When he becomes of age, Spike sets out on a mission given to him by the princesses: to get married. But, as usual, he gets more than he bargained: so much more. Tons of worldbuilding abounds in this story, along with clop and other fun stuff.
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WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
MAINTAIN THE DIRECTIVE OR BE EXTERMINATED!!!
Also, can't wait for tomorrow night!!1
...I hope twilight spell gets reversed or something ...oh and good chapter but why did you make spike transform differently this time?
Intention or not I'm gonna praise you for making me think of one of my favorite games of all time: 50 Cent's Blood on the Sand.
Over the top B-movie plot, mixed with a Gears of War ripoff combat system and a Contra-like scoring system = fun times. *best 10 dollars I ever spent.*
As for this chapter it was very well done and as always it's awesome when Spike Hulk's out. It's good that in this chapter, that the characters point out how very little the actually know about each other.
Well this is good. I couldn't help but make "The Mummy" reference in the gore scene the bandits disappearing one after another either in a blaze of fire, under a tent, or just hearing them scream very well done. You reasoning for Spike's transformation was superb!! It was worthy of well... a dragon. You know it occurs to me that Spike hasn't told his wives he can't get it up.
Oh this gonna be good!!
Anotherawesome chapter. Least his wives finally relize why he acts theway he does. Also this one of the stories I always look forward to the next chapter in anticipation. Also looks like Spike is gonna be getting a fivesome soon as Twilights spell wears off.
2189367 He reacts differently to each situation. He's not done changing: trust me...
2189506 Oh, yes indeed.
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Allow me to say I'm concerned for Spike. Not only is he conflicted of how to feel right now, but his wives will want some... How is that gonna work!!
2189628 You'll see... YOU'LL ALL SEE!
Gonna be a long chapter to write. And I mean really, really long: like over five thousand words. Maybe six or seven, even!
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Jezz usually when someone uses pinkie crazy I don't think much about it, cept when you use it, that's scares me.
It is good idea to see the other side of Spike. Everyone has something like that inside of themselves, Spike just has a moster that is stronger than most. And I wonder how Twilight is doing?
Draco dormiens nunquam titillandus
Some ponies learn from experience. The problem is that Pissing Off a DRAGON is something you probably won't live to learn from...
Spike just went all Alduin on their flanks.
So you basically über-charged spike and kritzed him up?
That was a beautiful scene I'll tell ya that mate, spike was efficient, and polite enough to take care of the bodies of his dead enemies. He earned some cred from me.
Well written chapter.
I quite enjoyed how you made it that the dragons have an actual reason to try and stay calm rather than going and flipping their shit whenever something remotely bad happens. I am really enjoying the way you are construction Spike as a character as well as how his wives react to how he has been acting and how they realized after he talked to them why he always tried to be compassionate and remain calm.
Quite looking forward to more. You are also inspiring me to write a fanfiction of Spike meeting another dragon who teaches him about how dragons change due to altered states of mind. Alas I am too damned lazy.
Keep up the good work. Much looking forwards to more.
9 moustaches out of 10 good sir.
Arrogance is my guess. The armed man will always think he has the advantage because his opponent doesn't have a weapon. Even if the opponent comes from a race that has been known of being capable of destroying entire towns with barely any effort. Or it's because they're stupid, maybe both.
Well, they diddn't know they were ticking off a dragon, they just thought they were raiding a caravan.
Anyone else imagining how the wives will get back at Twilight? I keep imagining a month long artificial heat spell done by the three unicorn wives(Well, two unicorns and a Changeling Queen) to keep her from using her sheer power to dispel it. And I'm willing to bet that 'Meia' would know of such a spell.
Huzzah for more non-clop chapters! Love storyline more than clop, so thanks!
I was indeed beginning to ask myself why there is a Gore tag on the tittle. I never heard of the movie you speak of, but so far I feel this is the most cliché chapter of the story. Not that I mind though, cuz it was very well written and very well executed.
2236424Exactly. Clichès don't have to be bad. Just well worn.
So, Spike confirmed for badass?
2830505 spike confirmed badass
here's a cookie
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Honestly I kinda got the same vibe as playing that game The Darkness when I read that scene with Spike letting loose on the bandits. He sure did Jackie proud.
Oh yes! I think I'm a changeling, because I fed off of every word in this story.
Still wanna punch Maria tho...
But I now love Meia so much more, regardless that she is Crysalis.
This is a new favorite for me.
HOLY SHIT SPIKE.....teach me to do that
... Well, at least it's the first story I've read to instantly trip, miss the staiecase and fall on it's face.
I love that movie. You translated the whole "HOLY SHIT WHAT IS IT I CANT SEE IT AAAAGH IT JUST KILLED THAT GUY AAAAAAGHHHHHH!!!!!!" thing perfectly.
By the gods.. you sure did live up to the gore tag, and I LOVED IT!! That was AWESOOME!!
Predator was watching from a safe distance and taking notes.
<Chrysalis> I have the weirdest boner right now...
Cya
Raziel-chan
Chrysalis thinking. It's the Return of the Why boner with a vengeance
Quite personally, I think they're lucky Spike is so forgiving. 'Cause they still don't realize how much anguish Spike has gone through for them.
*Spike* "You chose the wrong caravan to rob today you little shits."
That is still not even his final FINAL form!
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And I thought my jokes were bad
Chysalis this is not the time or place to get horny!!!