When he becomes of age, Spike sets out on a mission given to him by the princesses: to get married. But, as usual, he gets more than he bargained: so much more. Tons of worldbuilding abounds in this story, along with clop and other fun stuff.
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Burninating all the peoples.
So is Bara dead? Or was he just pushed back onto another dirigible?
Never mess with a dragon. Some ponies are so foolish
hu good but wished spike went more rempagey and baserk
Another good chapter and doesn't matter to me if the chapters with clop are labeled as so or not. It shouldn't really matter cause if you don't like clop in stories you shouldn't be reading the mature stories in the first place.
Bout time they used magic.
This is awesome.
alright! Let's make this fair!
UpVote this comment for adding "clop" to the titles of chapters with clop
DownVote this comment for not adding "clop" to the titles of chapters with clop
also, because I didn't want my personal preferences to interfere with the voting, and I dare say that I might not have the privilege to be the poll to have/not have the part added to the title (which I am for)
But, seeing as though you have added H.G. Wells to the story, I can't wait for a short joke about something along the lines of: "it was almost like they were from another planet." "Another planet you say? hm..."
and I can very much say that I can't wait to read more!
2277900 Bara is most definitely dead: being set on fire and falling hundreds of feet to the ground will most certainly kill somepony.
2278887 True, but I've read stories in which a bad guy had everything thrown at him and lived, so just making sure, haha, though I'm surprised you didn't have spike transform when his wives were threatened
I give credit to the zebra who threw a fucking machete at spike, that's just plain funny to me.
2278887
An excellent point, tested and confirmed by Lord Denethor, Steward of Gondor.
2290591 Ooh! Close, but no cigar. Have a mustache instead!
Good chapter! I see no reason to state if he chapter has clop of not. For one, it's just doesn't seem necessary at this point in the story, and two, if you do that some will probably take it a step further and ask for a non-clop chapter's.
No, keep doing what your doing.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Hoofington Gallway Wells?
H.G. Wells?
I can't belive i'm always waiting update for this, you got all my attention so far, also trixie should show them how GREAT AND POWERFUL she is
Wheres my update?
2312416 It's in the works: it takes time to write quality transition chapters, and I've been distracted lately. Don't worry: it'll be out soon enough.
EDIT: see?
I loved the H.G. Wells pony. He better make a reference to one of Wells' writings or to the man himself.
you should say which ones have clop.
In paragraph 1, chapter 24, you said Egypt instead of Niehgypt.
FYI
I say 'yes' to labeling if they have clop or not.
Loved the H.G. Wells reference
Good that the three got to do something, they were turning into damsels in distress.
Cya
Raziel-chan
Spike's only been on this trip a few months and he's already been attacked, what? Three times? Why would anyone want to travel in this world with odds like that?
Spike. Hey, Spike. You can fly and breathe fire. And you're fighting dirigibles. That are famously quite flammable. Your wives figured that out, they just didn't know any fire spells. Spike. Why are you just standing there? Stop just standing there Spike. Spike. Spike, stop.
This was awesome nice to see Spike give a fitting end to that bastard