When he becomes of age, Spike sets out on a mission given to him by the princesses: to get married. But, as usual, he gets more than he bargained: so much more. Tons of worldbuilding abounds in this story, along with clop and other fun stuff.
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To saddle Arabia and another wife in the harem, I'm sure.
I hit refresh one last time before I went to bed, and oh man was it worth it. I was so hoping Chrysalis would finally go full badass since the cat was out of the bag anyway, I was not disappointed. Felt a little rushed compared to some of the other action scenes, considering the scale of the devastation he managed to dish out in the chapter. Aside from that though, I'm happy with this chapter as a whole. Great job so far, and keep up the awesome writing!
By the end, I want Spike to have a wife of every race!
Rarity and Pinkie both have six senses going crazy! Nothing like burning all of those who have threatened your family to alleviate your anger.
Good action chapter, always enjoyable when Spike get to unleash his inner dragon.
I knew from the get go those pirates were screwed. Chrysalis curbstomped Princess Celestia for crying out loud! They stood no chance.
Chrysalis more or less just proved that she is the heavy hitter out of all the wives so far. And I wouldn't be surprise if Spike becomes infamous and gets a cool nickname considering how high his kill count must be by now. You know it would be cool if you of Spike's new wife is a thief that tried to steal from him or an assassin trying to keep him for a job.
Did Spike just pull a Monstrous Nightmare from How to Train Your Dragon? Wonder what other interesting traits Spike will show in the future.
They all want him dead lol
Spike is the ultimate badass, with Chrysalis brining the pain as well!
Undi lasted longer than I thought he would.
Might want to fix that. Supposed to be "Flames scorched it shut"
2512128 Thanks for pointing that out. Damn, sometimes spell-check just doesn't work.
2512508 At least you have one.
Anyways, just keep these chaps coming! On to the next bride and orgy!
Can't wait to see the Mane 6's reaction to his orgies and Chryssy.
(also, I honestly thought the whole thing with Undi would have lasted longer, like maybe another chap or so.)
2512541 I never said Undi was done with...
Besides, I have a lot of history planned for the next wife, and it won't involve Saddle Arabia. I assure you, the sex will not entirely dry up the next few chapters, but there will be less. This isn't purely action/smut, after all.
Yes! That was funny and action packed. Chrysalis gets the gold for best supporting actress I this chapter. The things she did was funny and awesome. Spike was awesome in this chapter too, but that's already known.
And Rarity's reaction to the pet-name is priceless.
Quick update and Great chapter!
I wanted moar gore... like Kano open heart surgery, but Spike covering himself in flaming pitch and going all Dread Pirate Roberts on Undi was bad ass.
At least Chrysalis through a maternal hormone fueled rampage created a storm of Odyssey levels of destruction. As for the character herself, at this point she is scary powerful because when was feeding off of Shining Armor (1 unicorn) she was stronger than Celestia and now she is getting from her family (1 dragon and 3 equines).
I do wonder what insults were thrown at the dolphins. I'd like to imagine something involving Aquaman.
Have you been reading Fairy Tale maga because this seems familer ahh who cares Spike plus pirates = a shit load of fucking carnige biches
I have a feeling the next wife is Zebra onless you have something up your sleve their mate
"Saxton hale did that once. Damn hippie never knew what hit him."
"Besides saxtons left hand."
that just made my heart burst witjh laughter followed by coughing up both lungs
So far my favorite story on this website
Spike is bucking awesome!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Spike you should have killed him with
Your own hands rather than throwing him into the water. Now he's gonna show up in a few chapters and have some sort of anti dragon measures.
Was he using Greek fire?
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I'd guess so, yeah.
Well, the dragon fire equivalent of greek fire, anyways.
Ok, three...or four, I'll see how many when I put them, things:
1) using deck and dick so close together reminded of yugioh the abridged movie: let's whip out our decks! (Yusei) um ok, you meant that with an I right?
2) same as the constant baby batter thing, I think you should have used synonyms for flaming such as smoldering or combusting
3) DAMN CHRYSSY THAT WAS SOME BUCKED UP SHIT!...don't tell me she's going to go all pinkamena on everypony
4) Using a gif someone used earlier in this story but for different context: this is the face of everyone here when someone says spike sucks data2.whicdn.com/images/23672268/haunter-used-mean-look_large.gif
one problem is that its to easy he get pissed bad guy goes away there is no struggle in action and that's terrible
Aww yeah, Chryssie went Storm on them.
Cya
Raziel-chan
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Soooo... What are you saying? Are you telling me that someone threatening your family isn't something to be pissed at? Are you saying that if someone threatened, and actually tried to kill your kids.... That you would just smile and nod; completely keeping your cool, and stay level headed? Really?.... Truly?......
OK. Then you're better than me cause I know I couldn't, and wouldn't even try. I'd gladly let the rage consume me......
So yeah props.
It's gonna be worrying if Spike's active life outside his wives doesn't slow down. They're only gonna get more and more pregnant, and Spike wants them back home before they deliver.