Applejack made a mistake a few months ago and has been carrying it around with her ever since. Literally.
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Yay, sequel!
LOL!
So, wait, Flim is bisexual? Ha! Brilliant.
This is starting out great! Can we hope for somewhat steady updates?
Oh, Big Mac... Old-fashioned is as old-fashioned does.
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Of course! I already have most of the clop written I'll do my best to keep the updates regular... no more year-long lag, I promise!
Can't wait to sink my teeth into this. You hid your writing ability well over the years.
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I have recommended this to all my horse words hipster buddies as a perfect example of a story with clop, but not a pure clopfic, as it has so much more to it. Please keep up the great work!
You want a good one I came up with? Here:
GOD-DAMN-MOTHER-FUCKING-SON-OF-A-BITCH-ASS-FAG
Trademarked by me. Came up with it when a massive glitch ended a speed run I was doing in a game.
Oh. As for the story, good start.
but really, funny stuff. loved the original, and this one is already looking like it'll be even better. can't wait for more.
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Wow, thank you so much!
Loved Two-Step, and looking forward to the rest of this one!
Well things escalated quickly. Damn, I didn't think a story could get better but it did
And whoa, Flim is bi? That came out of nowhere, though I guess I could see him as a "so hot even the guys want him" type of person. For some reason in your original story, first chap, I kept getting the impression that Flam was the gay one, even though Flim did say he was sulking because he had no lady. Anywho, interesting Big Mac didn't seem to care Flim was bi, I guess he isn't as conservative as I thought. That Pegasus was pure comedy gold! haha nice job Flim picking the 13th floor for your little fuck session, how the mighty have fallen; what you found attractive in that pegasus is beyond me considering you seemed to find him annoying. oh well *shrug*
Still no Flam... I'm really wondering what your take on him is. Oh my god, what if Flam's a virgin!? I would laugh so hard if that ends up being true later on. Off to a great start and I can't wait for the later chapters!
Two words: SHOTGUN. WEDDING.
Thank you for continuing this story.
Why did I receive no notification?
Anyway, this looks like a good one!
Can't wait for more!
~Skeeter The Lurker
SEQUEL!!! Now this is what I want to see. Insults running through the town, shotguns being used for weddings (Though I think that Big Mac could just use his own hooves in its place), and YOU HAD BETTER EXPLORE HOW FLIM FEELS ABOUT THIS!!!
Okay, first, who the hell is that Pegasus? Flim isn't gay, so what is he doing there?
And where is Flam?
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Maybe. Or maybe he was just too angry to care by that point.
Well, he probably had his mouth full most of the time they spent together. I'm sorry, I had to say it. And I'm a little surprised no one's tried guessing as to who he is...
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Hee hee. You're asking all the right questions.
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3444708 DARN YOU!!!
3444574 Surprised nobody has guessed who he is? Wait... didn't Flim say the Wonderbolts were staying in the same hotel?
... Oh no...
HELL no.
HELL F*****G NO.
HEAD CANON ERROR!! SOARIN IS NOT GAY!!!
Soarin is straight! He either has the hots for Spitfire or Rainbow Dash (and sometimes Applejack, but that's not happening here)! Having him be gay is like pairing Vinyl Scratch with somebody other than Octavia! Or worse, making Vinyl or Octavia STRAIGHT! It just doesn't happen!! AAAAAAAUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!
Aww, hell with it. It's still a good story. I'm STILL reading this!
3444574 I'll take your word for it. I kinda pondered that reason, but wasn't too sure.
wait wha- oh. Why does it take so long for me to get innuendos Unless, it wasn't an innuendo and 'face full' meant full of something other than innuendo (prob not). As for the pegasus, I didn't really think who he was mattered, but now that you mention it... my first thought was, and still is, that it's Soarin'. I don't know why, that's just the first place my mind jumped, you said he was blue right, and that the Wonderbolts were in town?... and he is portrayed in the fandom as kind of stupid and gay... am I right, or do I have to wait and see?
3444756 I think you and I just had the same epiphany.
but actually, Soarin' is gay a lot of times in the fandom. like a lot a lot.
and what's wrong with making Octy and Vinyl straight? I prefer them strait. in fact I go by the canon that they don't even know each other at all
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I like to ship Soarin with Rainbow Dash, myself.
How can an Earth pony use a gun if they don't have fingers?
I loved it all I how close the Apple sisters are and I hate that bitch for what she said about AJ fuck you Silver Spoon.And the part with Big Mac was Ridiculously funny.I can't wait to see what happens next to them all.
Ok can we make it clear that if someone has the reaction of "I will murder you in cold blood because you had consenting sex with my sister which resulted in pregnancy" they belong in a fucking mental institution? seriously thats fucked up, cause your name is Mr fucking silent.
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I'm pretty sure it was an attempt to secure him as Applejack's brood slave, not to kill him. Totally normal.
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It's considered taboo by most to have a child before you get married. It's commonly depicted that in old fashion families, these cases are handled by the family of the mother using a shotgun to "convince" the father to take responsibility for it. This is where we get the term "Shotgun Wedding" from.