Applejack made a mistake a few months ago and has been carrying it around with her ever since. Literally.
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I'd be a bit careful with the 'he' and 'she's here. During Berry and AJ's conversation, it was a little hard to keep track of who was talking there.
Flim with a conscience. Whodathunkit!
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Damn! I tried to keep their dialogue separate with the paragraph spacing, but I did some editing to make it more obvious who was who. Was there a section in particular that had too many "she"s?
OMG OMG OMG <3 New chapter!
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Right there. The only time we get a name is Berry at the very top, but the description is Applejack's opinion about Berry's looks. However, the same paragraph has Berry speaking. Short of AJ's accent, all the "she"s after make it hard as hell to track!
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Oh, okay. Thanks. I went back and edited that section a bit to change some of the pronouns. Then I'll get some sleep and take another look at it later. :)
That was a awesome and sad read Im happy that Berry is ok and we finnly know what happend to her.I hope AJ and Flim make up soon .I can't wait to see whar happens next to and between them all next. And im happy Flim and Soarin made up hopefully one day they can be frinds.
Soarin, buddy, pal, you're dumb.
Also... set up for future menage a trois? ::wink wink nudge nudge::
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Ah, the cool down period. Interesting little, hmm, not sure whether to call this a diversionary chapter or not. Takes a different tone of sorts, wraps up some loose ends, hmm. Kind of like a milder mid course dish in a multi-course banquet. Excellent displayed character growth, too. The impacts of the soul forging events that particularly Flim seems to have gone through now come across as natural in the shape of his character. I'm not sure how he's come to he's come to feel about the new shape of his soul but I'm sure you'll let us get a look in maybe the next chapter of picnics and introspection.
6008022 Regardless it's always a good idea to read through your posted chapters and see if you can spot errors.
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Yes, I do that, but some typos still get through.
yeah back to the meat of the story!
im here worried about whats going to happen to the couple. i really like them in this story X3
6011339 glad to help.
You melted me with this complete chapter, then I nearly busted a gut laughing at Soarin's last line. You'd think in Happy Horse Land, they'd know what the hell bisexuality is.
I don't really care much for the stereotype that Irish are drunks or heavy drinkers, but that's mostly because I'm 1/4 Irish on my dad's side. That said, I didn't mind the joke too much, and enjoyed the chapter quite a bit.
I wonder what's coming next, hope it's worthwhile.
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You think they can be friends one day? This kind of betrayal, even if it wasn't Flim's fault, can be hard to get over. But Soarin' could use some friends...
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Hee hee, you're not the first who's wanted to see an AJ/Flim/somepony else threesome in here. It's quite tempting, I must say.
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Well, without giving too much away, they'll be apart for a bit, but still very present in each others' mind.
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Happy Horse Land... omg. You'd think, wouldn't you? But I'm STILL surprised about how ignorant some people can be. For example, a friend of mine auditioned for a role in a well-known "queer positive" playhouse, and was quietly told beforehand to lie and say she was a lesbian, because they would outright refuse to give her a role if they knew she was pansexual. Seriously. At a "queer-positive" playhouse. In 2014.
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I guess I should have mentioned in the author's notes that I'm part-Irish myself.
Yeah, me too.
6022410 That's screwed up.
6022410 One day hoe so.
I've finally managed to spare some time to read this fic, and now that I've caught up, I'm gonna have to wait for a new chapter!
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That's so sweet! Thanks for taking the time. I'm-a try to get some writing done tomorrow---it's all in my head, just gotta get it out!
Goodness. This turned into a little soap opera, didn't it? Ooh, I thought I'd learned my lesson after AppleJinx's stuff but my, my, my...
Much as I'm almost afraid to say it, you've got me hooked, and on Flim's side even. Kudos!
(But Soarin' is still so thick it's a wonder he can take off)
Found another Flimjack fan foal a while ago, here she is. Something funny I noticed is that Applejack is always paired with Flim, but never Flam, as of yet I have to find any stories or art fan art that ships Flam and Applejack.
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Yeah, I noticed that too! I think I've only seen one pic of Flam with AJ. I'm not sure why. I got the impression in the SSCS6K episode that Flim was the one interacting with her directly... maybe that has something to do with it.
6109172 oh yeah, i'm sure applejack wouldn't at all resent mac for trying to force them to marry
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Her brood slave??? That is... ridiculously kinky.