Applejack made a mistake a few months ago and has been carrying it around with her ever since. Literally.
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I think you need to make a series out of this. Even if no clop is involved I her next generation fanfics a popular.
Oh crapstick, only Trix could manage to blindly bomb an F-You at Celestia. Considering Trixie is a former student at CSGU, I'm starting to wonder how may times she's ended up in detention for just that sort of language.
one more chapter to go!
im both sad and excited about this! XD
This chapter surprised me in a lot of ways. First off, Cheerilee and Mac's baby was born prematurely and died? I thought Cheerilee had an abortion that Mac didn't approve of, and that's why they broke up! Looks like Mac has come to his senses, but why the heck was he wasting 16 years of both their lives?
I really love Flam and Trixie's reaction to Hesperides. The parents you kind of expect, but being an aunt and uncle can really have a profound effect on you. Here's hoping Trixie no longer thinks she's too 'broken' to have foals of her own. Also, I loved that scene with Celestia and Trixie, I immediately pictured this: derpicdn.net/img/view/2013/6/20/353148__oc_blushing_princess+celestia_grimdark_bondage_cigarette_artist-colon-tanyamya.png
It's great to see that Applejack is finally coming to her senses, but she still owes he friends the truth about why Flim "left" in the first place. Though Fluttershy's stern look is indeed adorable. I can't wait to hear what happens to Discord for this, and what his excuse is.
that was a awesome the parts with Trixie was funny and cute.Im happy AJ and Flim made up and there going to be together .And the part with Big Mac and Cheerilee was sweet and cute.
Another side note regarding the habit of smoking, which I do not condone and have never tried, it can cause pregnancy complications.
Now that I got that out of my system, I look forward to the epilogue. It would be nice for the story to have a followup, and maybe you could consider a story that focuses on the relationship of Flam and Trixie, complete with their actual wedding and maybe them having their own baby.
This chapter can be described in two words by me: bittersweet.
The sweet comes in little Hesperides's cuteness and Flim and Applejack's relationship fixing itself back together. Trixie's acceptance of her heritage was nice too, and Applejack's honesty shining through once again was great! Trixie goofed! Oh my sides! I wonder what Discord's punishment is, Celestia didn't look too happy. Big Mac and Cheerilee together: yay!
The bitter comes in the fact that the twins are going to be spending time apart. Given what Flim said to Applejack about being two halves of the same whole, need each other to be whole, and Flam's emotional breakdown when he thought his twin was dying: I don't know how they're going to deal with it. Well, they managed for four years the first time, but they didn't like it. Being together... it's what makes them special as characters in the show, and so popular. They've even got devotion cutie marks. But that's just my opinion.
Hah! So my guess was correct about Rainbow Dash's reaction! Thank you for mentioning it!
There's just one thing that bothers me: did Hesperides's naming occur in the space between this chapter and the last one?
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Really? You think so? I'd like to do a shorter spin-off story.
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She is?
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Really? What gave you that impression? Was it suggested in the story? I'm legit curious here! And the reason why Mac buried his emotions for so long might be in another story; I'm not sure if there's room for it here.
That's true. Twilight might have explained a it while the rest of the M6 left with Celestia, but it has to come from the horse's mouth. (Oh god, I actually just wrote that...)
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Cool! Another vote for a spin-off! I do have an idea, but it has to germinate...
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Yeah, me neither. It could be an interesting idea to play with.
No, that happened in the chapter called 'Eligible Bachelors'.
6634979 Well, I didn't say they had to be 30+ chapters long. If you wrote a sequel just give the other 5 members of the Main 6 maybe 2 or 3 chapters each.
6634979 The part where Cheerilee first confronts Big Mac about his zany scheme to marry Flim to Applejack, it seemed to me like he resented her for having to plant that tree commemorating his lost child. It was in the context of Cheerilee discussing how obstinate and socially conservative Mac is.
From this, I thought Mac knocked up Cheerilee when they were teenagers, and Big Mac wanted to do the right thing and marry Cheerilee and raise the baby, but Cheerilee didn't want to get married so she had an abortion instead.
I can understand how a miscarriage or a premature birth that dies can break up a relationship with sorrow and grief. It's just, Cheerilee and Mac still see each other all the time, and they're both single. I assumed that if the reason their relationship broke up was grief, after they had completed the grieving process, eventually they would get back together. Only a really fundamental disagreement would see them stay broken up for 16 years, like if Mac felt Cheerilee had aborted what he considered his child or something similar.
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Yeah, trust me, being a dick = getting a kick in the dick, or whatever other organ applies
(obviously not really, since its illegal, but you get the sentiment)
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It seems to be a generally held consensus, that Trixie did attend Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns. (I believe McCarthy mentioned that on twitter or such.) While canonically not at the level of Twilight as seen in Boast Busters and Magic Duel, Trixie's magical ability is established as being far above typical for a unicorn. That being so, she would have attended, or at least been recruited to, CSGU. As to whether she finished, that's a different tale. Some head cannon versions have her as having been the main rival to Sunset Shimmer, in becoming Celestia's personal student at the time. Of course your own head cannon need comply with none of this, TSB is your tale, tell it as you would have it.
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That's an interesting take on it. I tried to keep the details loose here, but keep in mind a young, confused teenager could have felt like Cheerilee "did something" to cause the foal to be unable to survive. I mean, he was pressing for marriage, and she wanted to go off to teachers' college; when two ponies who care about each other a lot have a terrible fight while they're both grieving, terrible things can be said that can't easily be taken back.
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I read a story (that I can't find now, of course) that suggested Trixie was good at magic because her talent was mimicry; i.e., once another pony showed their magic, she could copy it. That could lead to her building up an arsenal of tricks. I'm not sure if I'm going to keep that headcanon in here, but Flam did mention at one point that she didn't have the chance to go to college.
Trixie is Best Horse.