When he becomes of age, Spike sets out on a mission given to him by the princesses: to get married. But, as usual, he gets more than he bargained: so much more. Tons of worldbuilding abounds in this story, along with clop and other fun stuff.
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Everyone get your hardhats and umbrellas. The shit storm is a coming!
3672707 going to need more then that need a whole dam bunker.
let these fucker meet death of scorponack
Wow, great chapter, I love the bit about the dragon bone dust, I cannot wait until the next update, oh what a wonderful story this is.
3672707 Hard hats and umbrellas? stand with me, we shall revel in this shitstorm with nothing but manliness and mustache's to protect us
This is zo awesome!
The oncoming storm has arrived.
3672707 It's time to duck and cover.
So the emperor (the rightful emperor) and his wife have a son. As we all know---when it comes to royalty, blood is always in front of family with no exceptions. I'm enjoying that he knows Dervin (that's his name, right?) was dirty the entire time, and is ready to figurately take off the snake's head.
At the same time, Dervin is doing everything he can to overthrown the emperor, who is his uncle, because he would become emperor should something (death if you are too dense to understand ) happen to his uncle, whether legit or not. Too bad that ultimately, it's all gonna be for naught, because some of Dervin's men are loyal to the true emperor. Plus, now they know, Dervin has no claim whatsoever to the throne, thanks to the birth of the emperor's son. (What a fortuitous time to be born with a penis ), but Dervin doesn't know....he's heading for a slaughter.....
And if shit's already getting twisted, while Spike's imprisoned, his wives are being escorted by a griffon and her daughter, to get them to safety, because Spike's currently a ticking time bomb.....and that's before we found out that when Chystalis got captured with everypony else, that sent out a bit of a distress signal. Remember, guy, Chrystalis may be married to Spike, but she was already royalty to start with, and also she's a honest-forsaken QUEEN....WHO IS PREGNANT.......Here comes the calvary for everyone---whether they want it or not. The Changling Empire's version of Navy SEALS, I'm assuming.
And, based on what going on, I would not be surprised if Eutropia the young griffin helping Spike's other wives escape and reunite with the dragon again is foreshadowing for her actually joining them when it's all said and done. Mynerta is a captain, and I'm pretty sure that the emperor is more than happy to be a judge of the peace and perform an improptu wedding.
All in all, if the shit has not hit the fan already, be prepared!!!
bunker...check
snacks...check
cameras in strategic locations...check
let the fun begin
and by the way... I HATE THIS SUSPENSE!! But its going to be so beautiful
Who
Me
yeeee you marvellous bastard the suspense is intense.
update faster!
FUCK your updates are like penis shaped diamonds.
thank you.
Everypony duck and cover with your muffins cause shit is gunna get bloodier!
Changeling Black Ops will soon commence.
Death from.....EVERYWHERE!!!
They put the emphasis on "wet work"
Hmm, this whole thing sounds like it's going to be a slaughter in the Emperor's favor.
*a lone stranger stands in the path of the shit storm in his nikkers and says*"bring it"
*Standing in the tallest tree*
I see a shit storm coming...
*Jumps*
And...
*Falling*
I'm ready to face it...
3672899 Don't forget the alcohol, crazy things are always better with alcohol.
AHHHH! The suspense is maddening. I knew there was a reason why I didn't won't to read this chapter yet.
Next chapter must have ACTION, BLOOD, and one guard WITH HIS DICK CUT OFF AND SHOVED DOWN HIS THOART!
3678166 While true the experience while sober grows hair on ones chest and creates beards of steel wool.
Holy cow. Although there were a few spelling errors, this is a great story, and I'm looking forward to seeing more of it.
Please keep up the great work!
3673149 I don't see the Doctor *sigh* just ignore this comment I'm being stupid
3686469 Can you ever not when it's from an author as good as this though?
The next chapter cannot come soon enough.
Well...it seems that changlings are gonna start the biggest Shit storm of our time...again.
OH! and by the way....MORE PLEASE!!!
At the end I can see the Mane 6 marrying Spike as well. If that's the case, awesome! If not oh well. Either way can't wait for the next chapter.
3783774 Hooray! Also, I must warn you, there's still about 60 chapters to go until I think the story will be totally done.
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this is long?
this fic has nothing on some ive read. i read fics that breach 500K+ words pretty normally. means dedication, and, hopefully, quality.
3804889 Gee, way to make me feel like this fun, personal story I write is a pile of shit. Thank you, mister "this is long?" and "this fic has nothing on some I've read".
Also, this story is only half done: 60 chapters to go, remember?
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if you couldn't tell, i was being sarcasting.
3805093
i apologize, but when did i criticize the quality of this fiction?
i did not ever demean the effort or result of your labor, but i did comment on the length in comparison to other things i often read. which, in all ways i observe it, does not directly correlate to its ability to be good. one of my favorite video games of all time is also one of the shortest i've ever played. the fact that i read many fictions in the harry potter fandom that exceed half a million words does not make me able to say a fiction in the mlp fandom that is a 5th, is definitively worse. nor did i ever imply that i believe so.
Also, the fact that i read this and its so much shorter is actually saying a good thing about it. considering i usually equate a very long story to also mean a complicated, and intricate one. a point that i have rarely ever found to be incorrect
i do mean this politely sir, but please, dont read so far into things. thats my job.
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is it... really so much to ask that i can be sarcastic in the comments of a story?
i made that comment in truth. by the 'has nothing on' i meant, in terms of length it is not long. relatively, most stories i read are very long are so because the author loves them. and works hard on them.
normally these stories are finished. and, also, not everyone has the ability to sit down and write a 3,000,000+ word long fic. and i understand that. i just normally read that. so, the fact i read this is a testament to the fact that i actually like it.
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i do apologize for the implied slur, i was unaware of my exact wording just a vague understaning of what it said after time passed. and yes, i do know that its hard as hell to write a long, sensible piece. which is why i'm impressed to hell by anyone that can. cause i most definitely dont have that kind of patience.
Yay I found you here! I was reading your story on fanfiction.com so glad to see this here and even with a new chapter!
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If you have foreknowledge, and do bet... Wouldn't that be cheating?
Also spike needs to have this at some point.
3873039 It was magically propelled by itself, with no driver. Who needs to drive an enchanted vehicle?
3885771 Jeez, all these errors that nobody else caught....
Thank you for pointing these out.
3887575 I should have explained that: external magic(s), as in, magical levitation, teleportation, summoning things, transformation and such, are not the same as a disguise spell, which is more internal and, might I add (since I just realized this) a fundamental part of changeling biology.
3894915 Yeah, photobucket acted up and I'll need to fix them. Try on my main page.
A friendly person I know asked me to allow you to use my OC. So, here we are.
Name: Zero
Species: Robot/Cybernetically advanced. Has reached Metastability, so acts human.
Gender: Male, predominantly.
Age (Optional): If I had to say, around 21.
Personality: Naturally Cocky, Fun, Caring for those he likes and is loyal to, Violent, when those he cares about are hurt or majorly insulted and strong. Has an array of weaponry such as a wrist mounted portal gun, wrist mounted plasma burst firing beam gun and is covered by damage reducing waterproof plates. Read the story if you wish.
3896800 Um............... please read the blog for more specifics. It's called "Casting Call". For now, no, as there will be no cybernetically-advanced stuff, or human OC accepted. No guns or anything similar either, as well.
3896816 Ok, sorry [*Insert 'SORRY, RAINBOW DASH' here*]
name: sol
species: alicon (originally human-god)
gender: male
age: 42 (16 age of appearance)
personality: expressionless, kind, will do right thing, tends to over think things, will fight for family, friends, and a noble cause
3896925 Please read the blog called "Casting Call" of mine for these OCs. No to this one: no humans, alicorns or gods.
3896941 ok
sorry
UPDATE!!?
3897138 Within this week.
I want more of this story!!!!!!!!!!