When he becomes of age, Spike sets out on a mission given to him by the princesses: to get married. But, as usual, he gets more than he bargained: so much more. Tons of worldbuilding abounds in this story, along with clop and other fun stuff.
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Very enjoyable ark (naturally ;D) and the little subplots are fun and help eith the story methinks, so keep at 'em!
Personally, I'd prefer if there were less big-ass subplots.
Slightly fewer characters would be nice too.
Bakhtak/Ebony? I guess that's OK, though I would have liked Bakhtak/Spike as well. Glad Fyrefly is taking Bakhtak's feelings so well. As long as the subplots don't slow down the story too much, I'd love more of them! Keep it up!
Well, that kiss was a surprise but I'm happy for Ebony. The guy really needed some new love in his life. Another great chpater I can't wait to see more.
Very nice. Personally, I think Spike can only have so many wives, so I'm glad Baktahk will be with Ebony. I just hope Fyrefly will find some peace herself too one day. Anyway, great ending, and as for the subplot thing, I say just keep doing what you think is best. I know I'll be along for the ride for quite some time.
Verry pleased but kind of sad that spike is becoming less usefull
Hope his future training helps him
Hmmm... if their Russia still has czars, then does that mean they could be headed towards the Russian Revolution?
Nice way to conclude the act and give Ebony a happy ending.
well nice chapter, nice couple with Ebony and Bakki
. . . and then, nearly thirty years later, a half nightmare-half thestral, marries into Spike's harem.
5217912 Well they have also mention Marengolds attacking the ottomans so this would be in Pre-Russia Muscovy times most likely.
Hm, the love interest between Ebony and Bakhtak was expected but the way it was executed could have been better. It was too quick, could have been slowed down and maybe had Ebony really think about it, even with them being friends for years.
Ebony should really have more doubts and be more hesitant about this then he is. Not only that his character as well as Bakhtak seemed to have changed personalities.
Over all still a decent chapter. Though somethings could be done better.
I'm with special unicorn here, less subplots more focusing on spike
I liked it!! a tiny bit too many sub plots though....
Also don't wanna seem dirty or anything but any chance of some more clop in the near future?
and is Eutropia gonna become a new wife? If so will it happen soon?
PLZ I love this story so far and can't wait till the next chapter!
Great arc. The amount of sub plots seemed fine, though it did make the arc feel pretty long. Maybe either one big subplot, or two-three small subplots in future arcs.
Also, when is the next message home? I wanna see Twi's reaction to Chryssy
The story continues. I wonder if Bakhtak herself, in a few decades time will approach Spike to be accepted, or deliver a daughter, or otherwise?
With heading for Marecow at this time, is spike going to end up not just with Anastasia, but her sister as well?
Darn!!!! I was hoping Ebony Blade would become Spike's Captain of the Guard! He's gonna have his own like Luna and Celestia, and Ebony Blade would be perfect for it.
Loved the arc cant wait for the next one keep up the awesome work
Ebony's gonna die! (If he dies, you're dead!)
You WILL make a side story for Bakhtak and Ebony!!! It doesn't have to be done at all soon. BUT. IT. NEEDS. TO. BE. DONE!!! For the sake of the fans *puts on best puppy dog face* please? And as always, fantastic job
Gotta say, up until the last half of of the previous chapter and this one. I was expecting Bahtak to go with Spike after the the vampire was taken care of. Though not as a future wife mind you. (Though that would have been OK too.) Rather as a travel companion or something. Maybe even do what Eutropia is going to do and give him some sort of combat training.
Then again, I was expecting Fyrefly and Ebony to hook up, so go figure.
:D , So, Whatcha all think of the latest chapter?
Awesome story, truly becoming an epic tale.
Great way to move on with spikes journey. Loved the way things have been going. Oh, that reminds me. I've been searching for on specific scenario for a fic, but have only found something similar twice. One was too short and the other only had baby spike... I really want to read find someone to write a fic where spike is somewhat rejected by rarity, he leaves for a set time limit, (close to 5-10, but literally comes back on said day), finds a dragoness, falls in love with her, starts a small family, returns to find rarity "in love with him? Infatuated?", and then what said writer does from there would be up to them. Would be half and half between the lives at ponyville and spike's life.
Ok, enough of what I want to see in a possible future fic and back to yours. Love where it is going, and can't wait for the new cities. Hopefully a future that is a little brighter? Eh, I just can't wait till they reach the dragon homelands. Wonder if Rarity will want to marry him when he returns. Would laugh to no end if he rejected her rather bluntly. Can't wait to see what u come up with, but I hope u do it soon cuz I just can't wait any longer!! Hopefully by the end of the week you will get in a new chapter!
I find it funny how many people thought spike and B would hook up, it seemed pretty obvious to me that B and ebony were going to hook up. Also I really hope you aren't just going to drop their story line, I still want to know what happens with them in the future like their wedding and stuff.
Less focus on OCS more focus on spike I'll admit this arc annoyed me I hate OCS with a passion but I'm fine with them as long as they are not the main focus 90% of the time so this arc was mostly me skipping a bunch of words until it involved the main group and spike not ebony n that chick
I honestly like the OCS, I think it give the story more depth. I can't wait to read more, and keep up the great work.
They do make a cute couple
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part of me kinda wanted spike to get a nightmare wife but in all honesty im happy with this on a different note what do you think spikes kids will look like i cant seem to imagine how theyll look
The best nickname would have been baka in my opinion just saying and I kinda wanted her to fall for spike it would have been interesting having and nightmare and and the queen of dreams converse
i did think the Nightmare would wind up with Spike to be honest.
Oh no, I know where this is going, I can smell it in the air. You better fucking not, If you kill Ebony in the coming chapter I’ll cry myself to sleep for the next month