When he becomes of age, Spike sets out on a mission given to him by the princesses: to get married. But, as usual, he gets more than he bargained: so much more. Tons of worldbuilding abounds in this story, along with clop and other fun stuff.
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Oh no, my theory of spike coming back and marrying the main 6 has been shaken! Nothing against flash sentry, of course, but I still wish for the other.
Flashlight shipping? Everyone duck and cover!
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How about you reveal his full name to be Flash Flood, instead of Flash Sentry? Maybe the background would be his job in the weather team, but found his ability to manipulate storm to quite literally "flush out" the enemy was worth military credit.
I think Spike's questions are meant to echo the questions of the readers about how his status is supposed to work. Yeah, when you're close friends with/pseudo-family of beings with as much power as Celestia, Luna, and Twilight, tact is necessary, especially in situations like this. Twilight, the morning pony. Who wants to bet Spike will have his friends in this group of advisers, or wish to, at least? That explains Twilight's reaction earlier. You know, I never really got why Flash seems hated so much by some fans, especially since they probably won't make them an official couple in canon. So, the batponies mostly left Equestria centuries ago? Spike might need to see a therapist at some point. So, Blueblood is smarter than he appears. I don't like this Duke character, especially if the old Chrysalis would be a lesser evil compared to him, let's hope Spike is prepared to face him if necessary.. So, we finally see Shining and Cadence's foals? Yeah, Eutropia's a smart one for her age, she raises some valid points there.
5348102 That's what I was thinking while reading this chapter. Early in the story it seemed kinda obvious that when Celestia was talking to Luna about certain things when Spike was back in Equestria, she was talking about Spike knocking up the mane 6, her and Luna.
Like the chapter having twilight actually in it, but wish that spike and the rest had actually gotten closer to their next destination. Doesn't need to be rushed, but at least a little forward movement each chapter would be nice. And on flash, I think it's good for her to finally grow up and get a stallion in her life. Other than that, I say 'Onward Spike'!
P.s. Maybe a little more comedy or funny moments? I like it when stories like this have that occasional thing that makes you re-read a sentence 20 times cuz it's so funny. Kinda like what happened in saddle Arabia with the club... Funny stuff like that.
I don't know why, but the term "batpony" is pissing me off for some reason. The proper term is thestrals, so maybe that's what's annoying me...
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I don't know, maybe Twilight dating Flash Sentry is a reactionary thing to Spike doing what hes doing. Thats said in the chapter, and just because they're dating doesn't mean they're going to get married.
I predict that Twilight is going to realize that while she cares for Flash Sentry, and this is probably going to happen to the other mane 6 as well, Spike is the one they're going to end up with.
Of course I could be horribly wrong and abramus could swoop down with the power of the author and axe this theory, but until then I am going to hope.
A tiny glimpse into how bad things are for Celestia in long term plans and manipulation.
Looks like the Duke is going to end up on Spikes list. Cutletts, Rashers, or Shish Kebob.
Dear Celestia,
I think you're gonna need a bigger castle.
New wife next episode? or just Griffin it on with what he has so far?
Woo! Some insight on Equestrian/Crystal Empire ponies! I was a little disappointed about the Flashlight ship. I guess I was expecting Mac or some other pony. Heck, I almost thought it was (a very polite) Vinyl Scratch, or (a more casual) Tavi because of the canterlot thing.
Still, when Celly and Luna were discussing future politics, I couldn't help but giggle when they were wondering what Chrysalis might pull on Spike. Oh the irony. I could make a tank out of it
Can't wait to see more. Good luck on your finals.
Okay, you are really building us up to some scary shit happening before Spike's children are born. Still I really can't wait to see how they all react to the Chrysalis thing, please please have the reveal soon. I can't wait for that there are a lot of things that I can't wait for in this. Oh please new chapter soon.
I cant wait till chryssie arrives in equestria
5349802 I have to agree with that sentiment 100%. Especially after Celestia's and Luna's discussion about her in particular. Although maybe because of that they will be a little less shocked will be more willing to accept she bears no ill will. Though honestly that could go either way. I for one can't wait to see Cadence and Shining's reaction.
As for Flash... I will give him a chance, but I've got my eye on him
Man this story is killing me. The impatience of a teenager is insane at times. Love the story so far and I will continue to love it until it ends...
But hopefully not for a while.
well done. i can't wait to read what happens next. please keep up the good work
Loved this story so far. Plz dont stop. oh, will chrysalis be finally told to the princesses soon...and maybe get spike to forgive and take rarity as his final bride?
Nooooooo kill flash off and bring back the idea of spike marrying the mane 6
5351587 bad
just.... bad
5351587 No...no...none of that...shame on you.
5355680 shame on you for liking that horrible waste of a 15 minute segment character good day sir
I demand a scene where spike goes badass and makes everyone's jaws drop! I demand it you fool!
I LIKED IT!
I will eagerly await more!
-Suggestion though, perhaps make it a bit more obvious when you switch points of view.... I mean you went from Twilight Asking Flash a question to Celestia sending Luna to bed! Put in some lines or something to show that it is changing! That might help the story a bit.... it'll at least help me!
5351587 I kind of like the idea of Spike marrying the Mane 6 but Y kill Flash? That is a waste of a possibly helpful character. You could possibly make it to where Twi breaks up with Flash since she said she is bad with relationships, but no killing!
5358764 I just hate him......as a love interest he can be a good guy friend for spike but I don't like him being a love interest.......because everyone knows spike and sombra are the best male characters also discord
Man I've been reading in fanfiction and I freaking love every chapter!
And now that I haven't read a chapter since before summer, I have some catching up to do.
Very informative chapter. I'll say my peace on the, Flash, character now. The only reason I don't like him is because he has no unique personality or good reason to be in, Twilight's, life. It was like, "Your a Princess, here your knight! Be together." And when it come to the show, what kind of guard just keeps getting in your way. Seriously! How many time do I have to bump into you for you to realize that you are in the way.
But, you said this is your, Flash, so I'll just give it a pass. Just don't make him a character that keeps getting mention and we're cool. This story is about, Spike and his new family, not Twilight and that guy. Can't even say his name more than twice.
I kind of hope spike falls in love with a Dragoness
When is next chapter coming oute hope to hear from u soon okay
I sense something....
It is as though Ebony is already doomed....
With the ball and chain. (Heyo!)
But seriously, anybody else get the feeling from the past two chapters hat the poor guy is about to have some bad luck?
Certain parts of this really had me cracking up. Loved Celestia going "If he married Chrysalis it'd be really bad." Just couldn't stop chuckling and laughing the more she went on. Luna's little one liner at the end of that section was beautiful too.
kill kill kill kill kill kill kill
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Plus your flash sentry had a tan coat not orange along with sounding like a desk job guard not a going out sword in hand against enemies guard
5663456 we need pros and I dont think anyone else can help
5478635 twice in this chapter has someone said "what could go wrong?" and once in the previous chapter. I KNOW something bad is going to happen.
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yea iknow right at least twilight of any of them
5478635 I have a sneakin suspicion he's going to die... Then Bakkie will end up unhappy or with Spike.... Just a guess but given the drama and how I would see this story I have an ominous feeling that the later of the options will happen more or less.
He just jinxed himself just you watch
Huh, it seems the last glimpse at Equestria wasn't as far back as I thought. Seems like forever ago when it happened. I hope we get another flame mirror thing after Marescow.
Goddamnit.
Strictly in the biblical sense, of course.
Oh. That's a relief.
Hmm well i'm slightly relieved. I was seeing this as going with a mane six plus Princesses and CMC joining the haram. Glad it seems to be going the other way. Still that leaves the others. I can see there being sort of a three way for Big Mac between Luna, Shy and Dash
But that's just me
This was interesting to read, seeing as how 90% of the fandom seem to hate Flash with a passion. I don't mind though