. Spike could use more griffin mates in his harems.
Great work! Look forward to the next update!
3315265>>3311194>>3310909 Funny how everyone thinks that. It's amazing at just how good my fans can be at guessing sometimes. I sure can't pull anything past you guys, now can I?
3315505 well it was kinda obvious since you said that spike will have a griffin wife later on and Myrianna a griffin. also i hope we get to see a picture of her as well as Meia
3315523 Oh?
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Every comment around this subject has been making me giggle, and you know why.
3315505 I'm certain.
3315505 No you can not sir. Hell, he might get a dragoness by the time this ends at the rate his going.
Chrysalis is still my favorite though. But a griffin like her will be very, very interesting to have.
3315695 I'll post that thing the next chapter. You know, that thing we discussed. Besides, how's Meia's picture coming along?
Everyone, stop. Spike's with Celestia and Luna's student. Maria is the daughter to a king. Chrysails has a army under her command. Spike could have probably just involved Celestia and be free. Why didn't he? Also, on a different note. Spike must have a dragon wife, no questions asked. Doesn't anyone else think that Chrysails' baby would just die? Same with others. He should have a pure-blood son to ensure his legacy.
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Ah yes, the thing. Right-o.
As for the picture, it's coming along slowly unfortunately, uni work is piling up a bit and I'm trying to get a few updates/new one shot done for Thursday before stopping for a wee break to catch up on uni work and other stuff such as your commission.
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Maybe the twist is that Spike has to take someone on because he HAS to!!!
Take a critical eye on this: All of Spike's wives, regardless of how he got them to be his wife, are all there because they and Spike ultimately found out that they liked each other before they were officially joined in matrimony.
Consider the following:
---Spike never officially said something like "Marry me!!" for no obvious reason. There has always been a reason for the marriage-- impregnation (Trixie), arranged (Maria and Asalah), and ultimately gold-digging (Meia/Chrystallis--I hate to put her in that asset). But as LCD, all four of them had feelings for Spike from the beginning, and eventually that love grew. In essence, Spike wanted them as much as the other parties did. Spike's 5th wife could be the first one that Spike DOES NOT WANT!!!
--- The introduction of the latest character already shows that there are strained at best relationships with her kind and Spike's kind---so imagine the chaos if said creature is forced to marry your greatest enemy?? That conflict is delicious
3391136 actually no abramus5250 said already that one of spike's wives will be a griffin but an oc griffin
Haven't read a chapter, but will put a read later because of Chrsalis tab. Ride the dragon Chrissy?
3374848 Well, Spike is a gentleman. He wouldn't be like that if he had too marry someone. It was like him and that Zebra girl.They'll grow on each other, no sweat. But on a new note. Don't you think he needs to take a dragon wife? What do you think would slide out of Chrissy? I'm telling you. he'll need at least a pure-blooded dragon to ensure his legacy. I'm positive whatever Abe has in store for us is going to be a surprise for us all.
Curious, did you get the minotaur's name from Star Wars' Tycho Chelchu?
I'm calling it. Myrianna is going to have a daughter and the daughter will be the one who gets married to Spike.