When he becomes of age, Spike sets out on a mission given to him by the princesses: to get married. But, as usual, he gets more than he bargained: so much more. Tons of worldbuilding abounds in this story, along with clop and other fun stuff.
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Eutropia's no joke, is she? Good job there Maria! Ebony has a good point there. Title drop! Nice to see them talking things out. First comment!
I enjoy this story allot.
awesome job as always
Well this was a interesting chapter. I really hope Spike gets a Diamond Dog in his family. I would love to see the girls back home reaction to that one lol. I didn't like it though that they all put it on Spike saying he kept protecting them and not letting them help. He never said they couldn't help but they never try to do anything themselves. Nothing was stopping them from throwing up a barrier or using a spell when it was needed. Most of the time they be too panic to even think it seems so Spike steps up and protects them. I mean like in the desert Spike called them out on that and asked them why they didn't use their magic. So they just classic guilt tripped him for something he didn't do lol. I do wonder what Eutr will do once they get there, I would like to see her start to get closer to Spike but first that wall around her would have to start to come down before that could ever happen.
Anyway great chapter can't wait to see what will happen next
It's ALIVE! I missed this story. I enjoy this fic on an extreme level, one of the reasons is that it isn't a harem story for the sake of clop. This chapter was really well written and I'm glad to see Eutropia finally opening up just a little. Please keep up the great work
OH YEAH!
I wonder if the wives wanting to help, wont be so much hot air, as to Eutropia working on Spikes physical health, she starts training the others in reflex magic, deflection shields, feather fall, auditory null and confusion, etc.
Just hope those three bozos back in town dont have relatives or, family, in the big city that theyre trying to get a foothold with, who could just be the same persons Ebons talking about.
So I spent the last 3ish days re-reading this fic. As a lore master mysel I love the world building you are doing. Keeping everything in perpesctive and giving us a taste of how to as an author see the world. All the little subplots and characters that you have introduced have made for a very enjoyable read.
Of course as with any story I have a curious wonder or two. Eutropia as Spike's personal trainer could also be his first 'Royal Guard' Chrysalis could maybe send an advisor or such to Celestia ( or maybe better to Luna) to try and start some good delegations. After all still quite a few months before they get home so it never hurts to be prepared. Then again you already have your outlines made so anything I say could just be wishful thinking.
Please keep up this great piece of work!
was that a hobbit reference I spied?????
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oh nooooooo its buzz killingtion here to ruin every thing that makes us not hate our lives.
5517684 no, I'm smartassington, here to make everything as literal or as sarcastic as possible, based on what I see fit
NOOOOOOOOO NOW I HAVE TO WAIT FOR ANOTHER UPDATE
Spike, prepare to have your body worked over in a not very pleasant way. Gotta say, I respect her quite a bit more now.
Oh, and if what I think is going to happen happens to Ebony... I will not be pleased -_-
more more the story must live! :) ) encore encore!
I've literally spent my entire day pretty much just reading this story amazing work just like with solar embrace perfect sex to story ratio
5531272 I'll be made, that's for sure.
5753694 Damn, I always get those mixed up, or at least, I did for a long time. I'm just a bit too lazy to go back through every chapter of every story I've written to change it.
is this even going to continue i want read it if it does not
5768085 I am continuing the story, I'm just taking some time away from it for now. My personal life pretty hectic, and will only be more so for the next month or two.
5769702 then i will just have to wait till you pick back up, it looks pretty good form the cover and bio
5773648 It's fantastic! I highly suggest you read studiously.
If you name the duchess of marescow Russia and have spike and co. Call her mother Russia, you win all the internets
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i will start as soon as i see it moving again i rather like these kind of stories although id love to see a romance flick between Gilda and Trixie i think that would be fantastic
5806725 It would take ages for you to finish what is here already, let alone more. Unless you read at 100 wpm (words per minute) I doubt you'd be able to finish it all by the time he updates, and then some. No offence, but it's true.
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I see what you did there mister baggins.
5769702 idk why but I'm getting the impression that spike is turning into Gohan. You know... All that power and potential he showed at some point is slowly withering away. I miss badass spike i hope hiny (the zebra warlord, idk if i got his name right) appears soon so spike gets a chance to show his badassness and relieve some of the frustration he feels for being no more than dead weight in this passed 2 arcs.
5877396 LOTR
Bring on the Hobbit.
All hobbit fans unite heheheh
5804114 I can tell ur a fan of "sword art online".
Favorite anime would have to be that show.
Hold up what? They are acting like spike needs to learn his lesson about letting them help?! They are the ones with the fucking magic! Spike hasn't stopped them from helping, its their fucking fault they sat on the sidelines like useless twats
Just couldn't resist could ya?
Have I already said I love this story? I have? okay good.
She's Drax the destroyer. Words would never go over her head. She'd catch them first...
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Bruh that's what I said! He never tried to stop them from using their magic once! They're always just been hiding in a corner screaming for Spike to rescue them. Man! If anything on many occasions he's asked why they didn't use their magic. I know it wasn't intentional, but this chapter really made them look like hypocrites!
Is that a Rangers Apprentice reference I spy