When he becomes of age, Spike sets out on a mission given to him by the princesses: to get married. But, as usual, he gets more than he bargained: so much more. Tons of worldbuilding abounds in this story, along with clop and other fun stuff.
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I restate my previous thought that they should get back at Twilight by sending her a month-long artificial heat spell sent the same way she sent the erection-suppressing spell. I'm sure Meia would know of such a spell. Heh.
i agree with the pony below me. oh and good chapter btw.
Another awesome chapter an even better clop scene. Curiousthough what happened to Twilight when she was found out.
I wonder if he will get Rarity as well for a wife.
2198454 eh, we will soon find out, hopefully, though from what I've seen of this author's work, he/she won't leave their readers hanging from lack of details.
I know it's been said before, but know this.....
SWAG : Spike Wins All Girls, Period.
(sorry mane 6 )
Four in a single night? Holy crap... Spike is surely a beast, Trixie is definitely my favorite
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What would Spike's other wives think? It can turn into a huge mess...
2198603 while that may be true, they also have come to an understanding about him, so I don't think they'd have much of a qualm about him marrying his long time crush.
Next chapter, Out of the desert, into their next destination and another wife to boot.
Here's hoping for something that's not a equine.
2199291 Woah there! Gonna have to take it easy on the "acquiring wives" for a while. Nearly broke Spike and his harem apart there for a minute with Asalah being added so quickly. Still, I think you might be satisfied with the next one...
That belly swelling
This is what I live for *unzips*
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Well I'll just wait and read when that happens although the main idea of the story was for Spike to get a whole lot of ladies in the first place.
Spike's swaggery has no end.
2199424 Ah, and therein lies the problem. There are only so many characters I can write into a story and fleshing them out is hard. I have everyone/everypony currently selected, and who/what some of them are may be a bit surprising...
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If you say so.
2198234 i second the notion
Twilite gon geddit
Next wife, or somewhere along the line, should be Gilda. Just saying.
2199600 Maybe...
2199925 I briefly considered her, but... too much of a bully for my tastes, and I couldn't write her character too well. You ARE on the right track, though...
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So there will be a griffon. YUSH!! still, another good chapter, now Meia and Maria get preggo
2199925 GILDA YES!!! i second this vote. Gilda was Always my favored antagonist, i love tough girl goes soft for guy tales. so fun.
Is it just me, or is there a more elaborate plot for Spike to eventually succeed Celestia and Luna as ruler of Equestria? Hear me out here. Spike's spent most of his life knowing just about all there is to know about life, having two goddesses as teachers was a great benefit. He's already best friends with the Mane 6, better known as the Elements, who have saved Equestria from certain doom several times--plus he himself is a savior of an Empire that was lost for at least 1000 years. Seems that those six could potentially become Alicorns themselves at some point, and they would be co-rulers with Spike to govern their kingdom.
Now he's on a quest to not only get mates, but to also have different species....like the zebra girl. Can't wait to see potentially a Gryphon, a female Minotaur, and how about this....a FEMALE DRAGON!!!! With all the different wives, there should be someone for every species...the best way to court harmony and equality for all.!!!
A noble cause indeed.....llll.........sorry, I think I'm reading way too much into it, again. i kinda have a tendency to excessively analyze events and situations....
2204350 It is entirely fine to over-think something. I'll be the first to admit I do the same many times, usually within a single day. However, I must commend you on your studious insight and zealous work on detail. You have certainly given me some ideas: I have already made some changes to what I saw as being... a bit too bland for my tastes, thanks to your insight. I'm still figuring how to work it all out, but if I know one thing, it is that I can piece things together like no other I know.
Here, have a mustache for your fervor and dedication.
EDIT: this thing is taking on a life of its own...
This may be the first clop fic, I have ever laughed at while reading. You get a Gold Star for that. *
I like that at the beginning Chrysalis was all like, "I will use my Meia disguise to trick the dumb dragon and take over Equestria, MWHAHAHAHA"
A few weeks, some near death scenarios and some self-discovery later.
Chrysalis: "Meh, World domination is overrated, Screw the plan, I have a dragon." *Snuggle into her drake.*
Asalah’s father built giant concrete dicks around the city?
As a whole story contains a good blend of action, comedy, romance and smut with a little bit of drama sprinkled on top.
For some reason this part...
...made me this of this pic.
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For some reason I really don't want the harem to get any bigger than this.
Other than that. What can I say?
2208782 dude an oblisk is a strucher like Geroge washington monument heck we ripped it off from the eygepshens
I make it a personal vandetta to see how emotionless i can be during clop fics(kinda like a cinnamin challenge thing or "watch this without laughing".) and I have managed to be semi succesful but when spike said told him to stick his tail in her he would ... I came.
Forgive me if my comment is a bit too lascivious but Oh boy is Chrysalis gonna be the most deep-throatiest wife once she reveals her true form! LOL
Don't you mean Jiz Spike?
Or maybe turn her cutie mark into a picture of an ass, because that sure an ass move.”
Oh my Celestia! This had me in tears!
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Hahahahahaha!!!!
I can't resist...
YEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
3482150 I died at that comment
2247832 it was bolded...waffler was being sarcastic...that and if you round an obelisk out, yes it would be a giant concrete dick ...or a pencil...depends...
I can't imagine what that would entail.
-Spirit
... I like Trixie the most in this story!
Well I suppose that's pretty good as far as apologies go. Still, sex may be one of the best motivators in the world, but they shouldn't think they can use it to get out of any trouble they make with Spike.
THIS MAN IS A GOOD FRIEND!!!
Thanks for explaining this so ummm eagerly Trxie