When he becomes of age, Spike sets out on a mission given to him by the princesses: to get married. But, as usual, he gets more than he bargained: so much more. Tons of worldbuilding abounds in this story, along with clop and other fun stuff.
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Vamponies! I vant to suck you blooooooood!
wow, finaly a new chapter, wow a bid sad but still great chapter, intersting mystery end there
Update+Feature=FANGASM
Why do I get the feeling Eutropia will come to appreciate Spike a lot more thanks to something from castle Enstein
Wonder if the shadow is the daughter of lady Fyrfly, or vamponied Calypso, name of a mythical siren ?
Hope the story continues as good.
Welcome back into the fold. May Luna's moon watch over you.
Looks like Spike might be getting an undead wife, it wouldn't be the strangest thing since Chy is one of his wives. Good to see you back in action.
WOOOO!!! I hope you make a bunch more chapters before summer's over then.
[Squeeing intensifies]
IT'S ALIVE!
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wonder what the reaction spike and his wives will get when he comes home?
I saw what you did there when Chrysalis was talking to Asalah about naming her unborn daughter---Courdulia, as well as her little "dragonfly" remark. That is from White Squall, and it's quite aprops--in that story, it is rampant speculation that Spike and Chrysalis (a dragon stowaway and a female pirate captain respectively) had a bit of a heated affair while Spike was prisoner to Chrissy and her crew, resulting in her newborn baby hydrid dragon-changeling named---wait for it--CORDULIA
I know that there are other points and asides in this, but that is the most obvious one I see. I know that there has to be other Easter Eggs in this chapter.
this a pun or am I looking to deeply into things?
You glorious git, seriously. Anyhow, when you get the next one started, mail me?
Welcome back! Good chapter and great insight. Well gone!
I read a few other comments about this and I really wouldn't be suprised but is calypso a vampire? It would make sense with all the people getting sick and her being half bat pony. Or mabye I'm looking into this a bit to much lol it wouldn't be the first time
4741224 Nope! That is indeed one!
4741789 I'll remember next time.
This was perhaps THE most poetic chapter you've written.
4739928 Wait, what? What? WHAT???
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wow. Finally updated and with an amazing chapter. way to go man. way to be awesome.
4741224 so I wasn't the only one to notice that then, haha, I was even going to comment on it, but it looks like you beat me to it
Fangasm indeed
Oh, OW, that was PAINFUL to read. I did NOT see that coming. My heart, it aches.
Awesome chapter, Eutropia's development in this was to be expected, a little back story on Chrysalis was nice, bat ponies? Awesome, and a place like Transylmania? Yeah, there's gonna be some spooky shit happening here, I can just tell. Can't wait for more.
I want more Ebony Blade.
MOAR!!
4755140 Probably weren't the only one, but he actually did a great job making sure that whenever Ebon was thinking about them he used past tense. An excellent foreshadowing tool. Was still quite sad though no matter how much I hoped it was just coincidence
A fantastic chapter, as is you usual. Spike is out of the game for now, but I look forward to reading about his return. For now, I shall wonder about the shadows, Ebon's story, and a certain gryphoness with a heavy heart.
4830067 .... her eyes are just shut.
4755140 I read the first two sentences in that paragraph and I thought "Aaaaaaand they're dead. Great, it really has been too long since I truly felt bad for a character."
4741224 I know right? For the derps who have yet to get the pun, its Frankenstein...we all know there is going to be at least ONE person...
4830132 idk if you meant it that way but why Chrysalis was talking about how she always tried to become "faster, smarter, stronger" than her enemies it made me remember the intro from "lab rats".
"They are faster, smarter, stronger. The next generation of the human race is........ LIVING IN MY BASEMENT!!!!????"
Please let me know if i got that right
Frank Enstine?!
Really frank as the castle and Enstine as the village
Brilliantness
Almost never do you use quotation marks inside another set of quotes. Instead you would use apostrophes unless you're citing a short story.
Cadence would be proud of Asalah for saying this.
MEANWHILE AT THE CYRSTAL EMPIRE
"ACHOO!"
Shining looks up from his mourning newspaper. "You okay dear?"
Cadence smiles, "Oh, just an itchy nose hun..."
'Where the fuck did all that love come from?'
YOU MOTHERFUCKER, YOU GENIUS MOTHERFUCKER.
I was ready for some heart warming family moments, but noooooo. I know I'm not the only one that you swindled you slick bastard. You really are good at writing...
Instead I get kicked in the guts by the feels... Imma never trust your brilliant narrating ever again. Shut up and take my money!
...I'm gonna go cry in the corner...
I saw what you did there
That ending caught me off guard as far as his family goes.