When he becomes of age, Spike sets out on a mission given to him by the princesses: to get married. But, as usual, he gets more than he bargained: so much more. Tons of worldbuilding abounds in this story, along with clop and other fun stuff.
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Great chapter, though probably be bests to put the OC arts in the chapter that character is introduced.
awesome chapter, and I love the artwork.
Ahahahaha, i wonder if twilight was going to get crazy because of the fact that she was going to read for weeks or nerdgasm
Nice pic and I got to say that Spike is one lucky dragon to get these hotties.
YAY for another chapter. Isn't this around the time that you stated that Spike would gain a few more wives? Really hope to see a gryphoness, a dragoness (with breasts as was stated they could have as hybrids since straight dragons wouldn't have them) and an earth pony and pegasus mare before they get back to Equestria.
Funny chapter and yay art.
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I finally got to use this meme.
I loved the ending with scrolls, the library, the surf board and Scootaloo.
Asalah is TOTALLY the best! Wow...
Nice.
Nice chapter, Twilight about to sploosh over the scrolls was an amusing way to end. But why does Asala have a cat like tail instead of a zebra tail?
NIce work, Spike.
Is it sad I read the part about Twilight fallings out of bed and thought, "Wow, that sounds like fun. If I had a bunch of falls and matresses I could roll down them like some crazy staircase!"
Paper surfing, epic.
dude those pic *nose bleed * and the story
Man, those are some nice pics, though why does Asalah's tail look like a tiger's and not a zebra's? One thing I would like to see more of is the addition of unique species. I know sticking to the usual canon races is good and all, but I'd like to see some new things. Now, this is your story, and as such you have absolutely no need to follow any of these suggestions; the story is beautiful already.
A race that I'd absolutely love to see when the group gets to their world's version of japan are the Kitsune. I would absolutely love to see the Kitsune in this fic. Another race I'm really hoping to see are more Draconequi. Many could argue that Discord is one of a kind, but where's the fun in that. I would love to see Spike and the group stopping in the ancestral lands of Discord, which for some reason I'm imagining to be in Israel. That would be pure epicness in my opinion.
Again, these are just my opinions and you have no requirements whatsoever to put these into your story. The addition of these races however would be wonderful, and would make this already 9/10 piece of literature into a perfect score work of art in my opinion.
Now to the chapter itself. As usual, your description of the world around the characters paints a wonderfully vivid mental picture. It's what makes this fic so good as not a lot of authors describe the scene vividly like you do. You also personalize all your characters wonderfully, properly having them express all the correct emotions to their surroundings and situations. You even give the guards personality, which is a huge boost. A lot of authors don't bother giving unimportant characters such detail, but by doing so, it gives the story so much more. One guard is new, and therefore is skittish on the job, while another is a prick. It's little things like these that make the story feel so much more alive and compelling to read. Your use of situational humour is also wonderfully done. Dude, an erupting volcano and a tsunami making sweet sweet love? Priceless.
This story already has my vote of confidence, 9/10, and if one of my two suggested races were to make it into this fic, well, perfect score to you good sir. Keep up the amazing work, and I hope to see new stories from you that are just as wonderful as this.
Interesting artwork. That pretty much how I picture them. Oh awesome chapter by the way. keep up the amazing work.
Also will there be any artwork for Meia.
great chaptergreat pics too
daaayyum, so many scrolls. For a second, I thought it was Twilight researching Meia's background or something.
Can't wait to see the reaction and the process of finding that out for the ponies back home
Nice pics, although the Trixie one could use a bit more work imo.
Them pics and that reaction Twilight had. three hundred thousand?! I know Twilight's a major brainiac and all, but can she really read all of those? I might take her a whole month or more
Le artwork pleases me :3 also, yay update! XD
That artwork was amazing.
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Can someone get a doctor? I need a blood transfusion because I lost too much blood.
Anyone?
As usual I let out a squee of joy when I saw you updated.
Found one teeny slip up:
since.
I agree on what some other comment said, regarding when they travel through Asia, like using some of the standard Japanese lore.
Such as the tailed foxes and crow demons (Karasu tengu).
asalah look generic
maria is HOT
and theirs boobs are slipping out
FIRST!
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I most likely will whilst I'm on holiday.
Awesome chapter!
No clop, but love the sexual puns.
If it was possible I think Twilight would have teleported to Spike and fucked his brains out for getting that gift.
3050197 Thank you for pointing that out. Sometimes spell-check just doesn't work for me.
3049285>>3050197 Would the two of you like to be let in on some... secrets?
3053638 I'm listening, though I think this should be in a PM.
3053638
Yup, I'm listening.
3054004>>3054990 Then PM me, and great and fabulous secrets shall be yours!
I am about to make a meme reference.
I .CAME PAPERRRRRRRR
LOL
Hahaaahaaaaa! Wipe out!
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3092862 Oh no, there will be far more than four wives. Just you wait and see...
3094483 are any of those wives going to be twilight and her friends
3099821 Yes.... and in doing so, they grow stronger in the ways of the Forc- er, I mean, yeah.
Hey make Spike's next wife a Diamond Dog!
3116973 I've already fit in as many wives (into the whole story) as I feel Spike should be able to handle, and sorry to say I won't be adding alicorns, draconequui or diamond dogs. The next wife won't be so much as furry as she will be... feathery. And she won't be a pegasus either...
3117069 GILDA
3129938 Not Gilda: this one is martial, proud, strong, and infinitely more badass.
Anyway, how's your sex life?
3130616 Pretty good, Denny. it's a good thing I have Mark as my best friend, and I love Lisa so much.
this story has so many chapters...
I LOVE IT
I just finished reading all the chapters and honestly have to say this is THE BEST STORY I've ever read!!!! Can't wait for the next one.
Im surprised that Twilight didn't have a... BOOKGASM!
Well Twilight did ask for books. I just couldn't stop laughing at Pinkies antics.
I can only feel sorrow for the librarians from Baghdad because not only did they had seen a dragon, a zebra and three unicorns copy three hundred thousand valuable scrolls, books and tablets only to set them ablaze? Sad but funny!
3117069 god damiit you promised me earlier in the story for a draeques
......Uhhhhhhh...one thing I could gather from this chapter: PINKIE PIE IS A BADASS
That ending. Talk about a sea of knowledge, eh?
Cya
Raziel-chan
4512140 you established this just now where have you been like forever
Instant orgasm. Without the faintest shadow of a doubt.