When he becomes of age, Spike sets out on a mission given to him by the princesses: to get married. But, as usual, he gets more than he bargained: so much more. Tons of worldbuilding abounds in this story, along with clop and other fun stuff.
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Another good chapter. Are all of Spike's eventual wives gonna be strictly ponies or are they gonna be comprised of ofher races as well?
1995021 That's a good question.
>>LMessenger You do know a Nine Tailed Fox would be the equal of Celestia, Right? A Kitsune would have to be a Thousand years old to actually have nine tails anyway, the best He could get would be a Three tails, possibly Four, not to mention that Nine tails are generally malicious anyway, A Chinese dragon, on the other hand, Is more like an Asian water Spirit, usually regarded as a Deity or Guardian of a specific river, If he was able to get an Asian Dragon to fall in love with him, He would then have to talk her into abandoning her river, which is... really not likely.
anyway >>Abramus5250 liking the story so far, can't wait for the next chapter, and I hope you update soon
Oh this is golden: Spike the playa strikes again
To all it may concern, there will be NO Naruto-esque characters in this story. Also, no, not all brides will be strictly ponies, as I have more things up my sleeves. Just wait and see.
just to clarify: Maria is a Unicorn as the Rest of The Household, or?
liking the Story so far, keep rolling
a Fox- like Character would be appreciated btw...
mfg Nordic
1996132 Yes, Maria is a unicorn. Fox-like? We'll see... You do remember he's going through Africa and much of Asia, right? There are boundless opportunities...
Nice, very nice. Spike the charmer has struck again!! And chrysalis seems to be falling for him. I wonder which will win duty or desire?
College life sick of school. You seem to update at a regular pace so I think two weeks tops when you get back to school. I'm not really worried you'll take long to update, you seem enthusiastic in your writting so that's a good sign.
Another good chapter and Spike is look to earn his wife.
I wonder how long Chrysalis is gonna wait because her time is running thin.
how about a griffin next? say wouldn't an anthroized griffin look like a harpy? they certainly look similar
2000069 Why thank you!
Spike got swag, lol, oh and I like the acronym you did for pimp
Mmmm. I don't think I'm gonna like this story as much as I thought.
2001614 Pray tell, why is that?
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Personal issues and nothing more. The story is still amazing. But I usually have a hard time liking a story where the main character's couple is an OC. Or in this case, I'll be a bunch of OCs. I though I could handle it and maybe I will. But making this girl Maria a... What do they call it? Yandere? Is not helping me.
But like I said before. This are just my personal tastes. Theres nothing wrong with your story.
2003137 Um, what's a yandere? Besides, don't forget about Trixie and Chrysalis: there are reasons they are tagged, after all.
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You're better not knowing what a yandere is my friend. Never mind that, Maria is not one anyway. At least not yet.
But don't mind me. Your story is awesome as it is. I just so happen to feel a bit overwhelmed by so many OCs.
I like this story. This is the type of clop that I don't feel ashamed to read. You should probably mark witch chapters the sex sense happen so people can know when their coming up. No pun intended.
To answer your question about yandere
Yandere (ヤンデレ?) A Japanese term for a person who is initially very loving, caring, and gentle to someone (or at least innocent) they really, truly like and care for a lot before their romantic devotion becomes mentally destructive in nature, often through violence and/or brutality. The term is derived from the words yanderu (病んでる?) meaning a mental or emotional illness, and deredere (でれでれ?) meaning to show affection. Yandere characters are mentally unstable, and sometimes are incredibly deranged and are not mentally sane, often using extreme violence and/or brutality as an outlet for their emotions
still awsome story so far
1996141Like a Fennec Fox perhaps?
Chrysalis better fall for him and abndon her evil plans.
Can you start including bust sizes? A pervy old bastard like me would adore that
Looks like spike doesn't know how to turn his swag off, sleep with one eye open my friend
Player In the Management Profession.
i just realized something, Maria looks a bit like Rose from FMA
3962418 Dear nine you're right!
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Ten cookies in that he'll somehow end up with at least five wives.
god dam.
6 chapters in and we already have 3 potentional wives, at this rate spike will have like 20 before he even get back to equestria.
Maria is smoking hot!
Vineyards...filled with vines?? THATS AMAZING but really, why not just put the fruit?
2799119 i love how you put a picture of pinky after that explanation. LOL
Sooooo is Maria squinty eyed all the time or only when she's smiling?
Damn, Maria is just plain Hot!
A place where aluminum is rare? 10/10 BEST STORY HAVE ALL THE MUSTACHES
We sure her name's Maria and not Merida? Her personality seems similar...
2799119 Example: Nu from Blazblue. She alternates between Yandere(around Ragna) and Terminator(anyone else). Combined with the factthat she wears bladed power armor and can summon blades the size of buildings? RUN.
You say that Spike is becoming a Pimp, right? But... Wasn't he one already? There is a reason we call him "Spike the Pimp" you know
WORK ON YO SPANISH BRO.
2003163 Como una persona hispana me gustaria ver mas diálogos en español. Creo que sería algo gracioso ver a Puas (Spike) teniendo problemas de comunicación con la gente a su alrededor. Tal vez algunas lindas chicas coqueteándole sin que él se de cuenta
not sure why but as I was reading the chapter the image of "Don Quijote" and "Dulcinea del Toboso" appeared in my mind.
Maria's pretty cute. A pretty good first choice there Spike.
God damn, is Spike smooth. I'm going to slip and fall on my ass if this goes on any longer.
Iesu Christi, I want his training. Literally everything that he's learned. Perhaps some smithing and electronics as well?
Jeff Dunham references
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I know old comment is old, sorry.
But yeah, aluminum is surprisingly hard to produce, requiring an extremely energy intensive electroplating process to revert it from its oxidized state. We didn’t start producing it in industrial quantities until WWII, and it’s still massively subsidized even with refineries being located near major hydroelectric producers to get the lowest energy prices.
Before then, it was largely a novelty, and an extremely expensive one at that. One example is the Washington Monument. It sounds silly today that they capped it off with a pyramid of aluminum, but at the time it was a mark of prestige that they used this newly discovered metal that was more valuable than gold.
What happens to the photo? It’s all blurry