When he becomes of age, Spike sets out on a mission given to him by the princesses: to get married. But, as usual, he gets more than he bargained: so much more. Tons of worldbuilding abounds in this story, along with clop and other fun stuff.
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VAMPIRES!! Then agin when you live in what is essentially Transylvania its to be expected.
I can't wait for more.
Shit's getting gooood.
I got to say that the characters of Bahtak and Fyrefly seem interesting.
Okay, saw the vampire thing coming a mile away. Though the Nightmare was a surprise. I hope Spike wakes up soon, they'll probably need his help soon. It looks like Eutropia isn't going to join the group anytime soon.
Ohh don't tell me Spike is going to go all Twilight on us. If these guys glitter in sunlight I am sorry I am coming to your house and smashing your computer lol. It would be epic is Spike can land himself a vamp but I think he will have enough on his hands dealing with sex-confused Grif. i think she only need to be around when Spike wakes up and 'enjoys' his wives and she will see what it is really like lol.
4884771 Do not worry, no vampires in this universe sparkle. No, think more like the original Bram Stoker vampires, with a little Van Helsing ones thrown in for good measure.
4884885 Nice.... you have escaped my wrath today.BUT let me catch one shimmer
4884771 for you last few minniuts
To the "wooden Stakes "
well another interesting chaper and Twist, Keep going
Bakhtak seems to be an interesting character, can't wait to see more of her. Hmm, it seems that Lady Fyrefly knew this vampire before she was turned, and was trying to cure her before she escaped. I hope this doesn't end badly.
What's to explain. Spike's still out, his wife's are worried, Ebony Blade has interesting friends, Eutropia has very poor understanding about relationships and Lady Fyrefly is trying to keep her country safe while her sister stalk creatures in the night. Sounds pretty straight forward to me.
Spike and company just can't get a break.
Ten bucks says Spike is gonna impale the vampire with his stake
....if you know what i mean...
Were wolf?
There wolf.
There, Castle.
Yo boy, Spikes gonna be the big boy of the Pound.
4884885 what would a "little" bit of hellsing be
4887129 By being a little bit of Van Helsing from the movie (not Hellsing, Abridged or not), that would mean vampires are partly demonic creatures (in appearance), ie super senses, unnatural body adaptions (ie, opening their mouths unnaturally wide), and the like.
4887181 that is a good thing since an army of zombies is not a good thing in any situation
ugh the updates are so far in between im forgetting the descriptions on what the characters look like
i miss the regular updates
ok...not vampires.. succubus maybe? either way, can't wait. keep on keepin on
I love this story PLZ UPDATE SOON!!!!
At first I thought I would be put off by some of the characters...but you really made each one unique and really make it easy to connect with Spike himself. One part of me will be sad when this story finally reaches its end, but I can't wait to see what lies around the corner!
when next chapter
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NEARLY DIED LAUGHING AT THAT!!!
..thank you
4884771 sex confused grif
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5045277 lulz
5045277 Get out and step away from the keyboard.
When you had bakhtak telling ebony how many ponies she could smell, you forgot a number. You said a zebra, two unicorns, and a griffin, all female, the unicorns being pregnant. You said she also detected a fourth female presence, also pregnant. This is where you unintentionally screwed up. That should have said a FIFTH female presence with spike the dragon, male, being the SIXTH. Other than that, pretty much error free...though i you a question, I guess I can shave it for later...lol
I ended up skipping this chapter, just re-name it to "Warning of Expositions to come."
Back on this story again, and boy gave I missed it. Everythibg came back so fast once I started reading. Looking forward to what's next.
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Aren't we all just nightmares unto our selfs
HEHEHEHEHEHE
I'm really glad I read this fic again because I didn't remember much from the Istanbul arc. I knew there were a handful of bad guys, but I kept getting them confused and details were muddled by the long pauses between chapters, not to mention how quick it ended. Still, Undi is alive and ready to wreck Spike's day. Wonder when he'll come back.
Also, if there was a chapter you need to work on, this one is it. Specifically the conversation between Ebony and Bahktak. Huge info dump on things they should know about each other. Kinda makes it feel a bit forced, but that's my opinion.
And after seeing Eutropia's opinion on sex and stuff, I'm expecting her to be walking in on or watching Spike rut his wives silly. That may change her tune.
Standing in a circle drawn in the dirt
Spongebob reference I'm guessing
No of course not! But that last one you should do. And add some salt to it