Applejack made a mistake a few months ago and has been carrying it around with her ever since. Literally.
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Love the story through and through, can't wait to see what the kid turns out to be like
If you do that of course
Yes indeed, "Go Granny!" xD
Something tells me the bit with Granny Smith was something that really happened to you once before...
Whats with the chair?
Gonna have to blame the outbursts at the table on Applejack, on this one. Flim's gone above and beyond to win her over already, and even with his sleazy antics vs. Big Mac, who's earned the ire just as much as Flim himself, it's so very clear he's trying his hardest to make things easier for Applejack. To tell the world she doesn't trust him and then to blow up over the 'sweetheart' thing... tsk. Reminds me of an ex of mine. I think Flim's more upset than he's letting on.
But I think I know what Granny's up to! It would make sense, given how she was hiding behind that napkin...
we shall see~
finally caught up with the story.
It's pretty good.
You sure do know how to write a good romantic comedy.
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I'm working on it!
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Unfortunately, yes.
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Heh! One of the things I love about writing stories one chunk at a time is doing things like that.
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Ooh, you've piqued my curiosity. What do you mean 'he's gone above and beyond'? And what do you think Granny's up to?
3955159 Well now... Would it make you feel better that my Mom (who is 50 going 51) Barely knows how to read? She knows what she means to say, but it comes out wrong, like hurted, or solded.
3955159 I just get the impression that he's doing his utmost to make her lot easier!
I think Granny may know who the mare in the photograph is.
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Oh, I thought you meant the part about her sex life. My grandmother went into that once, and I pretty much had Mac's reaction. Just NOPE'd right the hell outta there.
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Hm... interesting! We shall see
3967339 Oh that... Yeah she's done that to.
Go Applebloom! Break out the simple logic and talk some sense.
You had me tearing up at that. I wanted to stop reading right there and turn off my computer. I just didn't see any good way out.
Applebloom for President, 2016: It's time for reason to rule! (breaks into "Hail to the
CheifFilly)Mac is, IMO, being a bit too contradictory. Does he want them married or not? He is acting like this was not his idea, and it's being forced on him to accept it. Yes, I know the history, and I can imagine the hate, but if you're forcing marriage, it would seem you would be trying to make the best of the situation. I really am annoyed by him right now.
It seems to me, that Granny has seen through the charade, and has accepted the union already. Now AJ and Flim just need to discover their feelings for each other. Applebloom / Smith: 2016 Leadership We can Believe in!
Last thought, about AJ thinking Flim called her 'stupid' when he said she did something 'stupid'. Totally reminded me of something that happened to my sister at her High School. She said a Girl "dressed trampy"
Girl insisted my sister called her "a tramp". I see the difference, but others cannot. Sad really.
please tell me you're gonna finish this. it's just too good to leave un-finished.
Applebloom, why u hiding under table?
also good update can't wait to see the next one :D
I just love this story....read it so many times already...
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Of course I'm gonna finish it! This just won't let me go! But it's going to be pretty long, considering I want the baby to be born. (Some of the gestation will be skipped over, so no worries about enduring all of that, though)
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Wow, thank you! I'm so glad you like! And I'm glad I'm not the only one who re-reads things...
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*laughs* You posted that while I was away! But no worries, I'm back to writing now. Thanks for the concern
lol nice story! XD
i loved this chapter made me laugh hard. and i cant wait to see the next one! X3
and the chair thing makes me think someone is there listening!
Well Sue, Been a while since I took an opportunity to read your latest chapters and I must say, I f I hadn't uvf'd this piece before, I certainly would now, your talent for dialogue is thoroughly enjoyable, and I must admit I'm still grinning like the Cheshire cat over Granny Smith and
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I think this is one of my favorite renditions of the Apple Family social dynamic.
Just fan-apple-tastic.
I loved it all so much Granny Smith reminds me of my grandmother's.I how funny and sweet it was.I can't wait to see what happens next to them all.
Oh dear sweet baby Luna am I glad I am not as sick as I was yesterday, otherwise I would have just had a very, very bad accident
Best line in the whole story.