Applejack made a mistake a few months ago and has been carrying it around with her ever since. Literally.
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First! And Holy hell that was awesome.
Alright, nice addition. Nice to see Mac isn't totally heartless, but I think he's seen too much misfortune on behalf of his family. As much as he loathes Flim, I doubt he would have wanted to hurt AJ by just standing there watching Flim bleed out. Also, I think Flim is gonna have some heavy 'splaining to do to AJ when he comes 'round.
Good Job.
But... how will we survive two weeks without an update?
Oh, wait. We do that all the time.
I keed, I keed! Great chapter, and have fun with your family!
Well.. I certainly hope that Mac learned something from this. Particularly about trying to cripple another pony just because EARTHY PONY WAY RAWR.
It'd be like binding a pegasus' wings or chaining an earth pony's legs.
That was unexpected. Serves Flim right for being careless and petty, but holy shit.
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I hadn't even thought of that! It's going to be fun figuring out how he'll try to weasel his way out of it.
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Aw, there's more to it than that! I tried to convey it a bit in this chapter---he normally has no problem letting someone use magic on the farm, but making Flim do it manually (hoofually?) not only takes up more of his time (making him easier to keep track of), but tires him out as well. He's making a unique rule for him just to be petty, and because he can.
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Ehhh.. Okay, I can see that. Petty, definitely. And more than a little bit creepy.
In the "Flim wakes up in the middle of the night to see Big Mac watching him sleep and petting Smarty Pants" creepy way.
I can't help but think it was a good thing AJ was beside herself in grief and anger when Mac back, nevermind pregnant.
Because if she really thought he'd killed Flim and had the time to plan her attack just a little bit better, I think she might just break him, like a boy.
If either of her hindlegs catches him right he can just lie down next to Flim. No matter his size.
Like. A. Boy.
With that out of the way: I'm really getting some gayish vibes from Big&Red here and in the chapter before.
Phew, this one was exciting! Always happy to see Flim standing his ground against the Red Menace, but yikes, that wound.
What, I think I missed something; what's wrong with Mac that made him relate to flim bullied?
In a physical sense, I mean
That was... holy shit...
I think he's going to need a band-aid....
OMG that was crazy.thank goodness he remembered the cobwebs first aid.I can't wait to see see what between them all next and what happens next to them all.And how Big Mac saved Flim.
This was a great, serious dramatic chapter (although pre-vacation cliff-hangers are evil.) It's kind of a stretch of Big Mac to say that he saved Flim's life. Taking someone to the hospital after they injure themselves trying to defend themselves from your attack, an attack they have reason to believe would be deadly (Flim knows one good punch from Big Mac and he'd probably drop dead of internal bleeding) is basically the absolute bare minimum to avoid a manslaughter charge. Even so, I hold out hopes that the day will come when Flim "Oh Brother-in-law of mine." The shit is REALLY going to hit the fan when Flim figures out the only way he can really provide for his daughter and see her every day is if he uses Flimflam technology to increase production at Sweet Apple Acres.
On a side note: I love your Rainbow Dash. Throwing fruit at ponies, teaching kids about the Chupacabra, she's hilarious! I hope we see more of her.
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Creepy? Huh. Never thought of it that way.
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GAY VIBES?? Like what?
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In a physical sense? Nothing. But, in my headcanon, Mac has something wrong with him that's only been hinted at so far in this story (but explained in another.)
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Thank you!
oh crap! im actually worried about him now! D:
i hope hes ok! and this chapter took me by surprise but its still a great chapter! now im waiting to see if he will survive D: