When he becomes of age, Spike sets out on a mission given to him by the princesses: to get married. But, as usual, he gets more than he bargained: so much more. Tons of worldbuilding abounds in this story, along with clop and other fun stuff.
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Another great chapter. Is wife no. 5 going to be at their next stop?
to curry favor.. to carry favor, curry is a type of Indian and Japanese food.
all.
“Well, then, can we proceed?” Badr asked, wringing her hands slightly. Need a extra enter for paragraph separation.
You have taken his wild oats into your womb, and have created life! Sex has never sounded so hot!
A grand wedding and some rather nice sentimental moments Onward to adventure and mares!
2742880 One of them. Sooner than you think, but they won't be married right away. It'll take a bit longer for the romance to "blossom", as they say. Besides, a little birdy told me this might be a good new story arc.
is fine dude but first you killed me with the feels
2742959 Thanks for the mistake notice: curry is delicious, but to curry favor is "to seek or gain favor by fawning or flattery".
2743014 Hmm, interesting.
That part with Trixie and the fireworks, perfect
Spike, Get a griffon wife already!!!
Anyway, the story was very much so focused on emotional distress and doubt. As stated, Maria is developing fine and of course the situation Spike made concerning a Sky Pirate is now building up, which will be hunting him down, which I hope will not be long and to be expected of a town that has... a cultural hatred for Dragons.
Spike needs to get a every species of female in the equestrian world, cause he is just that awesome.
This chapter had killed me with feels.
Another great chapter!
While I love how this chapter went, I am still more interested in the reactions of Spike's other friends and family when he lets them know about Chrysalis.
Yeah, dragons are kinda dicks that way. They'll grow old, ascend high into the air and die only to crush what ever happens to be beneath them and then there is what happens after that and let's just say certain lower muscles become lax in death.
As for Chrysalis when she confronts Celestia and the others without the disguise, they'll be skeptical and pissed off at her. The thing is Chrysalis has absorbed more than enough energy from Spike and her family to conquer the world and could bring that up, saying that priorities change and then she tells off Celestia and the rest of the elements.
Bonus honeymoon scene for the newly-weds?
Also, can't wait for the rest of the adventure
Wonderful new chapter. Absolutely loving how the story is progressing. Keep up the excellent work
That said, noticed a small error near the end.
"...the streets of Saddle Arabia’s capital until they reached the mane gates."
Unless the gates are literally made out of hair, might want to go an change that
2745380 Thanks for noticing that. I try to make sure everything's nice and poloished before I publish, but sometimes... I just miss things.
Also, thank you for the words of praise. I have a feeling a lot of people are going to like the next arc of the story.
an exelant chapterits nice to slow things down once in awile
Great chapter, it's about time Spike's wives got some lime light. Can't wait for the conversation from home, although i have to say considering what the last few chapters were about I personally believe that Spike should just come clean to everyone back home. "No more secrets" that's what they said right? Again great work, can't wait for more.
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that would be dramatic but that doesn't really make sense.
many HIe writers base their characters off of themselves or people they know.
...which is possibly were cross overs came from!?!?!
Any ways the human in the herd idea would create a plot hole.... a very big plot hole. (enough with the puns! moving on)
you telling me that of the entire time ponies existed and dragons ... and alicorns.... and other mythical creatures which can be debated later never found this odd ape race, which is very intimate and intelligent but isn't a player in any global diplomacy? not likely.
I mean if he wanted to overburden him self and create a mid story prequel story arc that explained this (which would also change story to a completely different direction I think he is heading. Then thats an option but I don't recommend it.
2799176 That's because there are a lot better clop writers out there who have actually experienced the joys of sex and have some knowledge to base it all on.
. ....that can be taken so many ways
Mane gates
Think you meant main.
You prefer slice-of-life over other pseudo-genres, then.