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I like that it is an unknown story, like everything starts out very mysterious, lots of questions

Thanks, I'm doing my best to my ability. Even if I'm ignored by over ten editors trying to get a damn person that could just point out spelling errors or give just a bit of advice... I'm just a bit crazed by the fact that I've had no replies from 12 other edditors. Hell, the only one to reply back was the first person I contacted. "DE_K" said that he would, but then dropped quicker on me then the stack market in the late 20's. That why I haven't updated recently.

The only thing I dislike is that the character does not speak with more articulation as represented in the game series for elites, but I understand that this wouldn't work with the type of set up and plot you have outlined so far

I try my best and thanks for giving a damn of how hard it is to be a writer. I'm probably just stressed with life for the most part. Anyway, hope I'll bring new chapters in soon enough to not forget about me.

2200327 I like that it is an unknown story, like everything starts out very mysterious, lots of questions
The only thing I dislike is that the character does not speak with more articulation as represented in the game series for elites, but I understand that this wouldn't work with the type of set up and plot you have outlined so far

Thanks for faving Sentient Difference. What do you like/dislike about it?

1843195 no problem, I am really enjoying this one, one of the few from here that has been truly thought provoking. keep up the good work!

Thanks for adding "The Iron Horse" to your list of favorites! I hope you will continue to enjoy the story!