When he becomes of age, Spike sets out on a mission given to him by the princesses: to get married. But, as usual, he gets more than he bargained: so much more. Tons of worldbuilding abounds in this story, along with clop and other fun stuff.
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I guessed you could say he DOCKED his SHIP into a very TIGHT port.
"He retired many years ago due to an arrow wound from a bandit in his leg: he still has the scars to show for it.”
I guess he took an arrow to the knee and stopped being a hero.
That ending I feel a little cheated we didn't get to see the exact reactions.
That ending was too good.
Now I'm intrigued about two things: 1) How long will it take for Spike to get free of Maria's hold and 2) What's with the kings reaction to Sheba?
Can't wait for the next chapter...
2577740 I can't even.
The story had me laughing, that comment made me close my laptop and walk off for five minutes.
i'm just gonna let that sink in
2577740 yes indeed
2577907 2577919 I aim to please ahhh im just so dumb at times i crack myself up.
here is something for your viewing pleasure.
With that last line, we reached status quo as the comedy came back for this chapter.
I'm gonna guess that Husam El-Hashim isn't evil, so much as he scares the piss out everyone. It doesn't help that Mehmed is basically Canada from Hetalia; It should be entertaining watching him growing a set and kick some ass. I'm picturing Husam sounds like Hakan from Super Street Fighter 4.
Laughs all around.
Another excellent chapter! But one slight issue.
Asalah?
2578163 Whoops!
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Ahhh running throe the town chased by a heard of bountiful women and pulling of a epic escape the only thing this is missing is a fight with some thugs in a bar
Too damn funny!
And you said no clop for a while.
Great chapter!
Bahahahaha, this chapter was just gold xD
2578361 No copious amounts of clop.
2578373That cool!
Funny clop moments are still better then no clop at all.
I still can't stop laughing at that 'ending'. O sweet Luna my sides hurt!
This chapter had me in stitches. Arrow to the knee, epic escape, funny crash landing, and Spike getting 'stuck.'
2578274 Yeah.
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I commend you, sir, for that impectible timing!! It's about time we saw a bit of brevity!! Speaking of, I wonder if while Spike's indesposed with Maria, there's a call on that magic two-way mirror thing checking in to see how he's doing:
Hi Spike, just calling in to see how your journey is progressing, and here are the girls:
:.......
.........uh...maybe another time...
WHY??
what in tarnation??
...ooooh, that's gonna have at my next party!!!
oh, spike.....
....man thta's gotta be so AWESOME!!!
****Fluttershy just passed out from seeing the ..eh, delicate situation Spike and Maria are entwined with*****
2578693 at least someone enjoys my ...Dirty sense of humor. Besides it was just to good to pass up. And YOU THOUGHT THAT TOO!!?!??!!??! im glad i wasnt the only one that did.
Huh. Anal. Hadn't seen you go for anal yet. Nice to know that you can write it pretty well.
Well...that ending just happened...HAHAHA
2578693 Though i think rarity might just start it off by wanting to know who has been calling Spike 'Spikey Wikey' lol
*que micro heartattack*
i'm serious....you might think i'm not but that was like coming home to see your teacher sitting on your couch......but in a good way, like a sexy teacher or something.
I can't help but hear his subconscious screaming "GO FOR THE BUTT!"
The story, aside from the clop,
The story just went from Aliddin-ish to Romeo and Juliet...
Was hoping you'd take the harem route for the prince, since he is taking advice from Spike.
The story has not strayed from the path of the interesting, so we can expect to see more, equal parts plot and action with the occassional... er, filler.
That being said, would it be too extensive to consider yet another addition to their family...? I fell in love with the early hinting of a growing family for the drake and now, even as we feel his relationship and wives are at a stable level, I find myself oddly wanting... more.
And to hell if Asalah isn't pregnant by now. Might play interesting if she is with twins, really. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh~?
2582203 Do not worry. For a short while, everything will be hunky-dorey. Then, out of nowhere, I'm gonna hit the audience with a sucker punch of awesome, followed by a rapidly-swelling herd the likes of which everyone is craving for!
THIS IS AWESOME. I am pleased
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You do know how to stir a hives nest in viewers interests, don't you?
Thanks to you, I won't be able to sleep at night until my curiosity is sated with the update. But alas, the curse you've played on your story will take it's grip on our hearts and leave us demanding 'Moar!'
I hate you for it, but nobody can deny loving you for it either.
I await.
'Oh-hohoho'
Hehe, skyrim reference and that ending.
2579786 ....what the buck did I just watch....
2578822 anal has been done quite a few times in this story...where you paying attention?
This chapter had me in stitches.
Cya
Raziel-chan
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U fking w0t, m8
Word to wise, no matter how much fun you're having, be careful when having sex. It's more complicated than it looks.
And like that, I can't go to the comments.