Applejack made a mistake a few months ago and has been carrying it around with her ever since. Literally.
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These are the conversations I live for, and the cliffhangers I happily endure for them. Proceed.
Hey, lactation isn't that odd a fetish. I mean, okay, the way it;'s written usually is, what with gallons and gallons, but nursing a pregnant woman is something that a lot of guys actually dig, and I hear some women do, too.
I am loving how AJ and Flim are slowly getting closer to each other. Like, there was hardly any real annoyance this time. Watching people fall in love is really cool. And dat cliffhanger...
Great chapter, Susie!
Also: Now we need to have a chapter some time where Flim ties Applejack down and teases her mercilessly! He's been quasi-immobilised so often now, he deserves to turn the tables once^^
Nice one, though I was hoping for the ultrasound ... but this isn't unpleasant either. But I did think you might keep the clop off for another chapter or two. Meh, good show all the same.
However, ...
Princess Bride Reference?
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Ha! How would that work? He's in the hospital! Well, maybe he could put a 'Do Not Disturb' sign on the door...
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Yeah, I'd planned this one to be the ultrasound chapter, but... it didn't quite work out that way. That's how it goes when you're writing a bit at a time
And I really can't go very long without making a PB reference.
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OH! finally they are reunited but wow his reaction is perfect! XD
and id call Rainbow Dash! since they are like best friends!
4777112 The best stories somehow manage to tell themselves how they want, we the authors just have to transpose them.
Love the PB references, also love the title theme from the same, such excellent classical guitar.. Now how do we get an Inigo Montoya reference in somewhere?
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I think I missed something there.
A possible reference to the Apples' past...?
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"Hello. My name is Big MacIntosh. You killed my father. Prepare to die."
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SusieBeeca you have fantastic timing, I was just thinking at the start of this chapter "It's been a long time since we've seen Flam, I hope we see more of him soon." I can't wait to hear his opinions on well... EVERYTHING. Also, I really hope he brought "Pookie" along, I hope someone frightens the bajeezus out of Applejack or Big Mac by pointing out there's a chance they could have as a sister-in-law-in-law down the line, I hope Trixie asks if this will qualify her to perform at Apple Family Reunions!
Well, this in an interesting chapter.
Haha, wonderful chapter I love Applejack & Flim interactions and how she likes it when he calls her 'sweetheart'. It's obvious that she slowly starts to develop feelings for him. It's not love yet, but she definitely trusts him and cares about him. And the same goes to Flim, who is so gentle and understanding. I can't wait for Flim's conversation with Flam, it might be interesting
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Oh crap! I totally forgot to mention the Tvtropes page! I was really tired when I uploaded this The blog post will be up soon!
I loved it all it was a funny and sweet chapter it was a awesome read it just keeps getting better and better.And boy was it it awkward when Flam showed up and Flim you got some splainin to do
.I can't wait to see what happens next between them all and what happens next to them all.
Why can't Flim levitate himself to go see the ultrasound if he's not allowed to walk? He was able to levitate all that heavy farm equipment, so logically he should be able to levitate his own body!
And I guess its Rainbow Dash going to see the ultrasound with Applejack. Am I right?
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That... is a good point. However: keep in mind he lifted all the equipment before his injury. He wasn't able to bathe himself, and even sensing Flam's magic caused him pain. Also, the audience (and Applejack) still aren't 100% sure of his motives, so he could be trying to bail.
(That said, I'll definitely consider your comment for future chapters! )
YOU NEVER GO ASS TO MOUTH
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Mhmmm, just needs to make sure he's got two hours or so... and enough restraints, as well as a place to use them. Maybe he can truss her up like Rainbow Dash during one of her hospital stays...img3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20140121000100/mlp/images/a/a9/Rainbow_Dash_in_hospital_bed_S4E10.png
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Porn doesn't have to be realistic
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....but, yeah, I hear ya. Especially as a coprophobic. I write about a lot of things I wouldn't do IRL!
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Oh nooooo! That's the most painful position to be in while spanked!
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I never even thought about spanking!
... But I love the idea! It's been so long since we last saw Applejack get some rougher treatment, something the prequel established she thoroughly enjoys and I've been waiting to see again. Plus, from what I could find, spankings won't hurt the child if you don't go completely overboard—and Flim has shown repeatedly that he cares about them too much to create any danger of that happening^^
Oh... damn. This should be good. *grabs popcorn*
4786525 Self-levitation is usually shown to be incredibly hard for some reason, probably to explain the lack of flying unicorns. There's been plenty of times when Twilight could have benefited from it, but she never does. That said, do wheelchairs not exist in Equestria?