Applejack made a mistake a few months ago and has been carrying it around with her ever since. Literally.
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i like it and Flim better not get another mare pregnant and does the baby filly have any of her mother in her
Love this story. The only thing that bugs me is the name of the foal. I keep reading "Herpes," and that is not cute at all
Did Fluttershy just curse?
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6525165 Who am I kidding. This is perfect.
Great chapter. I actually thought the foal was dead at first. Can't wait for the next one.
I thought I recalled twins...? No? Ok.
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No way is Flim getting anyone else pregnant! At least... (OMINOUS DOT DOT DOT) And Hesperides has a lot of AJ in her. Her coat colour is a muted hue of Mama's, and Flim already commented on how stubborn she is.
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IF YOU MAKE FANART YOU MUST TELL ME ASAP PLZ
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Fluttershy only curses when she gets REALLY flustered!
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No, Twilight teased her about having twins, but the ultrasound showed only one.
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Yay for Hesperides!
FUCK YOU!
how can you write that!? OMG i was litterally screaming! SCREAMING! and SOBBING! and then suddenly "crying" im like OH thank god!
i was sooo fucking worried!
im SO HAPPY NOW! you evil person you!
God damnit, Pinkie Pie.
This chapter was just like a seesaw: up, down, good things, bad things. I swear that my heart dropped to my feet when Hesperides wasn't breathing, but I'm glad she's ok now. Flim and Applejack seem to be on friendly terms again. Excellent. That picture underneath the author's note just about killed me with adorableness. Really good picture.
AWWWWW, she's so cute. 'must not cry, too much... I have to get a handkerchief'. I wonder why Applejack seemed so emotional about Hesperides having blue hair. Flim seems to have a very strong reaction to this situation.
I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter: will Flam and Trixie see the newborn foal? What will the rest of the Mane 6 do and say once they see that Flim's come back? (I can pretty much guess what Rainbow Dash's reaction would be) Will there be a wedding or two at the end of the story. Only time will tell.
I wonder if Connie will turn up in the next chapter? That would be awkward, especially if the twins decide to expose the 'secret' that Connie told them. Also I wonder, will we ever find out who Flim and Flam's father is? Connie might know.
Welcome home little Hes, The Golden Apple has arrived.
Good work Sue, and thanks, I don't think I need to exhort any more on this chapter, just looking over the comments there I think they've covered it all already.
Looking forward to the meet and greet to follow.
6525942 I think that rates as a 'Doozy' I'm pretty sure.
Oh, and here's the first thing that came to mind, a track by John Williams.
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This was quite a roller-coaster of a chapter. You really had me worried there that Hesp wouldn't make it out safely, or that Applejack would bleed out on the living room floor. Even now, they're not out of the woods yet, Hesp is still a preemie, and it sounds like Applejack had a lot of internal bleeding.
That scene with Flim and Applejack warming up the baby next to the fire, though.......
All my feels!
Anyway, I really appreciate you confirming things with that line about Flim hearing the voice of his mother. Interesting that despite everything, he now thinks of Connie as his mother.
I am definitely looking forward to Discord's explanation for his actions here. "True love" and "baby needs a father" are going to be difficult to hold up against the dangers and problems of a premature birth.
OMG this chapter had my heart all over the plase ,So much so that it literaly hurts im like this .I can't wait to see whats next.And that pic is adorable. Im still mad at Discord thowhe is going to get what he deserves sooner or later.Pinkie had me cracking up all throw her part.
6525811 I know how to pronounce it, but since I'm a fast reader, my eye flies right by her name and my brain doesn't feel like slowing down to read her name out. Even knowing this, my brain still reads it as 'Herpes'
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Wow, that's the most visceral reaction yet! Hooray!
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Interesting take! I might delve into it, or leave it up for interpretation.
There will be a "meet the baby" scene for sure. What do you think Rainbow's reaction to Flim would be?
I'd like that to come up later, but maybe not in this story...
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I was wondering if anyone would mention that here! Flim, being so overwhelmed, might not even have noticed himself that he thought of her that way. That said, he's been longing for a mother his whole life, and the birth of his own child might have helped him with his anger.
I'm thinking of having a "pick Discord's punishment" contest like I did for the baby's name Although I have a few ideas already.
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Oh, I see what you mean! I do that too, sometimes skipping over a word so fast it gives a whole new meaning to the sentence. You may have inspired an unfortunate nickname for the baby a few years down the road!
6528196 Oops, didn't mean to give her an unfortunate nickname Yeah the fast reading thing comes at a small price I suppose I've done it too many times to count!
6528196 To answer your question, we all know that Rainbow Dash can be a little hot-headed and reckless, even at the best of times. I think her reaction might be to yell 'YOU!!' ... very loud, and lunge at Flim with her hooves clenched. Her friends would probably restrain her though. Rainbow's the Element of Loyalty and would try to protect her friends from any danger.
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yeah!
i cant wait to see what happens next!
god how many more times will i be saying that!? XD
First time I was worried about a oc pony. I'm usually good at guessing what about to happen but here I could not. So when the foal started to cry I almost got a little teary. So i guess you doing something right.
And that part about the ambulance is true. I work on one and I seen alot of idiots on the road.
Keep up the good work.
WAAA HOO HO HOOOO!!!!! CONGRATS TO FLIM!!
It's things like this that make me consider becoming a father when the time comes... Then I remember I'm terrible with kids.
Great story so far, a bit miffed that Flim wasn't there for AJ for her last trimester, he missed out on a lot of bonding time. There is one thing that bugs me a lot thou, there is too many gay ponies. What I mean is, depending on the survey you look at, should have about 1 to 2 percent gay to strait ratio. But in Equestria the percent seems really skewed. In Ponyville alone I would think the small town wouldn't have more than 3 to 5 hundred ponies living in or around which means there should be only about 3 to 5 gay ponies living in Ponyville, and yet in the main 6, you have 2 as gay, 1 as bi curious and two strait, if you count Twilight as strait, then the percent would be 33 percent gay in that group alone. I don't mind there being gay ponies, I just think the numbers need to be more rational
If you argue that maybe Equestria just has a higher gay ratio just because of reasons. Then their birth rate won't be high enough to keep their population going. And if you argue that you just need 1 stallion to breed many mares, then it goes against the message in the beginning of this story when everyone looked down on AJ for being unwed.
So I'll just finish by saying I love the story so far and I am ecstatic that AJ and Flim have their baby foal now, and I am hoping that they can reconcile and fall in love and get married, that is another thing I have noticed in this story. There in not a lot in a way of happy family's, so I'm hoping that there is going to be at least one. Good Story keep up the good work.
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Yes, he did---but that was because of an awful fight.
Actually in this story, Rainbow Dash is the only gay member of the Mane Six. Pinkie is polysexual, and Rarity and Fluttershy are implied to be straight. Twilight has had a relationship with a mare, but she identifies as straight. AJ isn't bi-curious; she's pretty adamantly straight. That would make one gay, one queer, and four straight. That said, it isn't unusual for a group of friends to have a higher queer-to-straight ratio, since queer people tend to make friends with each other.
So let's say Ponyville is a town of several hundred. Correct me if I'm wrong, but the queer ponies mentioned so far have been
*Flim (not from Ponyville)
*Soarin' (not from Ponyville)
*Rainbow
*Pinkie
*Pinkie's marefriend
*Pokey
*Scootaloo's mothers
*Flim's ex-coltfriend (not from Ponyville)
*Applejack's ex-coltfriend
*Berry
*Berry's wife
*The mare Trixie slept with (not from Ponyville)
*Twilight's ex-marefriend (not from Ponyville)
That makes nine queer ponies in a town of several hundred. If Ponyville has 300 ponies, and only nine residents have been identified as queer, that's three percent. That's not unrealistic. That said, there are towns that are known for having larger-than-average queer populations (i.e., San Fransisco), and in this story Rainbow called Ponyville a 'Muff Mecca', indicating that it's known for having a higher-than-average number of fillyfoolers (and, subsequently, more queer ponies in general).
Sorry, but that doesn't hold water. Homosexuality does not cause infertility.
Two married mares can use a sperm bank to conceive a child within the bonds of marriage, which would therefore be seen as acceptable. Two married stallions could hire a surrogate or adopt a child, again, both being seen as acceptable. Also, it's possible that two mares or two stallions can have their own biological child together if one of them is trans and still fertile. AJ got drunk, had a one-night stand with someone the town despised, and got knocked up---that's why she got flak.
Thank ya kindly
Sorry, when I said bi curious I was meaning Twilight not AJ. And I thought Pinky was gay, never heard of polysexual
And the list you gave, is just the named gay ones, I assume that there are others that Rainbow is dating outside that named group so I would think the percentage is bit higher, like 4 or 5 percent, but I grant you that you covered that base by calling Ponyville the muff capital so I will just assume that the percentage is higher there than other places.
I am just nit picking, to me it felt a little crowded. Sorry if I offended you.
You did a wonderful job with the history of the characters. You made a nice background for Tixie that shows how scarred she is, and made us readers understand why she is the way she is. And with the flim flam brothers background, that made them turn out the way they did. Nice job on that.
I am one of those readers who looks at the Character interaction and growth with each other, I skimmed over most of the sex stuff for I am more interested in the romance and bonding of the characters. And you floored me with the intense parts. Like the sickle accident, OMG you had me glued. And during this chapter, when he was telling his daughter to breath, you practically had me crying. This chapter is grade A intense. I was there for the birth of my son and you captured the moment quite well.
If you haven't read "An Honest Life" by Bluegrass Brooke, then I recommend you do. It is also about a AJ and Flim. Bluegrass focused on their emotional growth and had very tender bonding moments. But Bluegrass doesn't hold a candle to the intensity, and raw emotion you added to your story.
Sorry for babbling. Thanks again
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No no, you didn't offend me at all! I just wanted to address your points, that's all. Stats on gay/queer people vary quite a bit, and the lines get blurry when you consider people who identify as straight and yet have same-sex relations. Oh, and polysexual refers to people who are attracted to many genders, but not all. (Attraction to all genders is either bi or pansexual, depending on who you ask.)
Thanks so much for the comments! They really mean a lot to me. And I hope your son is doing well.
I do have one more question. If Discord didn't have Flim come back to AJ, would she still have foaled early? For it seems that Flim coming out there is what caused the situation in the first place, and If he had stayed away, she would have been fine. Unless no matter what the foal was coming and Flim was needed to save her. If this question is going to be covered in latter chapters then just say that its covered. Thanks
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It will probably be covered, but right now Discord's in a lot of trouble once the Princesses find out. We'll see how he tries to weasel his way out of it!
I had a little trouble reading the comments below the story.
Mainly because I was tearing up at the end of the chapter.
That's actually hard to to do. A lot harder than making me laugh or angry. For all my time on this site and hundreds of stories I read, I think that happened about... three times before. Congrats.
In the picture, the foal that Flim is carrying looks like Indigo Zap to me.
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A few people on Derpibooru said the same thing. I designed the look for the foal before I saw the movie, and then I was sad At least the styles of their manes are different, and the colours aren't exactly the same. Oh well, what can you do?